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Yes First post! :keiko:
wow this is pretty good. Keep it up :maya:
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Nice^^.But,I have a suggestion 'Boss'.For the game.....

Why don't you use that hoodie for his first case?And for the rest of the game,he can wear something more.....court-oriented.(I mean a suit.But it's your decision^^)
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Well, first off, the biggest problem I can see is his right arm, the one not pointing. It looks pretty unnatural, and is way to skinny. The shading on the hoodie is off, try basing it off Phoenix's shading. The pocket is positioned oddly, try moving it more to the centre. I don't know what's bugging me about the mouth, but somthing isn't quite right. Finally, the head is to flat. Toy with the hair to make it more natural-looking.

Hope this helps!
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G.Gustice wrote:
Nice^^.But,I have a suggestion 'Boss'.For the game.....

Why don't you use that hoodie for his first case?And for the rest of the game,he can wear something more.....court-oriented.(I mean a suit.But it's your decision^^)

Well, I was intending to have him wearing a suit, but I struggled to create one, so I gave up and went with something that reflects his past (You'll see :phoenix: )

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Well, first off, the biggest problem I can see is his right arm, the one not pointing. It looks pretty unnatural, and is way to skinny. The shading on the hoodie is off, try basing it off Phoenix's shading. The pocket is positioned oddly, try moving it more to the centre. I don't know what's bugging me about the mouth, but somthing isn't quite right. Finally, the head is to flat. Toy with the hair to make it more natural-looking.

Yah, I know most of these. The arm's what gave me the most problem. I just can't seem to get it to look right.
I've never been good at shading, so it's only expected I don't get it right straight away ^^;
Yeah, I was trying to make it curve round, but I failed >_>
Dunno about the hair
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I like it^^

The only problem is how the shirt looks though,it doesn't seem right....
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Yeah I know, I haven't shaded it yet xD
Unless that wasn't what you meant :o
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It's okay^^.
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So far so good.
Really good.

This will turn out more...interesting... :garyuu:
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Looks really nice, :D
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Considering they're made from scratch, and still in progress, that's not bad! Good work.
I'm gone for so long, and the colors got all psychedelic! Woohoo!
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Still working on Nick Raskoph....

Good sprite of Terry^^
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Decent sprites Ice.
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Thanks Elriel for the sig!
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He looks like one idiot in my school...
But I didn't say its ugly =)
Its great.
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He has nice eyes XD
No. Cool glasses = WIN!
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Another pose for Terry
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Could use a little ironing out I guess

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Only wrong thing: Litlle chubby.
However...If thats meaned to be chubby, then its okay.
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Just wondering, I'm struggling making a sprite for my prosecutor (not using the one in my avatar, that was a silly thing I made when I was bored, even if he will look something like that). Can anyone who's really talented in the scratch sprite department give me a hand?

And I needz moar comments for motivation D<
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Sure,great sprites^^

Plus,I'm almost finished with Nick!
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Lovin the detective :keiko:
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Well, to be blunt: his head is both too small and too flat. It looks kinda squished; try enlarging it a little and pronouncing the nose some more. Also, try adding some detail to his jacket - a pocket or two, maybe some folds.
Maya is overrated. That is all.
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I'm not going to lie. I'm not very good at spriting =/ especially animating.
So, is there anyone who'd like to help me with this? It feels kind of cheeky to ask, since it's such a huge thing, but I really can't do this myself, and I want the game to be good D:
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Ice I can do some animating and i'll try with the close up if you want but i'd need more info
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Here's closeup hope it's ok

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I edited the nose a bit to make it better
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ok done :godot:

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