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but when it comes to characterization,your top dog
Unworthy my mug??? OOOOOO! That's like... perfect. *scribbles*
Again, thank you!! You're too sweet!
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but when it comes to characterization,your top dog
Unworthy my mug??? OOOOOO! That's like... perfect. *scribbles*
Again, thank you!! You're too sweet!
there's no such thing as to sweet
you can keep on adding more and more sugar,and you can expect a sweeter coffee drinking experience
i,myself,prefer the bitter taste of coffee,but thats just me
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Great godot-isation of my script, stormy, and thank you for the compliment. I think we'll keep it this way; that is-
I write the basic plot, and Stormy can make changes and edits where she feels nescacerry. That okay with everyone?
Coffee Metaphors...let me think of some. How about?
'Ha! Just like blend 168, there's no need to add milk, sugar, or anything extra...Just the bare coffee beans, hot water and it's good to go.' (Referring that no need to add little details to the case-the bare facts will do fine.)
And...
'Hot water by itself is boring. It's the same with Coffee Crystals. But, combine the two together and you have an amazing blend.' (Maybe when he gets his assistant, saying that apart they are not complete, but together they are fantastic)
Or what about...
'Each coffee has its own personality. Blend 149 is sweet. Blend 106 is sour. Both are fantastic, but in their own seperate ways. However, we humans are different to coffee...we can change our personality, lie and deceive. Coffee can do no such thing.'
Aw Scheisse, the last one was dreadful, but the others were okay. what does everyone else think? And sorry for not being here so long!!
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Great godot-isation of my script, stormy, and thank you for the compliment. I think we'll keep it this way; that is-
I write the basic plot, and Stormy can make changes and edits where she feels nescacerry. That okay with everyone?
Coffee Metaphors...let me think of some. How about?
'Ha! Just like blend 168, there's no need to add milk, sugar, or anything extra...Just the bare coffee beans, hot water and it's good to go.' (Referring that no need to add little details to the case-the bare facts will do fine.)
And...
'Hot water by itself is boring. It's the same with Coffee Crystals. But, combine the two together and you have an amazing blend.' (Maybe when he gets his assistant, saying that apart they are not complete, but together they are fantastic)
Or what about...
'Each coffee has its own personality. Blend 149 is sweet. Blend 106 is sour. Both are fantastic, but in their own seperate ways. However, we humans are different to coffee...we can change our personality, lie and deceive. Coffee can do no such thing.'
Aw Scheisse, the last one was dreadful, but the others were okay. what does everyone else think? And sorry for not being here so long!!
Oh my god if Godot would talk like that I would love to kill him...
and don't say "scheisse" it is called "scheiße" you fool
"The hammer that strikes too fast has no time to aim."
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And you don't like my metaphors.... *Sad eyes*
*sniff* I was only trying, I came up with them in 10 or so minutes.
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one of my favs will be:When do you put your dirty trousers in the washing mashine?When it is dirty of course"
that is Godot-like
and sorry I sounded to crushy but as a real Godot fan I had to object there
"The hammer that strikes too fast has no time to aim."
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And thanks Rom. The concepts are good, (for the metaphors). I do think though that, bring the defense now, Diego would WANT to look at the details. Nevertheless, ideas are good and I'll change 'em around to make them sound more Godot-ish.
I agree - you write the script and I'll edit =)
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feel free to change them all you want.Okay thanks for that stormy, I agree with your point, However the idea came into my head and well, it could be used when someone goes off topic about something... I'm not that great at writing so If you edit all I do I would be very thankful.
Still working on the script.
Contradictions are like, the hardest thing ever to come up with. I know actually sympathise for the writers.
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feel free to change them all you want.Okay thanks for that stormy, I agree with your point, However the idea came into my head and well, it could be used when someone goes off topic about something... I'm not that great at writing so If you edit all I do I would be very thankful.
Still working on the script.
Contradictions are like, the hardest thing ever to come up with. I know actually sympathise for the writers.
I can imagine. Contradictions are indeed very difficult to come up with but I'm sure we'll both work through it ;-)
And not to worry i'm your official editor. Unless I die =D
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feel free to change them all you want.Okay thanks for that stormy, I agree with your point, However the idea came into my head and well, it could be used when someone goes off topic about something... I'm not that great at writing so If you edit all I do I would be very thankful.
Still working on the script.
Contradictions are like, the hardest thing ever to come up with. I know actually sympathise for the writers.
I can imagine. Contradictions are indeed very difficult to come up with but I'm sure we'll both work through it ;-)
And not to worry i'm your official editor. Unless I die =D
You better not die otherwise in the script everyone will be completley OOC, and the game will have no humour in it at all. I just wind up doing the basics. I can't think like the real writers do. They add in jokes now and again but not too often. Difficult to get the balance right, so I left it. Hopefully my
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feel free to change them all you want.Okay thanks for that stormy, I agree with your point, However the idea came into my head and well, it could be used when someone goes off topic about something... I'm not that great at writing so If you edit all I do I would be very thankful.
Still working on the script.
Contradictions are like, the hardest thing ever to come up with. I know actually sympathise for the writers.
I can imagine. Contradictions are indeed very difficult to come up with but I'm sure we'll both work through it ;-)
And not to worry i'm your official editor. Unless I die =D
You better not die otherwise in the script everyone will be completley OOC, and the game will have no humour in it at all. I just wind up doing the basics. I can't think like the real writers do. They add in jokes now and again but not too often. Difficult to get the balance right, so I left it. Hopefully my
Nice to know I'd only be missed for my writing skills... And slave? Watch it kid ;)
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Then it's sorted ;) you worry about the layout and contradictions, let me worry about everything else
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and Drank Coffee Drinker,i think we should get started on our script,but every time your on skype,your status is set to do not disturb.
so,i think we should do what Romeo and Stormy are doing,one writes the basic script,and the other add's Character,take your pick
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to the word-mobile! *batman theme*
Nah jokes. Good luck with your scitps, you...godot fans. although we are all godot fans here
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Haha, good luck J!
Edit: Coffee is like competition - bitter, strong and leaves a taste in your mouth long after it's gone ...? Ugh. I should just shut up.
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alright,DCD,i'll talk to you when i can,we got a script to work on!
let's do our best!
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I SHALL PREVAIL!!!
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I SHALL PREVAIL!!!
Ha...!
it's one of my rules,kitten,to never give into provocative words,in fact,they strengthen me,and motivate me even more
so keep the strong word's coming kitten,for they could lead to your fall in this contest
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And in reference to my previous post, I meant... I'm older than both of you. HA!
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"The hammer that strikes too fast has no time to aim."
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but nice alteration. *saves*
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but nice alteration. *saves*I just edited it
not stole it
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but nice alteration. *saves*I just edited it
not stole it
Same difference, matey. GAH! Need to stop getting distracted... need to work on MS...
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And in reference to my previous post, I meant... I'm older than both of you. HA!
ah,but one thing you must remember kitten,who likes coffee that has grown old?
everyone like there coffee fresh
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"A trial is like a mug of coffee, in the beginning there is only the black unknown surface. But as the time goes you will come to the bottom entitled truth"
two more
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...hmmmm,i do believe that came out wrong
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...hmmmm,i do believe that came out wrong
You're lucky I have other people badgering me for the next chapter otherwise I'd make you wait for it as punishment. How rude!
And Coff_Pros, those are some cool quotes. But... isn't the coffee/trial one already used in T & T?
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...hmmmm,i do believe that came out wrong
You're lucky I have other people badgering me for the next chapter otherwise I'd make you wait for it as punishment. How rude!
And Coff_Pros, those are some cool quotes. But... isn't the coffee/trial one already used in T & T?
sorry kitten,im just a competitive person...
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Coffee plants need space to bear the beans we long for.
(aka, Diego: (to possible assistant) give me some damn space to work in)
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Coffee plants need space to bear the beans we long for.
(aka, Diego: (to possible assistant) give me some damn space to work in)
if it's space you want,it's space you shall receive
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Coffee plants need space to bear the beans we long for.
(aka, Diego: (to possible assistant) give me some damn space to work in)
if it's space you want,it's space you shall receive
Nah, it wasn't directed at you. It's just a metaphor that came to me. Throwing it out there for opinion :D
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Coffee plants need space to bear the beans we long for.
(aka, Diego: (to possible assistant) give me some damn space to work in)
if it's space you want,it's space you shall receive
Nah, it wasn't directed at you. It's just a metaphor that came to me. Throwing it out there for opinion :D
ah,ok,i thought that may be the case
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I'm back, mate! Still lurking like a ninja but whatevs :3
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This is totally remnding me of the Phoenix wright manga where maya gets the wrong idea of godot loving her, then pearly slapping him in the face, causing a nosebleed. Then godot says a 'cool' quote and phoenix is like,
'PLEASE wipe the blood of your face before you try to act cool!'
Um...Coffee metaphors...I suck at these. I'd like to do something about coffee not being able to grow if it weren't for the farmers, but i can't think of a context to fit it in, or to make it sound cool...someone do it for me.
There has to be a gag where someone gets him a decaf coffee and hes all like 'wut.'
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...did you just suggest someone sock... DIEGO!?
Are YOU asking to be socked
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..hm,very true!
i agree,i liked how in AJ,Apollo punched Phoenix,and phoenix just shook it off like it didn't happen
i thought it made hobo nick awesome
so i think if Diego did it,it would be Awesome to!
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This is totally remnding me of the Phoenix wright manga where maya gets the wrong idea of godot loving her, then pearly slapping him in the face, causing a nosebleed. Then godot says a 'cool' quote and phoenix is like,
'PLEASE wipe the blood of your face before you try to act cool!'
Um...Coffee metaphors...I suck at these. I'd like to do something about coffee not being able to grow if it weren't for the farmers, but i can't think of a context to fit it in, or to make it sound cool...someone do it for me.
There has to be a gag where someone gets him a decaf coffee and hes all like 'wut.'
OMG! Where!?? I don't remember seeing that!!
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...did you just suggest someone sock... DIEGO!?
Are YOU asking to be socked
well,like i said,someone socked Phoenix
and the person that did it...was the player
although i do agree that i don't want to see Diego socked,i think she made a good point,about it making an interesting conversation
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