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It's good

The face is a little off

And is the hat supposed to rip?
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Happiness Punch: mouth and hands need shading.

Heres a scratch made Daian GUAHAHAHAHAH smiley.

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Plenty of errors for me to continue working with.
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That's nice,wow,it's bouncing!
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It's good, a bit slow, but um... how do I say this...

I know...

Spoiler:
GAWD IT'S MASSIVE!!!

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Updated steaming Godot:Image
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clickmon wrote:
Updated steaming Godot:Image


Might wanna try working on the steam and make it a little more transparent. It's blending with Godot's hair and making me think, "IT'S OVER 9000!!!" with that right now, to be honest.
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Orcaizer Al wrote:
clickmon wrote:
Updated steaming Godot:Image


Might wanna try working on the steam and make it a little more transparent. It's blending with Godot's hair and making me think, "IT'S OVER 9000!!!" with that right now, to be honest.

You mean make the smoke darker? I dunno, I think it looks fine like that. I've tried darkening it but end up making it look messy >_<
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Mikker wrote:
Happiness Punch: mouth and hands need shading.

Heres a scratch made Daian GUAHAHAHAHAH smiley.

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Plenty of errors for me to continue working with.


(Studies the Smiley a bit)

I'd say make the hand smaller. I know you'll probably lose details when you do that, but...I'd say the hand should be smaller. Otherwise, I'm trying to figure out what other errors there might be.
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Hmm...I think the hair is too big for the head too...but! It's a good start. =D
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I'd say the spikes at the very top look off. And allthough he's happy its more of a mocking laugh, it doesn't look like he's mocking in the face. >.> Hope that helps?
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Double post for a reason >_>
1) so people see this xD
2) because its Daian

Image Hair needs work. Generic Daian pose is not pleased! ;o
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Deefunx wrote:
Image Hair needs work. Generic Daian pose is not pleased! ;o


Looks like he's got an extended mullet. That may need some work.

Yeah, and maybe you need to get rid of the zipper, since it blends in with the forum skin too well to be visible enough.
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Im going to raise the contrast on the zipper, it will bop up and down animated :3 If you look, its what his hair looks like, it goes down his neck. =/ I was basically saying his white patch doesnt look spikey. =P

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Deefunx wrote:
Im going to raise the contrast on the zipper, it will bop up and down animated :3 If you look, its what his hair looks like, it goes down his neck. =/ I was basically saying his white patch doesnt look spikey. =P

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Animation/zipper test


I know that he's got some long spikes following the penis hair pompadour, but it isn't really as visible in his official sprites since the shark head jacket collar hides it from view.

Either way, nice zipper animation. Has anyone done this yet, though?

Spoiler:
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I would but it would be pointless, as it would still constitute as a spoiler. Even though we have spoiler smilies, they are from previous games, so I think its a Croik NoNo.

I see your points on the hair (it took me ages). Ill see what I can tweak...
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fapman wrote:
Mikker wrote:
Happiness Punch: mouth and hands need shading.

Heres a scratch made Daian GUAHAHAHAHAH smiley.

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Plenty of errors for me to continue working with.


(Studies the Smiley a bit)

I'd say make the hand smaller. I know you'll probably lose details when you do that, but...I'd say the hand should be smaller. Otherwise, I'm trying to figure out what other errors there might be.


I thought someone would say that. Yeah, the hand is quite large, but I compared the hand and head of the original sprite, and they were just about the same size. So is the hand and head in my smiley. I mean, he's pointing it forwards. That makes it larger.

The other errors are: back hair needing some work, second wobbly penis frame needing to point slightly more streight forward (to make a smoother animation), and a line of pixels dissapearing at the hand.

Deefunx: that zipper looks like a heart. Was that the idea? :gant:
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It wasnt intented, I might make it a bit pointier to add to the 'I hate you' look of the sprite xD.
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sacrificing myself to let deefunx post again he insists >_>
to stop him habving to double post...
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Image OR Image

:3
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Deefunx wrote:
Image OR Image

:3


The second one looks better. The first one's zipper looks too much like a beating heart.
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I didn't know Daian's shark tooth zipper went up and down? But nonetheless it's good.
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It doesnt, its just an original flare, plus animating things is fun and they dont crap up when put into msn(the originall reason why I animated it xD)
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Oh,but it's good,just,it doesn't look right without looking at the penis hair from side to side
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It's technically fine, but I cannot see the need for a bouncing zipper smiley.
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Image Pardon my interruption, but I have a request.
See this image of Daian, here?

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Yeah, I do too. Frankly, I think that this pic of Daian could make an awesome smiley. However, when I tried to do the face, I kept messing up. Here's a little starter for you folks:

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The little pixel in the corner of that starter image is basically the color I'd use for the details on the face. Any of you folks want to try making a face for that smiley, or did you have similar problems as well...or am I oblivious to the fact somebody else did one already?

In the meantime...comment on the new (yet very "mleh") Franziska smiley I made...and, just for the heck of it, I'll repost my "Godogobewm" smiley: Image
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I like it but the face is off a bit
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Where is it off??

Another one!
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The best I could come up with is Image.

I think the face was a bit small to do anything spectacular with.

EDIT: you're right, it isnt a spoiler, is it? I think Croik wouldn't have put it in the non-spoiler part of Daian's sprites if it were.
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No, it isn't a spoiler, because Daian makes that face quite early in 4-3. It's part of his serious personality, besides.
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My attempt: Image

I think I might have gone a bit overboard on the shading...
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Android 21 3/7 wrote:
My attempt: Image

I think I might have gone a bit overboard on the shading...


His eyes aren't visible. The teeth may need some shading, too.
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hey
just browsing through the smiley collection...
and I realised one thing,
we only have one Director Hotti smiley!
never!
*shock* *horror*

could anyone make the moving one, where he moves his hand under his chin and back up to the side of his face?
using this- :hotti:
fo the sake of (fake) director hotti!

oh and btw
that Daian smiley is coming along nicely guys.
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When I said the face is off.

I meant that the eyes and mouth don't look like :damon: or :gant:
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Yeah!!! I made another one X3
Spoiler: GS 3-3 ending spoiler
Image RAAAAAAAAAVE!


@Shadowpower709: Ooo, I see what you mean. The mouth I can't add because there isn't any space but I think I can add an eyebrow in there :gant:


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sorry to spoil the parade Clickmon, but GS3 spoilers, as it has yet to be released, are a big Croik no-no. Same as in Avatars and Sigs.
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Damnit, it was so fun to make too! I'll put it in a spoiler tag then. Thanks for informing me :D

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Ultimate Prosecutor wrote:
sorry to spoil the parade Clickmon, but GS3 spoilers, as it has yet to be released, are a big Croik no-no. Same as in Avatars and Sigs.

Well, there goes my "GodoGoBewm" smiley, then.

In any case, I like Android 21 3/7's attempt so far on the Angry Daian smiley.
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Orcaizer Al wrote:
Android 21 3/7 wrote:
My attempt: Image

I think I might have gone a bit overboard on the shading...


His eyes aren't visible. The teeth may need some shading, too.

D: He has a pupil! he does! It's just really hard to see! >> I tried everything, but that was the only way to make it visible... Well, I'll try again.
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