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And his request is a pretty simple one, and I'll likely have it finished by tonight, even with the homework I have. It also gives me something to do instead of homework. XD
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And his request is a pretty simple one, and I'll likely have it finished by tonight, even with the homework I have. It also gives me something to do instead of homework. XD
Yeah, I only remembered how to fix that problem when I tested the image out in GIMP and noticed (replace).
Lol, I was about to send you a PM for a request but I no longer need it unfortunately :(
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It's a little hard to see though, because you didn't give me any details.
Seriously, it's just a blank image. XD
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Though I did edit my post a few seconds later as I wasn't sure whether you could do my request as I only have the base sprites of his individual poses and not the blinking and talking frames :P
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You can also just give me the bases with the blinking eyes and mouth separate, and I can just paste them on as I animate them, no problem. I'm pretty flexible.
I'm already almost finished with Sonic's animations though. Easier than I thought. XD
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Desperate? Thanks for making me sound like a wimp, pal. :p
And you did say I could use that "favor."
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And turned her into this
(right click image and select "view image" for best view)
I think it's pretty clear where the inspiration came from:
Okay, maybe I do have a bit of a crush on Keiko, but that's not the point.
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Would you do the same thing with normal Lisa? Would be awesome.
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Here it is, next to the red version.
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I do admit I'm doing a lot with that red lisa of mine. Maybe I should find someone else to use...
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Franny wants a swiss roll. XD
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This was made from her crying animation, right? The colors on the lower half of her torso are darkened from the shadow of her arms... Since her arms are no longer there, you should make the colors match her other sprites. She's at a slight angle in most of her sprites, but a shift this small wouldn't create that much shade.
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Plus, her coat was in shadow even above where her arms were, so I didn't try to add more light to it. I also imagine her leaning forward slightly too, although I wasn't able to figure out a good way to do that.
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'Practice' is not the key word here, and it's quite silly of you to use that as an excuse. The key word is 'anatomy'.It's not actually that hard. Actually, you could've used your Lisa sprite as a reference to how redraw Franziska's body.
Anyway... Since she's holding her hands in the back, her chest should be pushed more to the front and her breasts shouldn't be squeezed together like that. Also, the innermost parts of the leg o'mutton sleeves shouldn't be visible, as she'd be covering them with her chest.
Here's a picture, I hope it will be easier to understand what I'm talking about.
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When I did Lisa, the part I had to redraw was fairly small in comparison, which is why that one turned out better. For some reason, I thought Franziska's hips were a lot lower. I guess I'll go give Franny another try. I'll be back.
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I haven't animated it yet, because I think I'll wait until I get some more feedback on this one first. That way, I won't have to animate it over and over again with new versions of the sprite. >__<
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Where her arms go behind her back could also stand to be shaded more.
...How many times would I have to refresh to see all of the sprites in your signature?
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Oh, and to add to what Chesu said, make her waist a little slimmer and the hips rounder. The shape should be more 'hourglass' and less 'keyhole' and it will be nice ;3 I'd fix it for you, but I'm supposed to be doing my homework, haha. (argh, what happened to the sweatdropping Phoenix emote? D: I can't find it anywhere)
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*cough*pagesix*cough*
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And instead of pasting it into paint to view it, you can right click it and select "view image", which will take you to a page with a white background with the image. ^_^
I'm also technically IN school right now, but since I'm homeschooled, I can spent it all in front of my computer. As long as my work gets done, my Mom doesn't care what I do.
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Lucky! :D I had some days off recently, as the head-master excused me from the classes, since I was preparing a contest, but now that it's over I have a whole lot to catch up on...a surprising amount of tests and exams included.
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And this is probably going to be the final version, since the more I mess with her hips, the wonkier it looked. Plus, I've been screwing around with this sprite pretty much all morning, so I kindasorta just want to get it done...
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Okay, I am now considering this sprite completed. Feel free to continue critiquing it as you will, just keep in mind that I'm probably not going to do much of anything with that sprite anymore. >__<
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Okay, I am now considering this sprite completed. Feel free to continue critiquing it as you will, just keep in mind that I'm probably not going to do much of anything with that sprite anymore. >__<
Her ribbon/cravat thing and boobs need to bounce too.
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But the authorities of my household are telling me to "Get off the damn computer and go to bed!" so that'll have to wait until tomorrow...
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Things that need movement are:
- the hair on her forehead
- cravat thing
Other than that: Pretty bouncy ^^
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Give me some more time on that.
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Of course, that's only if I don't explode from cuteness overload first. >w<
But the authorities of my household are telling me to "Get off the damn computer and go to bed!" so that'll have to wait until tomorrow...
this one needs spoiler tag too.
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I'm not quite sure what my next project is going to be, but It'll probably be something I won't need to have spoiler tags all over when I post it. >__<
I may go and revisit my previous Franziska animation, and try to add more bounce to that one, but probably only if enough people tell me that I should.
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I think I'd go back and fix the older Franzy a little; she doesn't need many changes at this point and it would make the sprite look much better. To be more precise, you could make her cravat and breasts bounce slightly; it doesn't make much sense for them to stay still. Just... don't overdo the breasts.
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They'll probably only move one pixel, like my other Franny's cravat. Noticeable, but not extreme.
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The cravat gave me a lot of trouble. >__<
Anyway, I'm sprited out for today, plus my old computer is at it's limit with all of the applications I've had to have running.
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