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I'm not exactly sure if this is where this goes... but whatever.

I was in the process of making my sprite comic Apollo Justice: Witness the Truth when I thought that it might be fun to make fake Box Art for the "Game". So, now, two days later I've finally finished.

Spoiler: Witness that Truth!(Both Versions for Comparison)
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Normally I think this would go in Present Evidence since it is (Mostly) A Modification of official Art. What I really want to show off is the picture of My OC Prosecutor Madison Themis which I made for the box art, so I thought I'd post here to see if I could get some feedback. This is my first time drawing in Phoenix Wright Style, so any suggestions would be helpful.

Spoiler: VERY Enlarged Versions
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Looks good.
Thats all i can say. Sorry. :edgy:
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The subtitle...actually works!
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OniXera wrote:
The subtitle...actually works!


Thanks! I worked really hard to find something that both made sense and had a courtroom pun in it. I'm glad you like it. (I always thought it turned out a bit corny myself. :sadshoe: But maybe that's just inevitable with this sort of thing. :yuusaku: )





...unless you were talking about the editing... in which case, yeah, I did a bit of studying of the previous case art to get it right. (The Outline is still a bit dark... )
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i like it :edgy:
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This may sound stupid (I'm new to constructive crit) but Madison's colours are a bit bright. If you look at all the shading and colours used on the canonical haracters on your box art, you'll see that their shading is actually relatively dark, while her's are a bit brighter, and stand out in comparison (or to me they do) because of that.

But otherwise, you caught the style very well, and it's incredibly well made.
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Style's spot on, but I agree with BSX, it's a bit bright. And I love the subtitle! this is obnoxious, but in titles shouldn't "the" be lowercase? -_-"
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BSX wrote:
This may sound stupid (I'm new to constructive crit) but Madison's colours are a bit bright. If you look at all the shading and colours used on the canonical haracters on your box art, you'll see that their shading is actually relatively dark, while her's are a bit brighter, and stand out in comparison (or to me they do) because of that.

But otherwise, you caught the style very well, and it's incredibly well made.


Okay, I think I get what you mean. I was pulling the pallet from her sprite and I needed to tone down the saturation a bit. Is this any better?

Spoiler: Hey, I fixed the Outline too.
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Spoiler: Larger Desaturated
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Madame Sho wrote:
This is obnoxious, but in titles shouldn't "the" be lowercase? -_-"


You'd think. But the "For" In "Justice For All" Is Capitalized, so I thought maybe they were just weird that way.
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Untaken Fingerprint wrote:
BSX wrote:
This may sound stupid (I'm new to constructive crit) but Madison's colours are a bit bright. If you look at all the shading and colours used on the canonical haracters on your box art, you'll see that their shading is actually relatively dark, while her's are a bit brighter, and stand out in comparison (or to me they do) because of that.

But otherwise, you caught the style very well, and it's incredibly well made.


Okay, I think I get what you mean. I was pulling the pallet from her sprite and I needed to tone down the saturation a bit. Is this any better?

Spoiler: Hey, I fixed the Outline too.
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Spoiler: Larger Desaturated
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Madame Sho wrote:
This is obnoxious, but in titles shouldn't "the" be lowercase? -_-"


You'd think. But the "For" In "Justice For All" Is Capitalized, so I thought maybe they were just weird that way.

Perfect. The drawing fits in prefectly now.
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hmm, that's weird then =/
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BSX wrote:
Perfect. The drawing fits in prefectly now.


Thanks for the Tip, it was really Helpful. :edgy:

Madame Sho wrote:
hmm, that's weird then =/


I know, right? But yeah, It should probably be lowercase. :yuusaku:
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