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So, erm... I made it using Gimp and my laptop trackpad (I hope to get a tablet soon, which should help). It was a combination of splicing and my own drawing.
And I was wondering, would anyone be willing to offer me criticism on it? I'd like to know how to improve etc. ^.^;;
Oh yeah, and here it is:
Also I'm really sorry if I'm posting this in the wrong section... I tried my best to get it right. xD
Yeah and it's the first sprite I've ever made, hence the badness.
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Just add some shading and it'll look awesome. =)
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Shading the clothes would make it look even better, as Dypo typed. The hair also looks a little too smooth, but that's probably just me
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but really, very well done
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~ I love it.. It's so perfect.
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Exactly how I do it. :D
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Exactly how I do it. :D
Ah, well, I don't see it D;
But thanks for saying it ;)
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1. Try to splice together a few more parts. It only takes a second to see that that is Mia with Ema's head. (Quoting Looby Here xD) Try frankensteining arms, mouth, and, a really important one is eyes. I know you tried with the eyes, but they look really weird.
2. Remember to shade every-part. Remember, AA sprites are cell shaded and have light coming from a certain direction. For example, if light is on the left side, the left side will be brighter, and the left. Don't forget that wrinkles in clothes play a part too.
3. The hair looks a little weird on the left side of her face. Where the brown lines are, I mean.
So overall, it's no the greatest sprite in the world, but it doesn't suck, either. Hopefully you can take my crit and use it to create a master-piece :)
@Mary
She states right at the beginning that she uses GIMP
EDIT:
Never mind, Mary, Dypo answered first.
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1. Try to splice together a few more parts. It only takes a second to see that that is Mia with Ema's head. (Quoting Looby Here xD) Try frankensteining arms, mouth, and, a really important one is eyes. I know you tried with the eyes, but they look really weird.
2. Remember to shade every-part. Remember, AA sprites are cell shaded and have light coming from a certain direction. For example, if light is on the left side, the left side will be brighter, and the left. Don't forget that wrinkles in clothes play a part too.
3. The hair looks a little weird on the left side of her face. Where the brown lines are, I mean.
You don't come across as rude at all. :) That was really helpful; I'll take it into consideration.
I might post an update whenever I get new stuff done with it! :D
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