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Squall's Sprites! come and take a look! PLZ!Topic%20Title
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Future Ace Attorney

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some color edits and changes as well as some OC i did from a novel i was writing in english so enjoy :keiko:
O and leave your comments about them aswell i know i need alot more work on them but i have 2 work with microsoft paint so plz keep kind with the comments :phoenix:

Requests are On!


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?????? - the prosecutor
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Robert Godworth - the detective
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Neku Hikari
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Random color edits
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Metal Gear Phoenix Series
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Funny Randoms I Made (warning! swear words)
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Requests
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The only time when a lawyer can cry is when its all over..... but till its over they give it all they got!
Im Begging you to see my sprites!!!!! http://forums.court-records.net/sprites/squall-sprites-come-and-take-look-plz-t12536.html


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The only time when a lawyer can cry is when its all over..... but till its over they give it all they got!
Im Begging you to see my sprites!!!!! http://forums.court-records.net/sprites/squall-sprites-come-and-take-look-plz-t12536.html
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The only time when a lawyer can cry is when its all over..... but till its over they give it all they got!
Im Begging you to see my sprites!!!!! http://forums.court-records.net/sprites/squall-sprites-come-and-take-look-plz-t12536.html
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...Hopefully someday... xD

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So far so good.

Even MORE known line:
Editing makes the world better XD
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The defense is So Zetta Slow!

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Ok, a few suggestions, first don't save in jpg, XD secondly editing is your best friend, don't try to recolor a person, and try to pass it off as an oc.
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~ Credit to the sig goes to...wait, I made the sig!
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...Hopefully someday... xD

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FoolMeNever wrote:
don't try to recolor a person, and try to pass it off as an oc.

Hehe...I changed the eyebrows :redd:
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Editing posts is you friend. JPEG isn't.
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a few tips 1:whats his personallity try getting that in your head before making the sprite is he a cocky attourny is he calm?
2:try mixing and matching sprites to make it look more origional
3:SAVE AS .PNG

those are my usual steps before posting a sprite....sorry for being kinda blunt
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I hate Klaviema >_>

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squall-lionheart wrote:
...but i have 2 work with micro soft paint so plz keep kind with the comments :phoenix:


ARRGH! When will people stop using that as an excuse! I use nothing but paint for my work: I have tried many other things but I like paint much better. It's so simple and easy to use... And plenty of spriters much better than me feel the same. You just gotta learn to use it, that's all.

About the sprite itself...

The colour of the Jacket is too bright and unnatural: When choosing colours with the colour picker, drag the marker halfway to the grey at the bottom.

The hair: Needs shading. Also, for lines such as the ones down the hair, I prefer to use the line tool.

Oh, and as people have said, SAVE AS .PNG!!!
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...Hopefully someday... xD

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Ha...! That's one big K.O, Jibber XD
But yeah. Hair need outlines and the sleeves bit darker color, that's true.
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@Jibber talking about Paint: Ugh... yeah... I fing GIMP much harder to use and only use it for transparentising/animations.

I agree with Jib and Zin.
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I hate Klaviema >_>

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Zinle wrote:
Ha...! That's one big K.O, Jibber XD


I think I sounded meaner in that post than I meant to be :godot:
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Ok thanks for the advice. this waz my 1st time making them so i need all the help in the world :garyuu:
ill take all your advice into concideration wen i make my next one of james :godot:
The only time when a lawyer can cry is when its all over..... but till its over they give it all they got!
Im Begging you to see my sprites!!!!! http://forums.court-records.net/sprites/squall-sprites-come-and-take-look-plz-t12536.html
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The only time when a lawyer can cry is when its all over..... but till its over they give it all they got!
Im Begging you to see my sprites!!!!! http://forums.court-records.net/sprites/squall-sprites-come-and-take-look-plz-t12536.html
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i think i sh** my pants

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awwwwwwwwhhhh where did the book go?
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that waz an accident but its coming back on now
The only time when a lawyer can cry is when its all over..... but till its over they give it all they got!
Im Begging you to see my sprites!!!!! http://forums.court-records.net/sprites/squall-sprites-come-and-take-look-plz-t12536.html
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The only time when a lawyer can cry is when its all over..... but till its over they give it all they got!
Im Begging you to see my sprites!!!!! http://forums.court-records.net/sprites/squall-sprites-come-and-take-look-plz-t12536.html
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yayz :will:
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lol that waz wen i got sidetracked from doing some of James' sprites lol, ill be doing much more of them i reckon but im sorta concentrating on james ATM. but i wish more pplz could come and c my sprites : :sadshoe:
The only time when a lawyer can cry is when its all over..... but till its over they give it all they got!
Im Begging you to see my sprites!!!!! http://forums.court-records.net/sprites/squall-sprites-come-and-take-look-plz-t12536.html
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heh sorry the new one just needs more shades on the eyes and hair thats all
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ok thanks :garyuu:
The only time when a lawyer can cry is when its all over..... but till its over they give it all they got!
Im Begging you to see my sprites!!!!! http://forums.court-records.net/sprites/squall-sprites-come-and-take-look-plz-t12536.html
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Here you go Ike. the hair is difficult but that's the best i could do as i am in class lol :gymshoe:

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The only time when a lawyer can cry is when its all over..... but till its over they give it all they got!
Im Begging you to see my sprites!!!!! http://forums.court-records.net/sprites/squall-sprites-come-and-take-look-plz-t12536.html
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better definatly better just look at some offical sprites and learn from those just saying
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k thanks for the advice currently working using paint so bit more time consuming but bit more satisfiying
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The only time when a lawyer can cry is when its all over..... but till its over they give it all they got!
Im Begging you to see my sprites!!!!! http://forums.court-records.net/sprites/squall-sprites-come-and-take-look-plz-t12536.html
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I hate Klaviema >_>

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I like paint. Could never use anything more complicated, it's mostly pointless.
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i only use paint because i dont have the money for the fancy programs to make the pictures
The only time when a lawyer can cry is when its all over..... but till its over they give it all they got!
Im Begging you to see my sprites!!!!! http://forums.court-records.net/sprites/squall-sprites-come-and-take-look-plz-t12536.html
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Try GIMP. It's free.
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ok thanks i might give it a try
The only time when a lawyer can cry is when its all over..... but till its over they give it all they got!
Im Begging you to see my sprites!!!!! http://forums.court-records.net/sprites/squall-sprites-come-and-take-look-plz-t12536.html
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heeheheh i use gimp to animate stuff i cant do much else by myself
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No DSis in the courtroom please.

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I really don't see what other fancy programs can do for you.
Maybe make some nice text or something.
And transparency.
Paint is all you need really.
There isn't an option on photobucket or gimp that is like
"EASY CUSTOM HAIR"
or "SHADING YOUR SPRITE"
It can help with tiny things, but it can get really complicated.
I like paint best.
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I hate Klaviema >_>

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SupwithyouSammie wrote:
I really don't see what other fancy programs can do for you.
Maybe make some nice text or something.
And transparency.
Paint is all you need really.
There isn't an option on photobucket or gimp that is like
"EASY CUSTOM HAIR"
or "SHADING YOUR SPRITE"
It can help with tiny things, but it can get really complicated.
I like paint best.


QFT
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i tried using GIMP and the result is...... FAIL! :nixiesob:
The only time when a lawyer can cry is when its all over..... but till its over they give it all they got!
Im Begging you to see my sprites!!!!! http://forums.court-records.net/sprites/squall-sprites-come-and-take-look-plz-t12536.html
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yeah it is kina hard too use.....
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i think i'll stick with paint for a bit longer :redd:
The only time when a lawyer can cry is when its all over..... but till its over they give it all they got!
Im Begging you to see my sprites!!!!! http://forums.court-records.net/sprites/squall-sprites-come-and-take-look-plz-t12536.html
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i also use Adobe Photoshop Elements. it pretty good. its pretty usefull its like a better version of paint so i felt more comfortable with it :godot:
The only time when a lawyer can cry is when its all over..... but till its over they give it all they got!
Im Begging you to see my sprites!!!!! http://forums.court-records.net/sprites/squall-sprites-come-and-take-look-plz-t12536.html
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here is a new picture of James objecting :b33r:
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The only time when a lawyer can cry is when its all over..... but till its over they give it all they got!
Im Begging you to see my sprites!!!!! http://forums.court-records.net/sprites/squall-sprites-come-and-take-look-plz-t12536.html
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...Hopefully someday... xD

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Top of the head needs lining too...back of the head: good.
Njaa...Could use some shading in the hair, but othervise: Nice.
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thank you for the advice, i had to do this quickly b4 i went to bed but i am going to revise it wen i get home and have time to. shading is the most annoying thing for hair in my opinion but o well i still a high skool kid so wat u gonna do? :phoenix:
The only time when a lawyer can cry is when its all over..... but till its over they give it all they got!
Im Begging you to see my sprites!!!!! http://forums.court-records.net/sprites/squall-sprites-come-and-take-look-plz-t12536.html
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*scribble scribble*

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-__- Gah, age isn't an excuse for anything. Shading is hard, but...like, SupwithyouSammie is in highschool, amirite? I'm in highschool, and I can...make stuff darker. Haha.

But don' worry, you'll get the hang of it =)
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aka Ami <3

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I've seen quite a few Apollo edits. Usually, it's just blue suit and slightly different hair. But YOU are different. No, you didn't conform. You went with green. A true rebel!

But in all seriousness, you are pretty good. The only real thing I can point out is the hair. It doesn't really look like it's with the rest of the sprite age-wise (in general, not the character's age).

My favorite of the bunch is easily "Prosecuting for Dummies".

Two words: LAUGHED. MY. ASS. OFF. THIS. WAS. REALLY. GOOD. I GUESS THIS IS MORE THAN TWO WORDS.
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