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Dark Integrity Project - Starring Wolfram KeithTopic%20Title

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Hi all! I plan to create the project within the title. I won't reveal much of the plot, but I will describe a little bit of the protagonist, Wolfram Keith.

Wolfram Keith is a lawyer serving to protect the innocent, much like Phoenix Wright. Although personality wise, they are very different. Wolfram is quiet, modest and mysterious in every sense of the word. He is influenced by the Gothic lifestyle and uses his creepy aura to create fear upon those he is interrogating, in order for them to confess to their crimes, or tell their darkest secrets. :uramidn:
He's rarely smiles or smirks for that matter, only smiles when nervous, embarrassed or just happy. He detests arrogance.

That's all for now, so step by step, I'll show how he should look like.

His overall body should be influenced by Miles Edgeworth (with the exception of his facial appearance, obviously), and his style of clothing closely reassembles Dick Gumshoe when he is not wearing his huge jacket.

So far, I have only altered his clothing into the style of Dick Gumshoe's, to show my skill in sprite drawing. I am not too please with how I did his collar, but apart from that, I don't think I've done a bad job. So, what do you think? Advice will be appreciated.

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NEXT TASK: Change the colour of the clothing.
Re: Dark Integrity Project - Starring Wolfram KeithTopic%20Title
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I may or may not be here.

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That is a good start! I can't wait to se how he turns out. The collar is a little odd. But all in all it's a good job.
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Me likey bouncy!

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Not bad. <3 Though I do agree wit Donald. Something about the collar is a little off...or maybe the collar seems to big for him?

Hmm...
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Re: Dark Integrity Project - Starring Wolfram KeithTopic%20Title

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I have edited the collar so it shouldn't look to strange this time around, and I worked a little bit on the clothing's colour while I was at it. Well, here you go:

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NEXT TASK: Design style for clothing, maybe change facial appearance?
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His arms look like they've been sown on xD.
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Ha Ha! :moe-laugh: They actually do look sown on now that I think about it.
Maybe I'd better change the outline colour to a different colour, perhaps?
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Yeah, it would.

And the shirt shading looks weird.

light
VERY BRIGHT
Dark.

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...Hopefully someday... xD

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I didn't like the dark one, but that light one was good.
So hangover Edgey...
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