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They call me Bogard. Terry Bogard.
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YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!!!!
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Can you put my baby- er, OC back?
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Ghaleon. Thanks for the support. Now if I could keep on going it should be fine. I'm really aiming to make the series both really long, so it may be a while before any action gets done, and waaay longer before the story even ends.
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And don't just throw over responcibilities to me, I'll forget about things. -_-;
But yeah, Aviv is fun isn't he? ^_^
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You called yourself Hadou... You know, you don't HAVE to use that name. ^_^; I just think it's cool.
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Besides. I truly believe that if I am to be better, even nicknames have to be accepted. More inspiration, better art.
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okie, that's done. :P
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Pretty sweet, read about 10 pages in.
Um, critique...
It's cool, but freaking huge. 1686 by 2188 is massive. I had truble understanding anything because most monitors only get 1000 pizels across and a bunch of panels were bigger than that. Like one of the starting ones where that girl is on the phone. I read the top and instictively kept going to the pannel on the right, and then found out there was more info going vertical down the whole thing, which is okay to do usually but confusing at this size.
There also seems to be a lot of empty space that isn't really needed and makes it confusing. With so much area you should do so much more with it, y'know?
But I know it's all hand-done and scanners tend to do that. What drawing programs do you have? Even with paint you could just size it down to like 1000 across or something.
IN SHORT- I was kind of lost. Add more details or use less space or both, and make pannels make sence. I honestly can't come up with critique on the story beause of this ^^;
/two cents
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Thanks for the suggestion, though. I need to work on getting a smaller picture size. It's a problem my manga needs to solve, or rather a problem I need to solve. >.<
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(I can't believe I had forgotten this...I'm such a ******)
Well well. Last time I checked there was only one pic and now the whole army.
Fabulous.
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Rules:
Check the Manga's first chapter cover art. That will be your reference for the time being. Also: To those spriting HoboZato, front/side sprites will be requested, same with the standard version.
You may make any type of variation you wish. Whether it's styled after a fighting game, or whatever. Doesn't matter as long as it fits the criteria.
I will be evaluating every sprite made in case I see a bit of oddities (meaning errors in certain sprites)
Facial expressions are as you choose. If you want to make him look (expression-wise) like Phoenix or Edgeworth, it's all up to you.
Good luck, and godspeed to the lot of you!
And a boot to the head.
PS: More updates.
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