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My first fanfic - Turnabout Runaway
Matryoshka~
Gender: Female
Location: England
Rank: Medium-in-training
Joined: Sun Oct 03, 2010 2:48 pm
Posts: 364
Name: Turnabout Runaway
Author: Megan-Chan
Spoilers: Possible AJ spoilers.
Pairings: None
Genre: Action (I guess.)
Storyline: This is set 6 months before the first case of AJ. The main character is Ange Hoshi, an attorney. She gets kidnapped by Kristoph (That's his name, right?) Gavin, and he makes an exchange with Lucie Hoshi, Ange's older sister, a file of a case 2 years ago for Ange. Before the exchange could happen, Ange runs away, and this story is mainly about what she does after that.
Spoiler: Chapter 1 - The Kidnapping
It wasn't that good, but the more I get into it, the better it'll be!
Re: My first fanfic - Turnabout Runaway
Mrs. Jeon Jungkook ♥
Gender: Female
Location: Austria
Rank: Ace Attorney
Joined: Sat Sep 18, 2010 6:38 pm
Posts: 1230
I write a story, too, but it's about love, so.. I can't say so much about your story, but it looks like pretty nice.
Anyway..
Megan-Chan wrote:
Ange was walking down the street. It was raining quite heavily. Why didn't I bring an umbrella? Ange thought, as she knew it was going to rain. As she was thinking about that, she felt like she was being followed. She turned round, but didn't see anyone suspicious.
Ange got to a street where is was very quiet, and nobody was there. She was walking silently and suddenly, a black car drove up to Ange and stopped next to her, as Kristoph got out of the car and grabbed her.
Ange got to a street where is was very quiet, and nobody was there. She was walking silently and suddenly, a black car drove up to Ange and stopped next to her, as Kristoph got out of the car and grabbed her.
To much Ange. Maybe you can put in it: She, the woman or girl or the person. But don't write to much her name, it looks like.. Damn, I can't find a right word for it.
This is the only 'mistake' you did. But.. Keep up the great work!
I'm a big fan of you, I said it before.
The beginning was quite fun, just with all the ups and downs
But suddenly, we’re tired, from a waste of meaningless emotions
But suddenly, we’re tired, from a waste of meaningless emotions
시작은 뭐 즐거웠었네 오르락내리락 그 자체로 어느새 서로 지쳐버렸네 의미 없는 감정소모에
Trivia 轉 : Seesaw
Re: My first fanfic - Turnabout Runaway
Matryoshka~
Gender: Female
Location: England
Rank: Medium-in-training
Joined: Sun Oct 03, 2010 2:48 pm
Posts: 364
Re: My first fanfic - Turnabout Runaway
Mrs. Jeon Jungkook ♥
Gender: Female
Location: Austria
Rank: Ace Attorney
Joined: Sat Sep 18, 2010 6:38 pm
Posts: 1230
Please say: Is Klavier in it? :3
Re: My first fanfic - Turnabout Runaway
Matryoshka~
Gender: Female
Location: England
Rank: Medium-in-training
Joined: Sun Oct 03, 2010 2:48 pm
Posts: 364
Re: My first fanfic - Turnabout Runaway
Mrs. Jeon Jungkook ♥
Gender: Female
Location: Austria
Rank: Ace Attorney
Joined: Sat Sep 18, 2010 6:38 pm
Posts: 1230
Megan-Chan wrote:
I don't know yet, but maybe!
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