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Our first essay contribution is up! Aijiru wrote an examination of Godot (spoilers GS1 through 3).

All added some fanart, a wallpaper, and some Dahlia cosplay.
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I just spoiled the third game pretty badly for myself, but I have to say, it was a very well-done essay. It goes very deep and claims nothing that is arguable as true. Aside from examining Godot, it makes a good point on how the characters in the series are very human, and not just a certain way to make a cheap story for a video game.

The only negative criticism I can give is the grammar. I'm guessing that it was typed in one sitting, since at the beginning, most of the grammar is correct. Near the end, it's still understandable, but it's far from perfect.

Anyway, I can say from reading this that I will almost surely be reading any essays that are submitted. I enjoyed it. :godot:
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Thanks to Croik for publishing this, and thanks for the feedback too :will:. About the grammar, well, my first languaje is not English so I'm sure it has mistakens or strange constructions here and there. If the beginning is better it's only because it was written earlier, and I spell-checked and changed it more times than the end. But if it's understandable, that's enough for me.
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Shaaaaaaak!

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Good job! I love how you describe him and I really like the ending.

I hope all the essays will be as good as yours.
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Aijiru wrote:
Thanks to Croik for publishing this, and thanks for the feedback too :will:. About the grammar, well, my first languaje is not English so I'm sure it has mistakens or strange constructions here and there. If the beginning is better it's only because it was written earlier, and I spell-checked and changed it more times than the end. But if it's understandable, that's enough for me.

Oh. I didn't know your original language wasn't English. In that case, you did great.
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Dahlia Cosplay = Must see

But where is it? It's not on the Cosplays page...
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Here you have all the photos: 1, 2, 3 and 4.
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It was a good read, and I'd never have even guessed that it was written by someone who's native language wasn't english.
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Elriel wrote:
Here you have all the photos: 1, 2, 3 and 4.


Whoa, those are awesome. =D

I especially like the first 2. ^^
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Haha, I still love Daft Punk <3

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@Aijiru: You can write AND do graphics. You, my friend, are GREAT!

I might have a kick at an essay next week, Croik.
It's the holidays then.
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More Caffeine Please :D

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I'm curious as to why my fanwork wasn't accepted for posting.
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Rina you can contact me in an email about that. I can't quite remember what you might have submitted, off the top of my head.
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More Caffeine Please :D

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Sent, thank you.
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