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Ace Attorney:Partners in Justice (OLD THREAD, PLEASE LOCK)Topic%20Title
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Hi :godot:

Well I mentioned in my sprite topic that I was making a fangame. Well here it is!

Spoiler: Cover Art
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It's supposed to be what I would like GS5 to be. Therefore I am going to make it as Canon as possible, But still adding my own touches to the basic AA formula.

It's set a year after AJ. Pheonix has got back his badge and is reunited with the courtroom. Meet new characters and old as he and Apollo fight for the truth!

You will play mainly as Pheonix and Apollo, I'll probably have a flashback case too.

I'll be using MB's Casemaker 3 (When It finally comes out), If for some reason I can't I'll use something else (probably PyWright)

I know the banner sucks, It's just a temporary thing.

Please Comment! :gs4-people:
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Re: Ace Attorney: Partners in Justice, Jibbers FangameTopic%20Title

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Erm, sorry, but I'm going to have to be blunt.
Those sprites are pretty bad.
I know my sprites aren't fantastic, but even for scratch sprites...o_o;
The anatomy isn't that great and there's an alarming lack of shading. Especially on the head.
The details for the magician prosecutor (and the two witnesses(?) scars) look very pixelly.
Also, the idea is played out a bit too much. Phoenix and Apollo teaming up, that is. Especially when GS5 comes out and completely murders your story. It'd be best if you just kept to one Attorney.

If you want to improve your spriting (which should be your priority before you start making the game itself) then you should examine existing sprites and look at how they're drawn. It's also pretty easy to get away with cropping parts of other sprites as long as you recolour and alter it (even a whole body or face. My witness for my first case is made up of Ron's body and Terry Fawles' head, yet it's hardly recognisable). You also need to be careful with colours. Your prosecutors clothes are a bit too MS paintish. Plus, it doesn't have enough shading.

Sorry to be so harsh. Doing this sort of thing kills me because I generally like to be a nice guy. I'd gladly help you out, but I have my own game to think about.
Re: Ace Attorney: Partners in Justice, Jibbers FangameTopic%20Title
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Ice the frosty cat wrote:
Erm, sorry, but I'm going to have to be blunt.
Those sprites are pretty bad.
I know my sprites aren't fantastic, but even for scratch sprites...o_o;
The anatomy isn't that great and there's an alarming lack of shading. Especially on the head.
The details for the magician prosecutor (and the two witnesses(?) scars) look very pixelly.
Also, the idea is played out a bit too much. Phoenix and Apollo teaming up, that is. Especially when GS5 comes out and completely murders your story. It'd be best if you just kept to one Attorney.

If you want to improve your spriting (which should be your priority before you start making the game itself) then you should examine existing sprites and look at how they're drawn. It's also pretty easy to get away with cropping parts of other sprites as long as you recolour and alter it (even a whole body or face. My witness for my first case is made up of Ron's body and Terry Fawles' head, yet it's hardly recognisable). You also need to be careful with colours. Your prosecutors clothes are a bit too MS paintish. Plus, it doesn't have enough shading.

Sorry to be so harsh. Doing this sort of thing kills me because I generally like to be a nice guy. I'd gladly help you out, but I have my own game to think about.


I agree with this. (Though I'm not a big fan of Ice's sprites either... But this isn't the topic.) Some of it looks too MS-Paint-ish. Also, the new prosecutor's head looks weird and Phoenix's and the important, new prosecutor is covered, and it looks like. And again, I'm not a big fan of too many attorneys theory either.
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Re: Ace Attorney: Partners in Justice, Jibbers FangameTopic%20Title
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I know they need to be improved, It's a work in progress. I'll probably have plenty of time till casemaker though, so it'll be sort-out able.
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Re: Ace Attorney: Partners in Justice, Jibber's FangameTopic%20Title
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HUGE BUMP:

Well, still no progress on the programming side (only stencyl release date confirmation is "By the end of the year"), but I have a little feature update for you...


New Forensics:

Handwriting analysis:

You have two samples of writing. You can zoom in and scroll around one, selecting a letter. It aotomatically chooses the same letter from the other one. You can then point out the similarities/differences. Once you have three instnces of similar/different letters, you can deem the writing written by the same or different person/people.

DNA checking:

Not sure how this could work. Any suggestions?


General new features:

Possible addition: Percieving the prosecution.

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Also. I am in need of voice clips:

Cigami (Objection!)

Kristoph: (Hold it!, Take that!)

Phoenix:

Spoiler: Final case, not huge, but to be safe...
(GOTCHA!)


It would be great if I could have these! Thanks.
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Who's Cigami?

Also isn't this the old thread?
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Crap, sorry :godot:

Could a Mod lock this, to avoid further confusion?
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Re: Ace Attorney:Partners in Justice (OLD THREAD, PLEASE IGNORE)Topic%20Title
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...How on earth did you manage to bump the old topic back up...?
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Re: Ace Attorney:Partners in Justice (OLD THREAD, PLEASE IGNORE)Topic%20Title
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I was looking for my new topic, but missed it and arrived at this one, not noticing that it was the old one.
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I see...
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