Re: [22/10/08] 'Lawyerman!' - Part Deux
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fatalfeline wrote:
I actually find that a little... too ridiculous. XD
Hmm.... Maybe he should just keep his graduation cap just to make him "Stickler"-ish? :P
Hmm.... Maybe he should just keep his graduation cap just to make him "Stickler"-ish? :P
Anyways- I think we sgould atleast make the little thing at the end of the string connected to the hat (Whatever it's called) a skull or something. Just to help establish he is indeed evil.
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Wocky Kitaki wrote:
fatalfeline wrote:
I actually find that a little... too ridiculous. XD
Hmm.... Maybe he should just keep his graduation cap just to make him "Stickler"-ish? :P
Hmm.... Maybe he should just keep his graduation cap just to make him "Stickler"-ish? :P
Anyways- I think we sgould atleast make the little thing at the end of the string connected to the hat (Whatever it's called) a skull or something. Just to help establish he is indeed evil.
Yeah, TRYING to be evil. XD
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Why evil? Stickler isn't on the side of evil, nor good, he should be on the side of science! Thought he could research why someone is evil or good.
That sounds good too. Should I attempt to write up his profile?
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fatalfeline wrote:
Fey Sage wrote:
Why evil? Stickler isn't on the side of evil, nor good, he should be on the side of science! Thought he could research why someone is evil or good.
That sounds good too. Should I attempt to write up his profile?
I'd say 'go for it'! I wonder what character we might focus on next (*cough*Eldoon*cough*)
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Wocky Kitaki wrote:
fatalfeline wrote:
Fey Sage wrote:
Why evil? Stickler isn't on the side of evil, nor good, he should be on the side of science! Thought he could research why someone is evil or good.
That sounds good too. Should I attempt to write up his profile?
I'd say 'go for it'! I wonder what character we might focus on next (*cough*Eldoon*cough*)
...Ceres will have a fit. XD
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"Professor Panties" - Since the dawn of its existence, the species homo sapiens has always pursued knowledge. How the world works, the meaning of the universe, or even where to find lunch. Now in Los Angeles, 2016, fledgling scientist Wesley Stickler takes this pursuit of knowledge to its logical extreme. He follows no side, but pursues both the heroes and the villains all in the name of science. He will often be found trying to find the reason behind superpowers, sneaking into evil meeting rooms to observe villains, or stealing every female super's panties, especially Magician's. However, because of this, all of his subjects are extremely annoyed by him.
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Thought it said Manly Bikini... >.<
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, I should have written something else.
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Although Fey, I think your idea is awesome.
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But she really doesn't hit me as a fighting type at all, more of a healing teacher, like has been mentioned before.
Well, since we're considering Bikini... how about Iris? Also because of Miss Murder and all...
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fatalfeline wrote:
Well, maybe Bikini was a very good fighter in her youth... :grossberg:
But she really doesn't hit me as a fighting type at all, more of a healing teacher, like has been mentioned before.
Well, since we're considering Bikini... how about Iris? Also because of Miss Murder and all...
But she really doesn't hit me as a fighting type at all, more of a healing teacher, like has been mentioned before.
Well, since we're considering Bikini... how about Iris? Also because of Miss Murder and all...
How about Lady Life? She could have a healing touch, that heal anything, which makes her a dangerous enemy to Pefection and Aquinine, since she could heal Perfection and literally kill Aquinine, also she could have the Warm Stare, that when she looks at someone, she makes them happy ans also makes them remember some good memories. Her clothes would be the typical RPG healing mage clothes.
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How about Lady Life? She could have a healing touch, that heal anything, which makes her a dangerous enemy to Pefection and Aquinine, since she could heal Perfection and literally kill Aquinine, also she could have the Warm Stare, that when she looks at someone, she makes them happy ans also makes them remember some good memories. Her clothes would be the typical RPG healing mage clothes.
Hmm... that would make her a nice contrast to Miss Murder, but I'm having different thoughts...
In the game she mentioned that she has no spiritual power at all. Maybe she doesn't have any powers or fighting ability... but she makes it through dangerous situations through sheer force of will. I think that would make her impressive as a character. But I really like your idea too, Fey Sage!
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I also tought of a perfect line for her:
"There is no evil in this world...only weak people and bad hearts."
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Fey Sage wrote:
Maybe she only discover her powers later? In the start, she doesn't have any power, and uses her will like you said fatalfeline, but later, she could be blessed with these powers, because of her actions.
I also tought of a perfect line for her:
"There is no evil in this world...only weak people and bad hearts."
I also tought of a perfect line for her:
"There is no evil in this world...only weak people and bad hearts."
That sounds really good!
"Bad hearts" sounds kind of awkward though. How about "cold hearts" or "weak hearts"?Who would bless her? Maybe a Misty character? Come on, we've GOT to have the Final Fey! ^_^
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Fey Sage wrote:
Wocky, how about we if "fuse" the two ideas? Like, when he survived the explosion, he discovered he had healing powers, but he only use it on noodles, making them very healthy, and because of this he is invited to the Hazakura training center by Bikini.
Fine with me.
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Fey Sage wrote:
I know the perfect moment for her to be blessed with the powers, Lawyerman is about to be killed by Miss Murder, and then Iris prays to Ami Fey to help Lawyerman, so she is blessed with her healing powers and the Warm Stare, turning her into Lady Life and making her the opposite of Miss Murder, then she could revive a dead Lawyerman, and support him in the fight.
EPIC
Even if it does sound a bit "deus ex machina". XD
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fatalfeline wrote:
Fey Sage wrote:
I know the perfect moment for her to be blessed with the powers, Lawyerman is about to be killed by Miss Murder, and then Iris prays to Ami Fey to help Lawyerman, so she is blessed with her healing powers and the Warm Stare, turning her into Lady Life and making her the opposite of Miss Murder, then she could revive a dead Lawyerman, and support him in the fight.
EPIC
Even if it does sound a bit "deus ex machina". XD
But aren't deus ex machinas, the basis for those kind of characters?
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Fey Sage wrote:
fatalfeline wrote:
Fey Sage wrote:
I know the perfect moment for her to be blessed with the powers, Lawyerman is about to be killed by Miss Murder, and then Iris prays to Ami Fey to help Lawyerman, so she is blessed with her healing powers and the Warm Stare, turning her into Lady Life and making her the opposite of Miss Murder, then she could revive a dead Lawyerman, and support him in the fight.
EPIC
Even if it does sound a bit "deus ex machina". XD
But aren't deus ex machinas, the basis for those kind of characters?
...Good point. XD
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DAMN YOU FOR POSTING THAT LINK.
NOW TV TROPES WILL RUIN MY LIFE, AGAIN.
But yes, Sage, your ideas are indeed EPIC. Have a cookie!
I'm actually suprised that we didn't bring up Iris before.
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So... should she be connected to Lawyerman before the series even starts? Like his ex-girlfriend or something? Maybe he does a mission relating to the Feys or Miss Murder and finds out she's involved and they decide to help each other?
Keep in mind we're trying to keep this as canon-pairing-free as possible, with the exception of Maggey/Gumshoe and Kristoph/Viola. (of course, subtext is a whole different story...
)
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Meh, I'm too tired today. I'll look over it all tomorrow when I'm fresher. :) Nice to see you're sparking ideas off by yourselves now as well, was a bit worried I'd have to keep prodding you throughout the entire project. :3
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fatalfeline wrote:
Okay then, we're liking the Iris idea.... MOAR DISCUSSION! *clap clap*
So... should she be connected to Lawyerman before the series even starts? Like his ex-girlfriend or something? Maybe he does a mission relating to the Feys or Miss Murder and finds out she's involved and they decide to help each other?
Keep in mind we're trying to keep this as canon-pairing-free as possible, with the exception of Maggey/Gumshoe and Kristoph/Viola. (of course, subtext is a whole different story... )
So... should she be connected to Lawyerman before the series even starts? Like his ex-girlfriend or something? Maybe he does a mission relating to the Feys or Miss Murder and finds out she's involved and they decide to help each other?
Keep in mind we're trying to keep this as canon-pairing-free as possible, with the exception of Maggey/Gumshoe and Kristoph/Viola. (of course, subtext is a whole different story...
)Maybe Lawyerman, Stargazer and Starstorm decides to train under Bikini, to become more stronger, and when Lawyerman arrives he meets Iris, and finds her strangely familiar, other characters could train under her as well, during that time, like Cravatman, Jazz, Butzman and Whiptra (despite being a hero, Bikini could also train villains, and even them hold her in high regard, I can even imagine, the great sensei Bikini or wise master Bikini.)
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... wasn't the whole point in PW that she didn't have any? That she was actually, in some ways, skeptical about the whole channeling thing.
Also, pay attention guys! She's the one subbing for Dahlia during her trial, remember :D (Not that Nick knows it's her, he thinks it's Dahlia)
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So, Bikini is this wise Sensei who trains people, regardless of character, and Iris gets blessed with healing powerz. Awesome. :3
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And Bikini still would be a hero, despite training villains.
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If you need an artist I guess I could attempt to do a comic... But I'm not very good at action scenes. >_> I might do a sample one, though.
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But she has no powers, so she's an associate. Somewhere between good and neutral. :)
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If Bikini was a superhero, she'd be a tweener because she was helping the villains. Doesn't mean she's a nasty person at all.
But she has no powers, so she's an associate. Somewhere between good and neutral. :)
But she has no powers, so she's an associate. Somewhere between good and neutral. :)
That's what I was thinking.
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Maybe she only accept the villains, that she can feel that have some good on them? Like villains that she know that could changes sides? Maybe making them change sides, it's the main reason for her to accept villains? Maybe some of her students betrayed her and became villains?
That sounds very much like Bikini. ^_^
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