BSX's Attempts at Sprites (UPDATE: Busty Rhoda)

Mon Aug 03, 2009 11:15 am

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Ok, so I decided that I'd give spriting a go. I have only one sprite so far, but I plan on making more.

OCs (I'll make a banner or something for this later):

Spoiler: Icarus Akkital (Sprite Sheet will be made eventually)

Spoiler: Bizzaro Trite: Insane Attorney (Concept)

Spoiler: Young Icarus (18)

Spoiler: Neil Greenhorn

Spoiler: Judge Awesome

Edits:

Spoiler: Busty Rhoda

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Last edited by BSX on Sun Mar 21, 2010 7:38 pm, edited 17 times in total.

Re: BSX's (Lame) Attempt(s) At Spriting

Mon Aug 03, 2009 11:31 am

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Thatsa notso bad!

The Godot hair works with Nick's head (if thats the combination you used) apart from a slight..shading thing where its outta sync but either way I think the head works, the body on the other hand I'm not sure of, its kinda like he has no neck, but I do love that outfit. :garyuu:

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Re: BSX's (Lame) Attempt(s) At Spriting

Mon Aug 03, 2009 11:35 am

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Ah right. Well, it's a mixture of Nick and Godot's hair, but Polly's head. I'll need to work on the neck.

I thought he had to mcuh neck there, because of the bit under the ear. I'll try and fix it for his next sprite.

Thanks for the comment and crit!

Update: Bizzaro.

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Re: BSX's (Lame) Attempt(s) At Spriting (UPDATE: Bizzaro)

Thu Aug 06, 2009 10:44 am

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not bad! i really liked the first one xD

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Re: BSX's (Lame) Attempt(s) At Spriting (UPDATE: Bizzaro)

Thu Aug 06, 2009 10:55 am

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Does Bizarro have fangs? Looks like something coming out the bottom og his mouth.

And what did you use for the hairstyle? It's something unusual.

:garyuu:

It could work but I don't think it suits Edgeworth's face.

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Re: BSX's (Lame) Attempt(s) At Spriting (UPDATE: Bizzaro)

Thu Aug 06, 2009 5:33 pm

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Herr Blondie wrote:

Does Bizarro have fangs? Looks like something coming out the bottom og his mouth.

And what did you use for the hairstyle? It's something unusual.

:garyuu:

It could work but I don't think it suits Edgeworth's face.

Oh, hat must have been the transparency gone wrong again.

I used Manfred Von Karma for the hair.

Also, working on young Iccy for Percei's contest. After that, I'll work on fixing Iccy's neck problem and make other poses.

EDIT: Young Iccy complete! An obvious Frankenstein, but I customed a bit of it. Guess what bit. And yes, he's tall for 17.

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Re: BSX's (Lame) Attempt(s) At Spriting (UPDATE: Y Icarus)

Sun Aug 09, 2009 9:26 am

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These aren't bad, actually! Good job! (I don't even have any sprites, so you're doing better than me!)

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Sun Aug 09, 2009 10:30 am

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Also, I know that Young Iccy's hair is longer, but he didn't comb back then.

And he shrunk in 4 years. Certainly.

Thanks for the comment ILPWXD.

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Re: BSX's (Lame) Attempt(s) At Spriting (UPDATE: Y Icarus)

Sun Aug 09, 2009 7:47 pm

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Regarding Icarus: Apollo's head definatly doesn't look good on Edgey's body. I think Diego's hair would look good on him if you tidied it up a wee bit.
Regarding Bizzaro: Fix the transparency, colour and the hair (a wee bit) and it'll look fine.
Regarding young Icarus: Looks fat. Sorry.

Re: BSX's (Lame) Attempt(s) At Spriting (UPDATE: Y Icarus)

Sun Aug 09, 2009 8:40 pm

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Spoiler: Neil Greenhorn

And thanks for the crit, Skuly.

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Sun Aug 09, 2009 8:43 pm

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Blade Satoshi X wrote:

Spoiler: Neil Greenhorn

And thanks for the crit, Skuly.

Head seems a bit ummm shrunken on that body

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Re: BSX's (Lame) Attempt(s) At Spriting (UPDATE: Neil Greenhorn)

Sun Aug 09, 2009 8:48 pm

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It's better than the other heads I tried to use.

Any tips on how to fix it?

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Sun Aug 09, 2009 8:51 pm

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Blade Satoshi X wrote:

It's better than the other heads I tried to use.

Any tips on how to fix it?

Sorry Pal I can't sprite for the life of me :gymshoe:

If I could masterpieces could be made.

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Sun Aug 09, 2009 11:53 pm

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Blade Satoshi X wrote:

Spoiler: Neil Greenhorn

And thanks for the crit, Skuly.

I think... The hair either needs to be taller, or the head bigger. :oops:

Beside that, nice work on the other sprites up there! 'Specially the young Icarus. :godot:

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Re: BSX's (Lame) Attempt(s) At Spriting (UPDATE: Neil Greenhorn)

Mon Aug 10, 2009 5:54 am

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The hair overall needs to be higher. He needs more forehead and more... brain room. Try making the hairline more curved, too. The headsize isn't really a problem, he has about the same proportions as Gumshoe. Wocky's head is huge. XD If you wanted the proportions younger, just pull in the shoulders.

Also, his hair is kinda a textbook example of pillow shading. Don't just trace the edges when you shade, try big, blocky shadows! Shade the sides of his head and maybe towards the roots. It'll have so much more depth.

Re: BSX's (Lame) Attempt(s) At Spriting (UPDATE: Neil Greenhorn)

Fri Aug 21, 2009 8:07 pm

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Thanks guys.

Right, I'll work on that. Greenhorn version 2'll be my next sprite.

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Re: BSX's (Lame) Attempt(s) At Spriting (UPDATE: Neil Greenhorn)

Sun Feb 07, 2010 2:01 pm

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Sorry for the double post but I edited the hair.

Spoiler: Neil V. 2.0

EDIT: Finished Judge Awesome. Took me forever to get his hair ho I wnated it, and it's still not perfect. I tried to use a tut for the shading, but it did have nothing on hair, so if I've mucked up, sorry. Tell me if I need to do it again, and I will.

Spoiler: Judge Awesome

And only reason I'm not making another post is because I dunno why I should. Oh, and working on Bizarro V.2.

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Wed Feb 10, 2010 9:08 pm

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He's funny. XD

Re: BSX's (Lame) Attempt(s) At Spriting (UPDATE: Judge Awesome)

Tue Feb 16, 2010 8:10 pm

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Here's Bizzaro V.2.

Spoiler: Bizzaro V.2.

I quite like what I did with the hair shading; mainly because it took ages to figure out how to do it without making it uber horrible.

EDIT: Animated Bizzaro. If you think he's blinking too qucikly, please say.

Spoiler: Bizzaro Blinking

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Sun Feb 28, 2010 3:31 pm

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Bizarro's a good clean sprite, but he seems to be missing a neck. Whether that's just the high collar or not, I don't know but it makes the sprite seem a little out of proportion. You could maybe stand to add a few extra details to distinguish him a bit more from Edgey, but apart from that, I really like it <3

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Tue Mar 16, 2010 8:00 pm

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Judge Awesome's hair :gant-jazz:

Click above... please?

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Sat Mar 20, 2010 9:42 pm

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Here's a busty Rhoda:

Spoiler: Busty Rhoda

I'm attempting a front one, but it's not so easy.

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Sat Mar 20, 2010 9:47 pm

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Oooh, I like. I like that a lot~

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Sat Mar 20, 2010 9:52 pm

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BSX wrote:

Here's a busty Rhoda:

Spoiler: Busty Rhoda

I'm attempting a front one, but it's not so easy.

Is it just me, or does the head look like it's too big and just about to fall off?

Oh, it's probably me... :payne:

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Sat Mar 20, 2010 10:20 pm

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adart wrote:

BSX wrote:

Here's a busty Rhoda:

Spoiler: Busty Rhoda

I'm attempting a front one, but it's not so easy.

Is it just me, or does the head look like it's too big and just about to fall off?

Oh, it's probably me... :payne:

I see it a wee bit too. I'll fix that.

Here's the front version. But I've messed the hand up. It was hard to do, ok? I'll try and fix it later...

Spoiler: Busty Rhoda Front

EDIT:
Fixed the hand and shaded the right boob:

Spoiler: Busty!Rhoda with good hand and a Shaded Boob

I wonder if I should do an NSFW version..

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Sun Apr 04, 2010 5:47 am

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BSX wrote:

adart wrote:

BSX wrote:

Here's a busty Rhoda:

Spoiler: Busty Rhoda

I'm attempting a front one, but it's not so easy.

Is it just me, or does the head look like it's too big and just about to fall off?

Oh, it's probably me... :payne:

I see it a wee bit too. I'll fix that.

Here's the front version. But I've messed the hand up. It was hard to do, ok? I'll try and fix it later...

Spoiler: Busty Rhoda Front

EDIT:
Fixed the hand and shaded the right boob:

Spoiler: Busty!Rhoda with good hand and a Shaded Boob

I wonder if I should do an NSFW version..

I love the new edit ;) Nice work!

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Sun Apr 04, 2010 1:48 pm

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Rhoda dosen't seem too fond of flashing her chest.

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Sun Apr 04, 2010 3:13 pm

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¢ħłөвø $ħөЌª wrote:

Rhoda dosen't seem too fond of flashing her chest.

She's a prim proper woman, got a right to be embarrassed.

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