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School Maya is perfect, but
Perls hair is bit too long?


I'm proud of School Maya XD
As for Older Pearls, m-maybe... I'll come up with another one soon... once I get the time :oops:
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wow, Why haven't i've seen this before?!, very nice so far.

I see you already made Headphone Klavier, i was recently thinking about making that one, good thing i didn't because it's perfect as it is.

ps: Plumber Krissy made my day, I demand more Mario oriented edits! :gant:
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Ceres wrote:
wow, Why haven't i've seen this before?!, very nice so far.

I see you already made Headphone Klavier, i was recently thinking about making that one, good thing i didn't because it's perfect as it is.

ps: Plumber Krissy made my day, I demand more Mario oriented edits! :gant:


Thanks! =]
After I saw the picture of Headphone Klavier, I just had a go at it, loved how it came out myself XD
Maybe when I have the time, I was thinking of doing Ema x Daisy and Klavier x Luigi, it's all in a matter of time...
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wow, very nice! heehee, Lil' Maya :maya: <3
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wow, very nice! heehee, Lil' Maya :maya: <3


Thanks =]
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*Brings thread from the dead just to show... one lousy sprite XD*

It's been forever since I've last updated, I'm not into spriting much anymore, but I was bored yesterday, didn't felt like drawing and then decided to make something for once.

Professor Layton in the pw world XD -
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Can't say it's bad but I can't say it's good either XD

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PEOPLE, GO AND GET PROFESSOR LAYTON AND THE CURIOUS VILLAGE, YOU'LL NOT REGRET IT! *cough*

And that's about it XD
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double post >.<

Nobody liking my stuff anymore...? Oh well...

Maya, master of Kurain - Image
Just my version of older Maya really

Kristoph + Dahlia = Image
... er... just something random, I like this couple XD

My sprites aren't great or anything I know...
And now, I'll be off...

I like comments...
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...Hopefully someday... xD

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Zinle wrote:
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E.P.I.C!!


He heh, thanks Zinle! =]
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Tiny crossed arms are adorable and epic. XD I see her father's had quite an influence on her.

I also really like your Professor Layton, even though I haven't played it myself. Somehow, his face looks so... right.
His top hat seems a smidge off, though, I think it's at slightly the wrong angle?
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Tiny crossed arms are adorable and epic. XD I see her father's had quite an influence on her.

I also really like your Professor Layton, even though I haven't played it myself. Somehow, his face looks so... right.
His top hat seems a smidge off, though, I think it's at slightly the wrong angle?


He heh, I'm rather proud of the result myself X]
Professor Layton's an awesome game, recommend it! And I agree the hat wrong somehow XD

Anyways! Something I just made

Guess who, it's Edgey-poo! [god that was lame] - Image
Why Edgey, why... are you so damn hot and sexy?!!! XD
Seeing him like that warms me up since for me, it's so cold right now! *drool*
I have no experience with topless men so it could be wrong XP
But hope you guys enjoy! =D
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NICE. NICE NICE NICE.

Only two things really stick out to me-- the right side of his face (our left) seems a little jagged since you've gotten rid of the outline, but if you just copy&paste the original outline back on it looks good again. :D Also, the spot where his wrist meets his forearm seems a little like an "angle" right now, you should maybe stagger the line on his forearm to meet his wrist more gently. (Does that even make sense?)

Anyway, also I really like the use of that silly smile Maya always has on her older sprite, but the area around her right hip (our left) looks strangely lumpy.

And PROFESSOR LAYTON PROFESSOR LAYTON PROFESSOR LAYTON rocks. Although PW-itised, he's kinda creepy because of his tiny, round eyes. >_> but nicely done, nontheless! On the topic of his hat, maybe you could alter something from Trucy? The angle of the hat from the first frame from her "zomg" pose (actual name of the .gif ._.) might work, maybe....
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jeti wrote:
NICE. NICE NICE NICE.

Only two things really stick out to me-- the right side of his face (our left) seems a little jagged since you've gotten rid of the outline, but if you just copy&paste the original outline back on it looks good again. :D Also, the spot where his wrist meets his forearm seems a little like an "angle" right now, you should maybe stagger the line on his forearm to meet his wrist more gently. (Does that even make sense?)

Anyway, also I really like the use of that silly smile Maya always has on her older sprite, but the area around her right hip (our left) looks strangely lumpy.

And PROFESSOR LAYTON PROFESSOR LAYTON PROFESSOR LAYTON rocks. Although PW-itised, he's kinda creepy because of his tiny, round eyes. >_> but nicely done, nontheless! On the topic of his hat, maybe you could alter something from Trucy? The angle of the hat from the first frame from her "zomg" pose (actual name of the .gif ._.) might work, maybe....


Oh yeah, I really tend to notice my mistakes once I'm done, hopefully I'll be able to fix them [and so I have something to do to avoid my school work =D ]
Thanks for commenting on my work! [commented by a pro, I feel happy inside XD] =]
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uh oh double post >.<

Just added animation to smexy Edgey [fixed him up a bit too... sort of] -
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and Kristoph/Dahlia's child [anyone wanna give a name?]
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I stuffed up the eyelids... =3=
*gasp* I didn't notice the white pixel before... I'll fix it up later XD
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You have definitely improved since you started, but there are a lot of sprites that I have issues with. I'll just deal with the most prominent problem I saw for now, though. Maya the Magician has two serious flaws. One is the direction her left upper arm is pointing. The other is the direction her right upper arm is pointing.
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kana-hajime wrote:
uh oh double post >.<

Just added animation to smexy Edgey [fixed him up a bit too... sort of] -
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and Kristoph/Dahlia's child [anyone wanna give a name?]
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I stuffed up the eyelids... =3=
*gasp* I didn't notice the white pixel before... I'll fix it up later XD


As a poor mixing of the two names, how about.... Krystahl?
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Aww soo sweeet
More of her please
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General Luigi wrote:
You have definitely improved since you started, but there are a lot of sprites that I have issues with. I'll just deal with the most prominent problem I saw for now, though. Maya the Magician has two serious flaws. One is the direction her left upper arm is pointing. The other is the direction her right upper arm is pointing.


Hmm... I see. But I'll leave it to rest and try to improve on my new sprites to see that I've improved X]

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As a poor mixing of the two names, how about.... Krystahl?


Hmm... I dunno XD
I sux with names, but maybe... =P

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Aww soo sweeet
More of her please


Ha ha, no worries!
I plan to make more sprites so just wait! =D
But who knows how long it'll take... I already got tests coming up for school =3=

Thanks for commenting guys! =]
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AAAAAH EDGEY'S ABS <3 *ahem* Sorry 'bout that.

Aww, Kristoph and Dahlia's kid is so cute. =) Krystal sounds like a good name. So does Rosalie, for some reason.
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AAAAAH EDGEY'S ABS <3 *ahem* Sorry 'bout that.

Aww, Kristoph and Dahlia's kid is so cute. =) Krystal sounds like a good name. So does Rosalie, for some reason.


Glad you like my edit of Edgey, just go out and say it like you mean it, Egdey's so hot and sexy and you know it! XD

Thanks~ Hmm... Krystal's sounding good I guess =]
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Ok! After a month, I actually update something!

I didn't really like how my oc [Kana Hajime - yes, my user name] looked like so I changed a little, you can see how she was before somewhere in my thread XD

Can't say if I did any better though =\

Spoiler: Sheet
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Got some animations too -

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Oh god the legs, the freaking legs look so... weird and ugly =[

I'll be making more sprites of her in the future... until then... I dunno... XD


Oh yeah, got a another pose for Kristoph/Dahlia's child! XP

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I think I'll name her... mini me... *cough* I mean, Victoria [which was suggested by DahliaXKristoph over at the Kristph/Dahlia thread] It sounds really suitable for her actually [well... at lease I think so] =|
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The only thing wrong in the sheet are the legs.
Too high if ya compare it with the arms.
I suggest ya try to put your hands that down and still stand straight. Not working, huh?
Just needs longering the body.
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Au contraire sénor Zinle, The body doesnt need to be longer, The legs/Hips need to be wider.
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Ceres wrote:
Au contraire sénor Zinle, The body doesnt need to be longer, The legs/Hips need to be wider.

Touché and engarde!! XD
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Ceres wrote:
Au contraire sénor Zinle, The body doesnt need to be longer, The legs/Hips need to be wider.

You're mixing Franch and Spanish there, you know.

And it's not true, the crotch line is too high. Though it may seem weird, that
particular point is very important in proportions.
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Hmm... thanks you guys, I'll try to fix that up later, I really suck at proportions >.<
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Greeny wrote:
Ceres wrote:
Au contraire sénor Zinle, The body doesnt need to be longer, The legs/Hips need to be wider.

You're mixing Franch and Spanish there, you know.

And it's not true, the crotch line is too high. Though it may seem weird, that
particular point is very important in proportions.



Yes Greeny, I was aware of that. -_-

And sorry but No, my point is still valid. Just lowering the crotch will not help much in the overal result, It might be nessecary but widening the hips/legs will have more inpact.
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Ah, but it's still very necessary. So my point is valid, since you claimed
the body didn't need to be longer.
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Y-you two are making me feel too nervous now... o.0"

So I tried fixing it a little -
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If there's still mistakes [which I have a feeling...], maybe you can draw out how big or what ever needs fixing? =\


And I got another sprite done here -
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She's wearing the same clothes like Edgey 'cause she's his assistant XP
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Well...Going better.
MY point was that she still needs a stomach.
Try put your hands like that.
Now...Compare ya body and ya hands position with sprite.

Need a "tummy"...Any hjälppen?
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^^ those are all really awesome! Keep up the good work
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^^ those are all really awesome! Keep up the good work


Aww... thanks for the nice comment! =]
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Looking better, but you need more hip. =< It's hard to see how the proportion of the body.
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Can I use your Victoria sprites for a fangame that I'm making? You don't have to worry about making talking sprites.
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XD, I laugh at that banner every time I see it in my pictures folder.
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Cool banner LOL
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WOW! These are actualy pretty good.
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