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Kitteh's Sprites~

Sun Jun 27, 2010 7:43 am

Itteh_Bitteh_Kitteh

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~Kitteh's Sprites~

First Attempts :P
Just to show you my first 2 attempts:

Spoiler: WARNING: Crappy Sprites

Getting Better...
Ones that don't look so crappy...

Spoiler: Not so Bad...

A little better...
They don't suck that much...

Spoiler: Not that bad...

Newest Works!!
The best i've can do so far...

Spoiler: Hmmm...better...

~Constructive Criticism is Appreciated~
(except for the earliest two)

I am a Phoenix/Maya shipper
I also support Fransizka/Edgeworth, Mia/Diego and Apollo/Vera.

Re: Kitteh's Sprites~

Sun Jun 27, 2010 12:30 pm

Louise

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Itteh_Bitteh_Kitteh wrote:

Spoiler: Not so Bad...

These are my favourites :pearly:

the Edgey as Fran made me lol XD

On the Pearly one, I think her neck might be a bit too long but meh, it's still adorable!

Itteh_Bitteh_Kitteh wrote:

Spoiler: Hmmm...better...

Aww, this really warmed my cockles.. XD

Itteh_Bitteh_Kitteh wrote:

-another attempt at an oc

-the first OC i actually gave a name to, she is going to be developed. Her name is Tora Itami but i havent come up with an english last name yet.

Ok, the first one here, the eyes are bit creepy. The second one, the eyes are a bit too big, but that's probably because the head is too small.

see how it withers before my flower of justice

Re: Kitteh's Sprites~

Sun Jun 27, 2010 4:36 pm

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Quote:

Getting Better...
Ones that don't look so crappy...

Spoiler: Not so Bad...

I really like the one with Trucy head on vera's body. :minuki:

The head of Pearl is a bit too high.
For the last one, the color of her eyes is too bright.

That's a good start, but I think you must find colors wich are less bright

Re: Kitteh's Sprites~

Sun Jun 27, 2010 7:21 pm

Magic Monkey

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Itteh_Bitteh_Kitteh wrote:

Just to show you my first 2 attempts:

Spoiler: WARNING: Crappy Sprites

Uhm, I know you didn't want comments on this one but maybe you can re-save it because I can hardly recognize anything...put overall for the first attempt it doesn't look bad either :phoenix:

Itteh_Bitteh_Kitteh wrote:

Ones that don't look so crappy...

Spoiler: Not so Bad...

Well looks much better than your first one, but when piecing together sprites be aware of the proportions of the body and head. Some look a bit unnaturally like the Pearl/Vera one :pearl:

For all your OCs I personally would say try a other method of coloring, the hair and dresses all look a bit to pale and shadeless :sadshoe:

Itteh_Bitteh_Kitteh wrote:

They don't suck that much...

Spoiler: Not that bad...

Yay, the EdgeyxFranziska is cute, I love her expression it's just :gant-clap:

For the dresses of Trucy ahhm, I would add more shade but they are fine anyway :godot:

Itteh_Bitteh_Kitteh wrote:

The best i've can do so far...

Spoiler: Hmmm...better...

So far not bad the base looks promising but the head is definitely to small for the body try to make it a bit bigger. I hope my critics weren't to harsh and maybe it helps you to improve more. Just don't lose the fun in making sprites that's the most important thing I can say be now :phoenix:

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Re: Kitteh's Sprites~

Sun Jun 27, 2010 9:06 pm

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Hmmm...not bad! But keep trying! I don't have GIMP so I have to use Paint.

My favorite...

It's a nice one! :minuki:

I agree with looby with all of her critique. But have fun!

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Re: Kitteh's Sprites~

Mon Jun 28, 2010 1:33 pm

Itteh_Bitteh_Kitteh

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Magic Monkey wrote:

Itteh_Bitteh_Kitteh wrote:

Just to show you my first 2 attempts:

Spoiler: WARNING: Crappy Sprites

Uhm, I know you didn't want comments on this one but maybe you can re-save it because I can hardly recognize anything...put overall for the first attempt it doesn't look bad either :phoenix:

I actually remade that one but then i saved it as a jpeg so i stopped trying to make an older pearl... might try again sometime

Thanks For the Critique everyone, I'm surprised no one asked about the splice between Viola and Phoenix :/ The Franny/Edgey was just a random attempt at switching heads of characters...

Tora's head was so annoying... i remade it and everything but it still looked too small...

Who can guess who i made Tora out of?

I am a Phoenix/Maya shipper
I also support Fransizka/Edgeworth, Mia/Diego and Apollo/Vera.

Re: Kitteh's Sprites~

Tue Jun 29, 2010 7:45 pm

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Itteh_Bitteh_Kitteh wrote:

-My First and last attempt using GIMP

My First and last attempt using GIMP

My First and last attempt using GIMP

... õ_õ
I gimp...

Anyway...These are not bad.
The one where Trucy is in white dress is actually pretty cute one.

Re: Kitteh's Sprites~

Tue Jun 29, 2010 7:56 pm

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I like most of your sprites, keep it up

Zinle wrote:

Itteh_Bitteh_Kitteh wrote:

-My First and last attempt using GIMP

My First and last attempt using GIMP

My First and last attempt using GIMP

... õ_õ
I gimp...

I second that

"The hammer that strikes too fast has no time to aim."

Re: Kitteh's Sprites~

Tue Jun 29, 2010 10:03 pm

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I just love this sprite! Good job!

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Re: Kitteh's Sprites~

Fri Jul 16, 2010 1:43 pm

Itteh_Bitteh_Kitteh

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Thanks everyone :D Does anyone have any suggestions for whose head i should use for Tora?
I'm remaking the dress trucies with LawfulMagician's new bases, slightly darker this time.
I really suck with GIMP, i might use it again sometime but it is my last attempt for now...

I am a Phoenix/Maya shipper
I also support Fransizka/Edgeworth, Mia/Diego and Apollo/Vera.

Re: Kitteh's Sprites~

Fri Jul 23, 2010 11:47 pm

feedmechocolate247

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Sorry, I'm terrible with suggestions, but I agree! GIMP is impossible! I don't know how people use it! I only used it once to smooth out the edges on a sprite I made! (still my sprites fail though haha) and that is just about the only thing I can use on GIMP! :sadshoe:

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