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Hello and welcome! I was bored, and had an idea for my fangame. However, I had already got the ideas for all of its cases. So I thought "Hell, why not make a sprite comic?" and so, here it is.
This comic begins in 2023, shortly after Apollo has joined the Gavin & Co. Law Offices. It features Kristoph Gavin as the Defense Attorney (for the sole reason that I lack a Defense Attorney OC) and Apollo as an assistant.
01# - Intro
02# - Obligatory Lobby Scene
03# - Meeting The Defendant
04# - The Prosecution's Fancy New Haircut
05# - The Other Scientific Detective
06# - GET ON WITH IT!
07# - Never Call Him Krissy
08# - "Nail Polish"
09# - Insert Witty Title Here
10# - Two Loud Gunshots And Broken Bones (Increasingly Obscure Reference)
11# - I Summon A Witness, Face Up In Attack Mode!
12# - Spot The Obscure Reference
13# - The Great Unifier
14# - Crash In A Nutshell
15# - Kill Payne
16# - Going In Circles
17# - Another Contradiction On Our Hands
18# - Hell Freezes Over
19# - Suck It, Apollo Haters
20# - A Contradiction Contradicts A Contradiction
21# - Payne Gets Owned
22# - Audience Abuse
23# - NO APOLLO! NOT THE FOURTH WALL!
24# - Bingo
25# - The Turnabout At Last!
26# - How Do You Keep An Idiot Waiting In Suspense?
27# - ...And It All Starts To Come Together
28# - Jeremy Cale: Noted Wackjob
29# - Drumroll, Please!
30# - The Verdict
31# - The End... Or The Beginning?
Sillies
Extra 01# - Spoilers.
(if you don't get it, watch this video.
01# - Intro
Day 1 -Investigation
02# - Off Camera Secretaries And Disjointed Scene Skipping
03# - Something In Common
04# - A Blast From The Past
05# - The Investigation Begins
06# - Must... Not... Laugh...
07# - The Gavin's Legacy Lives On
08# - The Easily Persuaded
09# - "Generic Cop-Compliment, Gumshoe!"
10# - A Damn Useful Command
11# - Now What Was That Name Again?
12# - Coitus Interruptus
13# - Kick Me
14# - B-B-B-B-Brushel!?
15# - Ol' Krissy
16# - "A New Challenger Appears, End Quote"
17# - Good Rooster
18# - The Tough Guy Act
19# - Cliffhanger
Day 2 - Trial
20# - The Boss
21# - Hell Hath No Fury Like A Gavin Scorned
22# - Cue Remeniscence Theme
23# - Cue Turnabout Succession Theme
24# - K-K-K-K-Kohal!
25# - Elven Prosecutor
26# - The Facts
27# - Impending Salary Cut
28# - Stalling
29# - The Principal
30# - Beryl Letra - B*tch Of The Year!
31# - Struggling Like A Fish Out Of Water
32# - Last Minute
33# - A Day In The Life Of Lloyd
34# - DUN DUN DUNNNNNNN!
35# - An Important Question?
36# - Kristoph + Kohal = OTP
Day 2 - Investigation
37# - Directions
38# - Harry's Domain
39# - Shock Horror!
40# - Rude Awakening
41# - Aftermath
42# - Hot Dog
43# - Three Times Fast
44# - No Cigar
45# - Invisible Man
46# - Deja Vu
47# - Emergency!
48# - At The Hospital
49# - Insecure Security
50# - A New Challenger Appears!
51# - An Old Friend?
52# - Bookworm's Lair
53# - Discovery
54# - Questioning Time
55# - Grabby
56# - Nowhere Fast
57# - Too Much Information
58# - Doovde
59# - Infra-Red
60# - Spaced Out
61# - Justice
62# - 5 More Minutes
63# - Time's Up
64# - Revenge
65# - High Stakes
Day 3 - Trial
66# - Attention Duelists!
And a special thanks to ∑ή¡gΜåг for the Young Apollo sprites, and Ike Iberty for Gavin & Co. Law Offices. Kohal Leicht was designed by Oyashiro-Tan and Yuma, although sprited by me. Credits to DefenceLawer for the Hair & Beauty Classroom, The Library, and for his help on Young Klavier.
More info can be found here too:
http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/M ... ceAttorney[/b]
Kristoph Gavin: Ace Attorney is a product of GavCo.
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No DSis in the courtroom please.
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Although, you pulled the same thing I did when i first made my comic.
The peoples mouths aren't open when they are talking ;D
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EDIT: Fix'd.
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Also, i've made a couple of Assistant Apollo Sprites, so comic number 4 won't have to hold off very long.
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Oh, OK... so what do you use?
EDIT: Nevermind, I found a new site that doesn't blur. Fix'd.
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Apollo's face is kinda fuzzy. Might wanna make them sharper. (especially since the mouth is sharp)
Credit to Evolina for the sig+avatar!
What do you see behind the mask?
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Why wasn't there an opening statement?
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Why wasn't there an opening statement?
Sorry, that was my screwup. I was actually planning to address both of these things sarcastically/self-referentially in the next comic. We'll also definitely be seeing the plot begin in the next comic. Also, i'm going to do a double update next time, to compensate for the lack of plot.
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So now we FINALLY start to get the facts of the case, does anyone have any theories on what really happened?
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Although I'm not going to tell it, just in case I'm right.
Besides, we don't know the reason behind the letter. There's no way to ascertain the whole truth yet.
Although I must say, now that the plot has arrived it is quite interesting.
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Anyway, I like the Monty Python reference! I also really like those custom Gavin sprites. I can see you're changing his facial expression, but it would be nice for him to uncross his arms every once in a while =\ (although I know the sprites are tough to make)
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Anyway, I like the Monty Python reference! I also really like those custom Gavin sprites. I can see you're changing his facial expression, but it would be nice for him to uncross his arms every once in a while =\ (although I know the sprites are tough to make)
The first thing i thought of when i saw that is the Phoenix Wrong video that uses that.
Looking good.
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UPDATE ALERT! Comic No.9, "Insert Witty Title Here" has been posted! (:sadshoe: I couldn't think of a good name...)Interesting theory, but if it was an accident, why was a gun brought in the first place? In the fictional universe of Ace Attorney, civilians are prohibited from carrying firearms. Then again, you could say the same thing about Dr. Grey in 2-2... anyway, we still don't know what that letter was all about. And consider the dialogue in the beginning...
He does unfold his arms. Not very often, mind you, but then the same applies to his forward facing sprites.
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UPDATE ALERT! Comic No.10#, "Two Loud Gunshots And Broken Bones (Increasingly Obscure Reference)" is up now!Good lord i'm struggling for names...
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And I can't believe you had to resort to the [insert title here] title this early! xD
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UPDATE ALERT! AGAIN! Comic No.11# "I Summon A Witness, Face Up In Attack Mode!" has ALREADY been uploaded (i'm working very fast here, and uploading almost every day, with occassional breaks to make a sprite for it).And once again, i'm struggling with the names.
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Heh, I know how you feel.
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UPDATE ALERT!I officially have too much free time on my hands, as I have performed a quadruple update. Comics 12# through 15# are now up.
Here, we finally cross-examine our
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One thing though...comic 15, panel 6...you spelt 'second' wrong. *shot*
Sorry...I'm so picky...
But the story itself is intriguing me something awful
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(Finally, I use my update banner...)
Comic No.16#, "Going In Circles" has now been uploaded.
Incidentally, I know i've pledged to update daily, but i've fallen quite ill, so we might not get an update tomorrow.
EDIT: Scratch that, I finished tommorow's comic.
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Comic No.17#, "Another Contradiction On Our Hands" has now been uploaded.
How so?
EDIT: There'll definitely be an update tomorrow. I've already finished the comic. Might even be a double/triple/quadruble etc. update.
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Just wait until you see the next one. It's called "Hell Freezes Over"...
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At the right-before-the-last page, there's a "Hold It!". But, at the beginning of the last page, there's an "Objection!".
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At the right-before-the-last page, there's a "Hold It!". But, at the beginning of the last page, there's an "Objection!".
Oh! I have no idea why that objection was there. it was actually covering some Kristoph dialogue. Methinks I pasted it with the intent to move it to another panel, then got distracted whilst doing so and forgot about it. Fix'd.
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Comic No.18#, "Hell Freezes Over" has now been uploaded.
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EDIT: Added a surprise to my post :D YAYSCAVENGERHUNT!
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Comic No.19#, "Suck It, Apollo Haters" has now been uploaded.
EDIT: Added a surprise to my post :D YAYSCAVENGERHUNT!
Daww, is my comic that predictable?
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And +500 points for A: Aide Apollo, and B: Making him do something awesome.
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