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Re: Icer's Fanfics: ON BROKEN WINGS -2-4 Bad End AU 27 Mar chap2Topic%20Title
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Ahhh, I love this fic so much! I find that I enjoy fics from Maya's point of view the most, and this certainly delivers a very interesting perspective...
It's a good point you have there - perhaps this 'bad end' turned out better for Nick than in canon, because this way
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he's not a lawyer but he's respected and with Maya by the end.


I love those metaphors you added.
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Re: Icer's Fanfics: ON BROKEN WINGS -2-4 Bad End AU 27 Mar chap2Topic%20Title
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I'ma liking the fic still.....

Though...highly concerned about what Godot did once Mia was summoned :yuusaku:
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Re: Icer's Fanfics: ON BROKEN WINGS - 2-4 Bad End AU 3 Apr chap3Topic%20Title
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CHAPTER 3 POSTED! Please read.
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Yeah, this is one of the reasons I don't like the ship Godot/Maya, I really don't think it would work out in a good way due to the Mia issue and likely dynamic. Phoenix doesn't think of Maya as a child. Godot clearly does in GS3, even at 19. [For example, he laments not telling Phoenix about the plot at the end. Why not Maya???] And come on, he was so obsessed with Mia, and if she's channelled again every day…

Now assuming this is how Godot really did see the Mia - Phoenix - Maya arrangement, [Phoenix/Miya] his hatred of Trite makes a lot more sense, so in the AU at least, he does, having experienced Maya's own 'legal assistance' firsthand.

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NYAAA!!
Godot did have necro-sex with Mia!Maya :beef:

Other than that shock it's going great.
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Pierre wrote:
NYAAA!!
Godot did have necro-sex with Mia!Maya :beef:

Other than that shock it's going great.


Well, no...
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he didn't get to 'cause Maya didn't sign the contract.

Thanks for reading :shoe:
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icer wrote:
Pierre wrote:
NYAAA!!
Godot did have necro-sex with Mia!Maya :beef:

Other than that shock it's going great.


Well, no...
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he didn't get to 'cause Maya didn't sign the contract.

Thanks for reading :shoe:


There were times before the contract though....but yes it's quite good.

Nothing wrong with a big of Miego in my eyes I'm just hoping the plot won't get terribly romantic now Nick is involved.
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Pierre wrote:
There were times before the contract though....but yes it's quite good.

Nothing wrong with a big of Miego in my eyes I'm just hoping the plot won't get terribly romantic now Nick is involved.

It's my story, so I know what happened :)
But I guess if you WANT to imagine otherwise, you can... I don't want to heap more trauma on Maya, in my head...

No, this isn't a romance fic, so there won't be 'romance'. Though marketing it as a P/M probably would have got me far more readers. It's about the same as the actual 2-4.
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icer wrote:
Pierre wrote:
There were times before the contract though....but yes it's quite good.

Nothing wrong with a big of Miego in my eyes I'm just hoping the plot won't get terribly romantic now Nick is involved.

It's my story, so I know what happened :)
But I guess if you WANT to imagine otherwise, you can... I don't want to heap more trauma on Maya, in my head...

No, this isn't a romance fic, so there won't be 'romance'. Though marketing it as a P/M probably would have got me far more readers. It's about the same as the actual 2-4.


Twilight has lots of readers, I wouldn't call it good. XD

Still yes it's a good idea, the bad-end was much more dramatic anyway.
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Pierre wrote:

Twilight has lots of readers, I wouldn't call it good. XD

Still yes it's a good idea, the bad-end was much more dramatic anyway.

Twilight reminds me more of P/I than P/M :-P But thanks again for reading.
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Twilight is clearly a Franziska x Iris crack ship.

Well done thus far and all that. I'm certainly pleased that you're not shoehorning romance in unnecessarily especially given how PxM and Miego fluff fics are a dime a dozen in this fandom :yuusaku:
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Thanks for the comments everyone!

ON BROKEN WINGS: CHAPTER 4 posted!

Spoiler: Chapter 4 notes:
Phoenix's monk robe is a more masculine version of that black outer cloak Misty wears, and it too has a hood (not those demon warding hoods.) It's probably solid black, without those white strips, and whatever he wears underneath is black also.

As for Elise's book, 'The Magic Bottle', I'm convinced it was probably an in-game ref to some variant of the fatal 'bottle fairytale' Dahlia brainwashed Phoenix and Terry with. So the book itself traumatises Phoenix on two levels - it reminds him of the Dahlia nightmare/betrayal; AND of his lost relationship with Maya, which was the closest thing he had in reality to that kind of reciprocal trust relationship he desired in the impossible bottle fairytale.

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ON BROKEN WINGS - CHAPTER 5 POSTED!
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ON BROKEN WINGS - CHAPTER 5 POSTED!

(yeah I am double-triple posting in my own thread. This thing will hit the post char limit so i'll have to move it out of the first post eventually....)
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Man, this is getting so exciting. now I want to know what Godot's going to do to Phoenix. The poor guy!
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Thanks so much for the comments! Have another chapter.

On Broken Wings - CHAPTER 6

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Since it’s an AU, Hazakurain’s spirit channelling training complex is marginally different than in 3-5. The negative publicity Kurain got over State vs Engarde led to more people going to Hazakurain instead, so they upgraded.

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Murder trial time, yay.

On Broken Wings - CHAPTER 7

It's a long chapter! And uncovering a plot via a court trial is more difficult than it might appear. Particularly when our protagonists can't expose the truth in their usual methods of cross examinations and investigations and the people who do have these methods have their own agendas.
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It's On Broken Wings - CHAPTER 8!!!
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On Broken Wings - CHAPTER 9!!!

Spoiler: notes:
Why did Iris and Pearl 'Iris' Dahlia get to switch?

Von Karma let Sister Iris go. Later, after she'd investigated the case further, [and 'Iris' had presented herself] she decided it would be best to have her on-hand, and took her into police custody. Witnesses aren't given the same security as criminal suspects.

Slightly short, boring chapter, but we don't want plotholes and whatever...

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On Broken Wings - IS UP TO CHAPTER 12!!!
Isn't this... exciting :sparkly-maggey:
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On Broken Wings CHAPTER 14 posted!!!
Which means it's the end. :gant:
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Yay! :keiko: Congrats on a great fic completed!
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Posted Introduction/Prologue of my new fic, please give me feedbacks.

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