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Overly Absurd and Dramatic Segmenting Sequence.
BEGIN!
rhombus wrote:
My main issue was just that Kristoph's motive and his plans don't really jive all that well. Let's break it down. The ones he's really the angriest at are Phoenix and Zak Gramarye. The forged evidence is the intended method to exact his revenge. If all goes according to his plans, Phoenix is humiliated, his reputation ruined, and he's disbarred - this part obviously was successful.
Then why the heck didn't he just get Phoenix the "Strictest Punishment"!? Instead, he made sure Phoenix only lost his license, and that caused Phoenix to search relentlessly for the real truth behind what happened... something Gavin would have KNOWN Phoenix would do. (Since he does it Every Single Case and all...
rhombus wrote:
If all went according to the plan for Zak, Zak would be found guilty (due to Phoenix's apparent indiscretions) and sentenced to death/prison... also, this part "worked," although Kristoph couldn't foresee Zak disappearing and going into hiding.
Actually, because Zak didn't SPECIFICALLY get arrested, that part didn't "Work" at all! Zak was "Free", and Kristoph felt his reputation was in danger.
rhombus wrote:
The Mishams are simply tools to be used to create the evidence to set up Phoenix and Zak, yet from the very START, with no real assurance that this plan would even work in any way, they're marked for death, as Kristoph likely mails them the poison trap items before Phoenix even presents it in court.
No way. Vera clearly says that Kristoph gave her the item himself, which was when she saw "The Devil". I WILL give you Drew's death being by Mail-Order, however, seeing as how that is said in the game.
rhombus wrote:
Now, as I said, Phoenix and Zak were the "real" targets, yet he doesn't kill either of them (Zak possibly through indirect execution as a consequence of his guilty verdict), and even in his ideal circumstances, Phoenix would simply be disbarred, not killed or harmed in any further way.
I'm going to say you were tired or high when you typed the first two lines, because the problem there is so obvious, for a sec there, I thought I was going to collapse. Anyways, Phoenix would get a prison sentence, if the decision for the "Strictest Punishment" was made... He would also likely be fined, and given a "Permanent Disbarrment", in which he could NEVER be a lawyer in the state of Los Angeles ever again.
This is a reference to the fate of one Jack Thompson... minus the prison sentence, of course.
rhombus wrote:
His hatred for those two is so strong, yet the repurcussions for those two are far less severe (and far less guaranteed) than the Mishams, who will almost certainly die. Also, he clearly "researched" the Mishams and know they're just a loving single father and an innocent young girl, yet for them it's instant death. Involving them wasn't even necessarily, yet they get the axe, while Phoenix and Zak have far more nebulous fates.
How could he have predicted "Zak will vanish"!? He thought Drew would have died within 3 days... And it took 7 years. If he was so confident, he wouldn't have watched Drew Misham for all those years... He also watched Phoenix, and Brushel. he left NONE of their fates to chance.
rhombus wrote:
Now, there's also the fact that the plan just plain sucked. There were just so many things that could go wrong. Hell, even if things went perfectly RIGHT (as planned, at least) there were alot of glaring problems, but I'll get to that a bit later. Like I said, the Mishams get shafted from the start, as they get the poisoned items just from creating the evidence.
The plan was brilliant. For the Mishams, their "Murder" was a stroke of genius: "Give them poisoned items, and wait for them to use them". Kristoph could NEVER be connected to Drew & Vera Misham unless he confessed to knowing them, or to the evidence fabrication. IF they died, and Kristoph's crime wasn't revealed, the most likely suspect would have been Phoenix Wright, the suspected "Client" of theirs, who requested a forgery, only to have the creators "Betray" him.
I'll get to Zak and Phoenix in a moment.
rhombus wrote:
Couldn't Kristoph have come up with some method of vengeance to just go straight for Zak and Phoenix without involving these innocent outsiders?
Drew and Vera are the only two people who could state, under oath, that Kristoph was the one who requested the forgery. I suppose next you're going to state why...
They got in the way of Kristoph's plan. Plain and Simple, Black and White.
rhombus wrote:
Or hell, if he has no imagination, couldn't he just kill those two directly instead of the Mishams?
If Drew and Vera died, their bodies could take Days, Weeks, even MONTHS to locate! Plenty of time to fabricate an alibi. You gotta realize something, ese: If you don't try to think like Kristoph Gavin, you won't be able to understand ANYTHING about this case. Drew and Vera only had ONE contact with the outside world: The Mailbox. Their windows were boarded up, the door was always locked... They wanted to remain hidden from society. Without a doubt, no one would find them unless it was by sheer chance.
Now, if he killed Zak and Phoenix, he could be linked to both murders in a heartbeat, by his own BROTHER! And yes, Klavier would attack Kristoph in an instant, as Klavier fights for the truth, much like Phoenix, Apollo, and Mia. He wouldn't cover it up.
rhombus wrote:
I mean it's obvious his hatred and "motives" are strong enough so that he has no qualms with murder, so why inflict the harshest punishment (death) on those least worthy of the punishment in Kristoph's eyes?
*Slaps rhombus in the face*
THEY WERE THE BIGGEST THREAT!!! Also, what the hell do you mean "least worthy of the punishment
in Kristoph's eyes"!? He killed them, so it's OBVIOUS that he thought they were worthy of punishment!!!
rhombus wrote:
Then there's the delivery of the system, any number of things could have gone wrong with his delivering of the evidence to Phoenix - maybe Trucy wouldn't really give it to Phoenix, maybe Trucy would see someone or something at that time that linked that forged sheet back to Kristoph, etc.
Okay, I'll give you this on the first 1 and a half lines... but that the heck is the rest of your message supposed to mean!? If Trucy tried to testify as to Kristoph being the one who gave the note, she could be easily discredited, for MULTIPLE reasons! She's a kid, for one. She's an accomplice to the vanishing of Zak Gramarye, for two. Finally, her "Father" is Phoenix Wright, and thus, she would be considered as "Protecting Him".
rhombus wrote:
Also, the hope that Phoenix uses it exactly as planned has way too many variables. Let's say Phoenix DOESN'T use the evidence for whatever reason (he finds it fishy at the last second, or Klavier doesn't push the idea of the diary in the first place, etc.)
Listen up: Kristoph DISCUSSED it with his brother before the trial. He KNEW Klavier would try to get Zak convicted, so why wouldn't Klavier pursue the diary angle!? Klavier wanted to do two things: Convict Zak, and prove that Phoenix "submitted" illegal evidence.
And since I proved the that Klavier would have presented the diary no matter what, I ALSO don't need to explain how Phoenix's actions were "unable to be predicted"... Unless I HAVE to, but the answer is incredibly obvious.
rhombus wrote:
Kristoph has now involved the Mishams for no reason (and he's forced to kill them and/or pay them off or whatever)
They were paid for the forgery. They could be seen as accomplices as of right then. (If it isn't obvious, I'm losing my temper at some of the arguments you're using, ese, and me losing my temper isn't something common!)
rhombus wrote:
Phoenix isn't implicated in any way, and hell, even Zak might get off since the trial was leaning more against Valant till the forgery came up. There's also the possibility that even with the forged evidence, Zak is found not guilty (since the evidence against him was horrible, and Valant still seemed more guilty) but that would imply the judge actually be logical and impartial, which obviously can't happen (Stupid Judge, that's a rant for another time though).
The Judge has NOTHING to do with your argument there! The legal system SPECIFICALLY STATES that the client has to be considered "Completely Innocent" before they can be declared "Not Guilty" by PW Law!!!
You might call it "Guilty until proven innocent", as opposed to how it's the other way around in reality.
Zak Gramarye couldn't be proven "Completely Innocent" at ANY point of the trial! Even at the end, The Judge was only going to ask the defense and prosecution to investigate the issue further, NOT to end the trial. Zak would be convicted unless Phoenix could prove WITHOUT A DOUBT that Zak wasn't the killer. "Suspicions" are useless in the PW Legal World. Didn't you play 4-3!?
rhombus wrote:
Now, let's assume that Kristoph's schemes work exactly AS PLANNED. It already worked on Phoenix and Zak (despite Zak's vanishing act), but it failed on the Mishams, as they didn't use the poison traps as planned. Let's assume that they DO though. The poison stamp actually WAS a good idea, as the stamp disappears into the mail and leaves Vera as a suspect, or at least leaves it up in the air. BUT, at this point Vera is 12 years old and has no plausible motive or method of killing AND Drew has just testified in a murder case about forging evidence. They search the apartment, find Vera's bottle of nail polish which matches the poison...
Immediately impossible. They have no reason to check the nail polish for poison. They have no reason to check the nail polish for ANYTHING! Vera Misham is a suspect! S-U-S-P-E-C-T! Why would they check the nail polish bottle for anything? They didin't check it when she was considered a suspect in 4-4, they wouldn't check it then!
Vera Misham is the defendant. As we all know the Prosecution doesn't need to bring up a motive for why they committed murder... Heck, they could always pull a "Machi" and say "She was the daughter of the victim! She had plenty of time to come up with a motive! And unless the Defense can prove that the motive is either Non-Existant, or that someone else had a motive, than Vera would still be the Prime suspect. This is assuming she's even ALIVE!!!
Lets say that Vera Misham sees her fathers' dead body, and gets exceedingly nervous... She bites her polished nails, and dies.
The End.
rhombus wrote:
...she tells them where she got the bottle, and it leads back to Kristoph. Let's assume SHE dies first. She's 12 years old and murdered. Again, they'll find the bottle, know the connection with the trial and the forging and liknk it back to Kristoph.
I already explained how Kristoph wouldn't be suspected. Moving on...
rhombus wrote:
Now let's assume that somehow the two both die at the same time
Okay, here we go! FINALLY something good!
rhombus wrote:
...the authorities would still find the poison, see the obvious connection to the forging case...
Yes... YES... ALMOST THERE...
rhombus wrote:
...and Kristoph is implicated again.
... If my hand wasn't holding my face in frustration, it would be punching yours out of annoyance. I explained this numerous times now, so lets move on.
rhombus wrote:
Killing the forgers to "clean things up" really is a horrible plan in the first place (even worse when we realize that the two in question are a hermit and a 12-year old girl). Kristoph actually got LUCKY that the two didn't get poisoned right away... the 7-year delay made everyone forget about the previous case, Kristoph's prison sentence was the best possible alibi, and the fact that only Drew died (and Vera was by then grown up) made Vera a far more viable murder suspect. It worked out far better than his original, crappy plan.
Kristoph was entirely unlucky at the fact that it happened 7 years later, when Spark Brushel noticed that envelope being mailed. If Spark wasn't there, no one could possibly know where Drew Misham's "Murder Weapon" went, if it was mailed 7 years ago... It was Kristoph's bad luck that Brushel saw the yellow envelope... If he didn't, then Kristoph wouldn't have been able to be connected to the murder of EITHER Misham. (Don't bother saying that they both have Ariadoney Nail Polish... Klavier Gavin easily disregards the relevance)
His plan was brilliant. He would NEVER be suspected back then. Phoenix would have been, because everything was pointing to Phoenix as being the one who requested the forgery. This kills off 3/4 people who Kristoph was after. And the last thing he needs to do then, is watch Brushel and Trucy until Zak comes out of hiding... then kill him too.
It is, without a doubt, a brilliant plan. Period. And I
really hope I don't have to explain all my arguments here in further detail any time soon.