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Pickled sprites ^_^ (Update 7/26/10 Casual Apollo)

Sat Jul 10, 2010 9:59 pm

Chicken_Dance

Pickles

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So, I've been hanging around CR for awhile now, checking out other peoples sprites and I thought 'Hey, I bet I could do that.' So I tried, and these are the fruits of my labour so far

Spoiler: Young Apollo

Spoiler: My OC, Dottie

Spoiler: Bigger version of my avatar

Spoiler: Trés Bien Klavier

Spoiler: Vestless Apollo

Spoiler: Prosecutor Neil Marshall

Spoiler: Casual Friday Apollo

Spoiler: Objection Bubbles

So, yeah...I had a lot of fun with this, and I hope to post more in the future
I`d be glad to hear any comments, concerns, constructive criticism and the like
I am open to taking requests, but I`m new at this so it will probably take awhile...Enjoy!
Edit:
-Fixed Young Polly's elbow, made Klavier less pillow-y and made their outlines lighter so they didn't look black
-Fixed Dottie's front facing sprites, so she actually had a forehead
-Added Vestless Apollo
-Added Neil
-Added Objection Bubbles
-Added Casual Apollo

Come check out my sprites!

So I heard you like cosplay?

I've got an idea that's to DIE for...let's do the chicken dance!

Last edited by Chicken_Dance on Tue Jul 27, 2010 5:19 am, edited 11 times in total.

Re: Pickled sprites ^_^

Sat Jul 10, 2010 10:16 pm

Dawn

Bam! Wait. That's a fish?!

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Good job for a first time spriter! ^^

However... there are several things...

-On most of yer sprites, there are black outlines. As a general rule, you should not use black anywhere on a sprite. (Unless you were making pokemon sprites.)
-The elbow on Polly looks too jaggy, just smooth out and curve the line.
- On Klavy, there is evidence of pillow shading, just have one defined light source, preferably from the top left or something like that.

Other than that... good job! Keep practicing!

[Signature in construction until I make a new one]
I'm back, mate! Still lurking like a ninja but whatevs :3

Re: Pickled sprites ^_^

Sat Jul 10, 2010 10:37 pm

Chicken_Dance

Pickles

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Thanks ^_^
I can see what you mean about Polly's elbow
...but I barely used black anywhere...it's mostly dark brown :larry:

Umm, what do you mean by pillow shading?

Come check out my sprites!

So I heard you like cosplay?

I've got an idea that's to DIE for...let's do the chicken dance!

Re: Pickled sprites ^_^

Sat Jul 10, 2010 10:54 pm

Dawn

Bam! Wait. That's a fish?!

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Oh... it looks like black to me. :/

Pillow shading is when you shade outwards, so that the darker areas are around the outline, and the highlights are more towards the center.

[Signature in construction until I make a new one]
I'm back, mate! Still lurking like a ninja but whatevs :3

Re: Pickled sprites ^_^

Sat Jul 10, 2010 11:36 pm

Chicken_Dance

Pickles

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Do they look any better now? I fixed some things you suggested

Come check out my sprites!

So I heard you like cosplay?

I've got an idea that's to DIE for...let's do the chicken dance!

Re: Pickled sprites ^_^

Sun Jul 11, 2010 6:52 am

Little Magician

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I like your Young Apollo! I think it looks pretty cool. It looks a little weird though... his left arm is a little unnatural.
Dottie looks great! I could never do spriting... I think her eyes are a little to high up in the last 4 images, though.
Klavier in a Tres Bien outfit is pretty funny... reminds me of the time Phoenix suggested he could wear a waitress costume and Kudo would be looking at his legs...
Good luck with future spriting! :godot:

Graphics

Re: Pickled sprites ^_^

Sun Jul 11, 2010 6:35 pm

Louise

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Chicken_Dance wrote:

Aww how sweet XD

The "floor is wet" one made me laugh.

If I had to give criticism though, it would be that Dottie's arms are a bit messed up. In the first one they're a bit too big and the shading on the first 3 is a bit wrong. And in the last 3, her face is a bit too high up so she doesn't have a forehead.

Nice job though!

see how it withers before my flower of justice

Re: Pickled sprites ^_^

Mon Jul 12, 2010 3:34 pm

Zinle

...Hopefully someday... xD

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Finally....FINALLY a younger Polly that isn't a Wockollo!
Pretty nice.

Re: Pickled sprites ^_^

Mon Jul 19, 2010 6:26 pm

Chicken_Dance

Pickles

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A new sprite...just a minor edit though

Spoiler: Vestless Apollo

Come check out my sprites!

So I heard you like cosplay?

I've got an idea that's to DIE for...let's do the chicken dance!

Re: Pickled sprites ^_^

Mon Jul 19, 2010 6:38 pm

Louise

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Sexy <3

see how it withers before my flower of justice

Re: Pickled sprites ^_^

Mon Jul 19, 2010 8:17 pm

Chicken_Dance

Pickles

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Thanks to everybody who's commented or given constructive crit so far, I really appreciate it ^_^
Another new sprite I finished

Spoiler: Prosecutor Neil Marshall

Come check out my sprites!

So I heard you like cosplay?

I've got an idea that's to DIE for...let's do the chicken dance!

Re: Pickled sprites ^_^

Tue Jul 20, 2010 6:34 am

Chicken_Dance

Pickles

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On my way to my friends house tonight I remembered I had some speech bubbles from a project I was working on before.

Spoiler: Objection Bubbles

Come check out my sprites!

So I heard you like cosplay?

I've got an idea that's to DIE for...let's do the chicken dance!

Re: Pickled sprites ^_^ (Update 7/26/10 Casual Apollo)

Tue Jul 27, 2010 5:45 am

Chicken_Dance

Pickles

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Spoiler: Casual Friday Apollo

Another New Sprite edit
I had fun with his hair

Come check out my sprites!

So I heard you like cosplay?

I've got an idea that's to DIE for...let's do the chicken dance!

Re: Pickled sprites ^_^ (Update 7/26/10 Casual Apollo)

Sat Sep 11, 2010 3:48 pm

Rentorah

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Good sprites, Pickles! I like the Neil one the best :neil2:

Re: Pickled sprites ^_^ (Update 7/26/10 Casual Apollo)

Sat Sep 11, 2010 3:54 pm

Chicken_Dance

Pickles

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Why thank you, I quite enjoyed doing that ^_^
It probably took the longest time to make

Come check out my sprites!

So I heard you like cosplay?

I've got an idea that's to DIE for...let's do the chicken dance!

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