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I've been lurking this sprite forum for about a week now. And by "lurking," I mean, "reading all the new posts AND reading all the way back." But I could only see about 30% of things posted in spoiler tags, so I joined hoping it would help. It didn't. XD''
So I'm here on Firefox, which I installed for the sole reason of looking at sprites in spoiler tags. Here are mine.
In case you're like me and can't see images in spoiler tags, I'll post URLs to. XD''''
[Updates]
7/08/09 | Updated Demyx and Marluxia in the fan section, separated Ace Attorney character and OC sections; Bat and Ami added to OC section, Akbey and Wakana added to Ace Attorney section, some stuff moved around
4/26/09 | Added Marluxia to fan section and got rid of annoying white pixels
4/25/09 | Added Demyx to fan section and 3 WIPs to the WIP section.
2/13/09 | Redid front page. Added stuff to... everywhere except Death Note and Revamps
10/13/08 | Added front-facing young Mia to miscellany section.
8/13/08 | Added Dee Vasquez to revamp section and Kristoph snapshots to spoiler miscellany section.
8/03/08 | Added full-body Kristoph and cropped version to miscellany section, got rid of white pixel on L in Death Note section.
7/28/08 | Added L version 3 to Death Note collab case section, more Mystic Minas to miscellany section, and slightly updated April May revamp in the revamp section.
7/22/08 | Added Mikami and Mello to Death Note collab case section and Mystic Mina to miscellany section.
7/21/08 | Added Kristoph edit to spoiler miscellany section.
7/22/08 | Added progress shots of from-scratch young Kristoph to miscellany section.
7/19/08 | Added from-scratch young Kristoph to miscellany section.
7/14/08 | Added alternate pose April May to miscellany section.
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I'd say
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Gavin looks really well made, although one thing's bothering me. : His normal in court sprite (arms crossed), the face seems kinda "flat" in comparison to others.
Otherwise, perfect.
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Ohh....
Thank you Delsy for the Awesome Game Over Sig! If you're still here, I still love it!
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Ceres- o_o That means a lot coming from you, I've been watching your thread with particular devotion. I'm a big fan.
Thanks for the suggestion! That's probably because Klavier had more hair in his face, and I hardly changed the shading from Klavier. I'll try adding more. n_n
Game Over- XD' I'm flattered?
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Thanks to the combined awesomeness of Ceres and the Vickinator, I shall TAKE OVER THE WORLD!
...Just kidding. But check out the sig they made me!
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Not GS sprites, but I've done Gaia avatar edits, pixel Dollz (for a long time, which is where most of my pixel experience comes in) and one particularly involved Kingdom Hearts: Chain of Memories edit/animation. Plus an odd Pokemon sprite or two.
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Great sprite all together though.
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And thanks for the compliment! n_n
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It's not perfect in a way, but it's still great regardless.
Keep up the great work! =D
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Still the same old...me.
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Updated L and arms-crossed Kristoph. Thanks for the suggestions. n_n I'm working on the objection one.
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Wow, Just when i thought he couldn't get any better, you continue to amaze me.
Also, the Kristoph sprite, Once again, very nicely done.
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WHY DOES HE LOOK SO GOOD?!?!
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...Hopefully someday... xD
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Your Kristoph defense sprites truly amazes me. You do have a skill for this don't you. Keep up the good work I just love it.
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LadyK- I might try Vera's skintone next time I mess with him, then. She's a bit paler.
Updated with my avatar and an April May revamp, which was lots of fun.
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8D And I encourage you to do more April May ones if you can. It looks so awesome and the revamp is very lovely too. Heh, one of my favorite characters in the first game. You did a top notch job. I wonder if you'll make a Misa and Light Sprite as well? L looks so lonely there. </3
;x If you ever do consider taking requests, I'd like to see some newer poses/expressions of April.
...Hopefully someday... xD
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That really is GS4 style April.
Let my hemmorhoids take some action and try mr. "MarveeniusCroissant" ^_____O
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Looks AWESOME!
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LadyK- XD I'm glad! I could try another pose or two, since she wasn't hard (her outfit is really simple). I won't take formal requests though 'cause I have so many things to work on anyway. XD''
I'll be making Light, Misa, Mello and Mikami for sure so far, although those probably won't be from scratch. Light'll be based from Klavier, Misa from Regina (she's the only other one I've worked on so far), Mello from Franziska and Mikami... probably from my Kristoph sprites. XD And the existing ones.
Zinle- You mean, you want to try? I wanna see that! XD Of course, I don't know how much bigger he can be made and still fit on the screen.
Suzune- Thank you!
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Can't wait to see the other Death Note characters, especially Mello. Hur, I think I can see Light in Kyouya's sprites
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Mello is the one I should technically finish first. XD' But Misa is easier.
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I hope one day my shading skills be will as good as yours :p.
(only one remark : On the new pose, perhaps you could pillow shade the arm edges some more)
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And the Kristoph one is very nice!
the 2nd one of April looks a little odd. she needs more of a neck and the pose looks forced.
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Thanks for the suggestion, I'll try that. I had trouble with the arms.
Black-Harmonia- Thanks!
And thanks for the suggestion. Your criticism is appreciated. n_n
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I love it even more because April actually facing forward for once and not like sideways. Your shading is really amazing. I have to practice a bit more before I get that good. <3
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My shading isn't that great actually, I really struggle with cel-shading. XD''''' I think I'm the one who needs more practice.
Updated with my first 100% custom sprite. I'm going to go organize the post better now. XD'''
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Yes please.
And you mad that from scratch that's pretty amazing. Ah, can't quite make out what's that on his left pocket though or maybe it's just my eyes. HIs shoulders aren't as broad as they are when he was younger, hm?
Eh, I'm sure it was just him wearing fancy pancy outfits.The man is perfection ya know. Your shading for this sprite is very flawless.
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But on the note of the Kristoph court sprites, when he's facing directly sideways like that, glasses wouldn't be stuck flat against the eyes. Otherwise, these are completely top notch!
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That's a pocketwatch, which isn't very easy to make obvious. XD'' If you have any ideas, let me know.
They aren't nearly as broad. Honestly, that's because when I made them broader he looked extremely nervous. XD'''' I couldn't find a way to work around that.
Edgeworth was fancy too. XD Even Phoenix, who was only a little fancy in his suit and tie, is less fancy in the future.
Thanks!
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I think I understand what you're saying, but his glasses are almost exactly the same as in his co-council view sprite. I did have the lens on the far side, but his hair covered it. I will try making it stick out a pixel or so more, though. =3 Thanks.
EDIT: Updated the front post with mini-banners and some WIP shots of Young Gavin.
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I must say, these are by far the best sprites I've seen here so far.
Keep up that great work!
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Then did a lot of recoloring and smoothing. XD''
You can get Rotsprite here. It's freeware and very useful. =3 It resizes and rotates sprites without messing up the colors.
http://info.sonicretro.org/RotSprite
Greeny- Thanks! That's a very big compliment! o///o
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Sure, but give credit please. =3 Also, I redrew the suit on the objection one to be accurate, but I haven't updated it here yet. XD''' I will soon though.
Updated the front post with Mikami and Mystic Mina. I also added a spoiler Kristoph edit yesterday, but didn't make a new post announcing it. XD'''
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Thank you Delsy for the Awesome Game Over Sig! If you're still here, I still love it!
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Your sprites really caught my eye, so I figured I'd offer a couple of comments. As a warning, though, most of my comments are on the single pixel level, because I'm crazy like that. Sorry. n_n;
First, April May. I reeeally like how you handled her "revamp" sprite--especially on her hair. Which seems a lot brighter, shinier and dimensional. However, I'm not entirely sure about the pink on her suit... while I know that you're taking the palette from other sprites (in this case, Vera, yes?) the shadows don't seem quite dark enough, making her suit seem a little... washed-out, perhaps? I don't really think I could suggest a better palette, though, so whatever. :3
I think that the slightly warmer pink line that's below the white in her mouth and the more magenta line of her bottom lip should be taken in one pixel on either side. No, seriously. e_e; I think it gives a slightly more "pouty" quality to her bottom lip.
On your April May alternate pose, while I appreciate the frontal view, something is weird about her arms. They seem a tad on the thin side, probably because they're from Trucy, who doesn't have sleeves. Also, I think her breasts are too close together and (strangely enough) a little too large. Because she's not actively squeezing them together in this pose, there should be a slight gap between her breasts (you can look at her breakdown animation or page 69 of "The Art of Gyakuten Saiban" on the official art page). From looking at page 69, I think I'd also say that her breasts start a little too high. There's also a few dark pixels just above the topmost heart button that I don't understand, what are they for?
Onto your Death Note sprites: I really love L~ But for some reason, the bottom edge of his left eye (our right) disappears during his blinking animation. Is this on purpose? It looks a little strange to me.
The shading on his shirt... hm, I'm not sure. With the expanded GS4 palette, it gives off the sense of being shiny, perhaps there are too many colours now? I'm having trouble figuring out how to word it, but do you at least know what I'm getting at?
I was going to point out a few pixels that are making the right side of his face (our left) look jagged, but I think it's easier to just show a picture.
If you zoom in, you can see exactly what I did... just makes things a little smoother, yes?
On the Mikami sprite, there's something bugging me about his face. I think it's the fact that his jaw makes it look as if he's not facing completely straight forward, his mouth and nose look forward, but then his glasses are on a tilt... it's just a little confusing, I think. Maybe if you straighten his glasses and smooth out his chin he wouldn't seem so off-kilter? I'm not even sure if it's an issue, but it seems odd.
Finally, after some intense study of Kristoph's animations, I think that his frontmost chunk of hair (the one in the center of his forehead) should be a little higher in your in-court sprites. Maybe. From a front view, it sticks up off of his head, same as with his profile view. This implies (to me, at least) that that portion of his bangs are lifted away from his face. When he turns his head to the side, you can see a good amount of forehead over his eyebrow.
(Sorry for the April May in the background, I'm using Paint and didn't notice I had transparent on.) Also, from this side-view, I think that the back of his hair comes to too much of a point on yours...? Otherwise, your court sprites are really nicely done. Are you planning to animate his objection? :3
Anyway, sorry if my comments/suggestions are a little too picky, I'm just hardcore into pixel art and wanted to give my input. Also, your avatar rocks. I laughed when I first saw it. And then said, "yesssssss~"
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