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Noirmumu's sprites : Young Apollo
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It is not perfect so if you have any tips, I am all ears.
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I am open to constructive criticism. In fact I am craving for some advices.
There is still a lot of things that I want to improve like his outfit that is very simplistic, the shading or his hair that is not Apollo like enough to my taste.
And if you know how I could get ride of this nasty outline, go ahead and tell me (edit: Dang, it isn't really visible once posted here, but it does exist).
Thank you!
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Otherwise, this is looking quite spiffy. The coat is awesome. The color pallet works well, I think you're on a roll.
Bump - bump - bump - bump - bump - bump - bump
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All in all, I think you should take away some of the hair in the back of his head, it makes his head look like is was shaped differently than it really is. He also looks fairly tall, every since the new artwork is out, it's Canon that Apollo is kind of a shorty~
Otherwise, really great work, can't give you much of an advice on how to improve it!
...Because I felt the need to advertise my fanfic with a self-drawn, animated banner. Yes, I'm obsessed, why do you ask?
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Apollo doesn't seem like he can be serious very easily..... his reactions are always way more over the top and his only serious expression looks extremely fragile where as this one looks pure and strong. Up his happy and you'll get a much better feeling of Justice
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