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Hi! I'm very new to this, so if you stumble across this page and think my sprites are all terrible, please let me know and I'll try to improve.
So here are my all my sprites:

Dahlia Hawthorne edits
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A Fey OC (Who I called Sophie Fey):
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A Defence Attorney OC:
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I'm aware that one of her hands is twice the size of the other. I'll fix it when I get better at hands.


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i feel pretty

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AuraRaven wrote:
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I bet it feels huge in this hand.

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This one's pretty good, but there's some grey outline that shouldn't really be there in her bands. Maybe go over it in the darkest shade in her hair?

By the way, I noticed you're using Photobucket. Those links die regularly, might be better to use Imgur.
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Lind wrote:
By the way, I noticed you're using Photobucket. Those links die regularly, might be better to use Imgur.


I changed them to Imgur. It seems to be a better site than Photobucket, thank you.

Lind wrote:
This one's pretty good, but there's some grey outline that shouldn't really be there in her bands. Maybe go over it in the darkest shade in her hair?


I'm not sure what you mean by 'bands.' The only word close to that (that I can think of) is bangs, but there's no grey outline there.

She has a grey outline on her arms, should I fix that?

Lind wrote:
I bet it feels huge in this hand.


I'll take care of that when I can draw hands properly.
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I think your edits look good! I like the Sophie Fey one! Just make sure outer outlines (around the character) are a little darker. To make it look like there's an outline drawn around it.

Also, yeah the hand thing. Try to look at the symmetry of your sprite and see if one side's off or not. Flipping the canvas can help if you're finding that tough.
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AuraRaven wrote:
Lind wrote:
This one's pretty good, but there's some grey outline that shouldn't really be there in her bands. Maybe go over it in the darkest shade in her hair?


I'm not sure what you mean by 'bands.' The only word close to that (that I can think of) is bangs, but there's no grey outline there.

She has a grey outline on her arms, should I fix that?

Sorry, typo. I did mean bangs.

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I've highlighted the area I mean to demonstrate.
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Lind wrote:
AuraRaven wrote:
Lind wrote:
This one's pretty good, but there's some grey outline that shouldn't really be there in her bands. Maybe go over it in the darkest shade in her hair?


I'm not sure what you mean by 'bands.' The only word close to that (that I can think of) is bangs, but there's no grey outline there.

She has a grey outline on her arms, should I fix that?

Sorry, typo. I did mean bangs.

ImageImage

I've highlighted the area I mean to demonstrate.


Thanks! I've fixed it.
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I like your sprites. Especially that DA OC with the small arm XD (I don't mean to be harsh at that one)
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