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My first sprite!
Comments and suggestions encouraged!
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Anyways, it's very good for your first sprite :)
My only suggestions would be to slightly clean up her hair, and I'm not really sure I agree with the shading on that "grey thing on her chest"? (But I fail at shading anyway...<_<)
But anyways, like I said, good job, I'll keep an eye out for more.
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Anyways, it's very good for your first sprite :)
My only suggestions would be to slightly clean up her hair, and I'm not really sure I agree with the shading on that "grey thing on her chest"? (But I fail at shading anyway...<_<)
But anyways, like I said, good job, I'll keep an eye out for more.
Thank you! I'll try and fix the things you suggested. I wish I could do it now, but schoolwork is killing me. I hate functions.
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Alright, looks pretty good for your first sprite.
Just a little something:
Watch out the anatomy of her left arm, it's kinda weird.
Also, she kinda looks like a older young-ema wearing older clothes.
But don't get me wrong, the sprite is very good for a first sprite! :D
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Just a little something:
Watch out the anatomy of her left arm, it's kinda weird.
Also, she kinda looks like a older young-ema wearing older clothes.
But don't get me wrong, the sprite is very good for a first sprite! :D
Thank you for your comments!
Yea I'm still trying to figure out how to fix her arm. I can tell something is wrong, but I'm not sure what...
Yea I guess she looks like an older young Ema. Seeing I used older Ema as a base sprite and all... maybe I should of changed her face shape as well...
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This time it's my OC Alyiene!
... I find that it's sometimes hard to sprite existing OCs because there are a bunch of things I can't recycle from existing sprites...OH WELL. Comments and critique encouraged!
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This time it's my OC Alyiene!
... I find that it's sometimes hard to sprite existing OCs because there are a bunch of things I can't recycle from existing sprites...OH WELL. Comments and critique encouraged!
I like it a lot! It looks really good!
Only thing I can say is that, the blinking animation needs 3 frames in the blinking. Not just open and closed but also in between. But overall, it's great!
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I like it a lot! It looks really good!
Only thing I can say is that, the blinking animation needs 3 frames in the blinking. Not just open and closed but also in between. But overall, it's great!
Thank you! Also, I did have a third frame, it looked really bad so I still have to work on that one. I just wanted to post things early before I go and do my homework.
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Thank you!
I used Mia as a base.
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Great sprite by the way!
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Great sprite by the way!
Haha, You are right! It is Mia with Lana's head. insert a gasp!
Also thank you!
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