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OfflineDesk Jockey Wed Jun 17, 2009 5:55 am
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Title: To-Knight Just-us (To night, Just us)
Author: Ben Dover (Skunk Might on Deviant Art)
Rating: PG-13, Parental Guidance Advised: Crude Humor, Inappropriate Language and minor Violence
Genre: Fantasy
Status: On-going
Pairing: Various
Summary: Medieval times, many views, men and women of all walks of life have their lives collide and cross at various points.


Whos ever Sprite is beside the Chapter and Part Number is who's perspective it is.

To-Knight Just-Us


Spoiler: Chapter I Part 1

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I swing as hard as I can every time, My blade practically could cut through his, but, somehow every time the bastard blocks and repels me. Even with my armor I feel in danger, even with my sword that weights half of what I do (aprox. 150lbs) and is just a foot or two shorter than I am, I am in very real danger. "Not bad Wright, you've improved"
What a cocky bastard "Oh yeah? strong enough to beat you?" I hammered down my blade in order to destroy his defenses
"Not quite" he had easily dodged my attack and drew forth in a lower cut to my blade, He was so powerful even with his practice blade, that was all he ever used, a thin blade that was practically ruined. My blade dropped and with barely a flick of the wrist he took off my helmet and had pressed all his weight into me holding me to the castle wall with his blade nearly piercing my tender neck skin
"I got you again, Wright"he said smiling his clever one sided smirk
"alright, I give up, you win..." Although I am irritated I'd rather keep my head today , the moment he lets me free I leave, I don't want to be around a guy like him. I don't hate him, but I certainly don't enjoy his company all the time, I mean why would I? The guy is a complete asshole.

Spoiler: Chapter I Part 2
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The festivities tonight are rather quite interesting, The King has brought to us gypsies and exotic foods, perhaps I should bring some scraps to the stables for Dick.. hmm maybe not. The dining hall tonight is for all of the Knights, though only the very best can sit with the King. That would explain why I am up here. Wright brought his little peasant girl with him again, and that obnoxious store owner. Once again I will have to put him in his place. "Wright" I growled when I had made my way to him "Outsiders are prohibited from entering the Knights hall"
"Get out of here Edgeworth, they're with me..." That little brat, talking back to ME of all people.
"Get them out of here, now, Wright"
"Not a chance Edgy" Oh got that pisses me off!
"We're okay when we're with Nick" the peasant girl was being rather rude with me AGAIN tonight.
"Oh, c'mon Edgeworth can't you let an old pal eat?"
"Please, Mr. Egeworth" Oh, god... I didn't see the munchkin... damn those big eyes and those colored cheeks, I growl impatiently....
"Only this once, but if I catch you all again in here, you'll be kicked out and you, Larry will be flogged for leading them in here"
"Whoo-hooo we get to eat tonight!" I could hear Larry whooping as I left, when suddenly I felt my knees being pulled together abit from behind, I look back..
"Yes....Pearl"
"Thank you Mr. Knight!" Mr. Knight... thats a new one... hmm... I can never say no to those eyes... she gets me every time...

Spoiler: Chapter I Part 3
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"I think it's kind of halarious that that Ice Monster can't handle your innocence, Pearly"Pearl looked at me with those eyes partially day dreaming partially listening
"Yeah Pearl you're like our tool"
"Don't say that sort of thing Larry!" Phoenix piped up annoyed and as he did Pearl turned to him and with big eyes, big tears and a fat lip said
"H-h-have y-y-you been u-using me, am I just a tool..." Of course Pearl isn't so dumb to think that, she is just using her innocence again to make them give her attention
"Oh Pearly! Of course not! Larry is just a dim wit...."
"HEY!"
"Quite or they'll kick you out before we eat"
"Nick, hush, There's something we need to discuss" I know I sounded more serious than I had tried to offer, buuuutttttt maybe it was better to be serious about this kind of thing, and Nick seemed to sense this because he immediately turned to me, Pearl is listening too, I know she is, it doesn't look like it, but she always is listening, even as she pretends to ignore Larry who is trying desperatly to make her laugh and stop ignoring him "There's something I heard in the square... it's about that man..."


Spoiler: Chapter I Part 4
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"Awe, c'mon Pearls! I'm sorry!" No luck, she just won't listen too me, I offer her my dinner sweets but she ignored me again "Pearls!"
"He was heading too...."
"I'll give you the next calf that is born for a pet!... C'mon sweety, I'm sorry!"
"They are going to kill... and then... but not until...."
She is not looking at me directly, the calf got her attention it seems! Yeeessssssss!!!!!!!!
"Larry...."
"Pearls?"
"Larry...."
Why isn't she saying anything?
"Larry!"
"....?"
"LARRY!"
"LARRY!"
"WHAT?! WHAT?!" Suddenly everyone is shouting in my ear like I can't hear them, can't they just use a regular tone of voice?
"Did you get all that?"
"Yes, yes of course I did Nick, Jeez" I can finally eat my dinner in peace...Mmmmm Steak and Corn
"How about a Lamb?"
"...?" What?


Spoiler: Chapter II Part 1
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With men clapping and raising their glasses to my body, I dance, the thrill of the drum and flute taking over my body, I dance. Though, tonight I dance for a cause greater than myself, Tonight I dance for my family, I dance for my wife. If these men were to find out that I am a also a man, I would be killed. I've made it to the King's table, there are already some women here dancing for the high class, all of them with large chests and rounded hips. Though I do not have breasts, a little makeup works wonders to make it seem like something is there, plus having womanly hips helps. I find myself comfortably dancing for a blonde gentalman, he looks at me with only mild interest, he doesn't wear a wedding band, nor does he look old enough to have a wife yet. In this upper class society, the older and higher ranked men get wives. Either way, I know men like these, the ones with fit bodies, and a sword at their waist at all times. Men like these can hide their lustrous eyes, unlike the snotty knights of the tables below here and the King himself. I think I'll test this one, see how he responds. I move in closer dancing between his legs and allowing my body to freely touch his, no response except for a slight increase in interest. As the large table is block the view from the men below he proceeds to let his fingers touch my belly skin as I move. With only that I have this man pinned. Hook, line and sinker, tonight I will rob him. Tonight he will not have his way with this very attractive man.


Spoiler: Chapter II Part 2
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She has a rather interesting body, it has strange contours and a pretty little frame, one that I had not yet seen on a woman. It's getting rather late I think, I shall retire with this one tonight "I don't recall you've told me your name my dear"
"It's Bianca"
"Mmm... Bianca, how would you like to earn a little extra to-night?"
"A.... little extra sir?" She's playing dumb is she? She couldn't be pure, she is a gypsy.
"You know, come to my room for the night?
"Oh, Ohhhh. Wouldn't you prefer one of my sisters, they are much more beautiful than I sir" She's trying to make herself more desirable.
"No... You are who I want" I'll let her think it's working
"Sir, though, I am white" She has GOT to be kidding me, she couldn't possibly think I would believe her
"I'll be gental, I promise"
"I wish to be white for when I have my husband"
"Your husband would rather you be experienced" She was quiet for the time being... I am starting to believe she is pure... She isn't all that old...
"I am supposed to do what I am told tonight, so I really have no choice... Yes, I will go with you"
"Let us go now then" Hook, line and sinker, women are much to trusting of men


Spoiler: Chapter II Part 3
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"Sounds like lots of fun in there eh Sheila?" Stupid knight's party... I sure hope Lord Edgeworth brings me some leftovers...."Hmm..humm hmm hmmmmmHuUMMM! Oof! who's this? Oh... Pearl"I'm surprised she's out this late, it's nearly midnight, isn't she usually with her cousin Maya, and the Warrior Phoenix
"Hello Mr.Gummy, I brought you some stuff from the hall"
"Oh! Oh, Thank you so much Pearly!"Oh gosh, delicious, delicious food! AH! Steak. Heehee
"You should sit and eat Mr.Gummy"
"Oh, Yes! Yes, of course" The hay stack is a perfect place to sit and eat.
"So wheres your cousin and the warrior?"
"They've probably gone home already... but I just wanted to see you tonight so I came here first"
See me? Oh gosh, I hope she doesn't have a..... Oh man! On me? "Oh, well thanks for all this Pearl it's a nice thing doing this for me"
"Oh Dick it's really no problem"
What happened to Mr. Gummy!? she's always called me Mr. Gummy! Oh no, It's true, this is such a strange thing!... If I just sit here and eat, she'll leave eventually...focus on eating....focus....focus....focus....dang it she's not gone yet.... focus....focus.....focus Oh gosh I'm almost done and shes still watching me.... just alittle longer Dick, you can do it, she'll leave before you finish, this is so embarrassing, shes way too young!... dammit!
"Thanks that was great"
"I'm glad you EeaaaHHHH enjoyed"
"you seem tired Pearl, you should go home and sleep"
"AaaAAAHHhhhh yeah...but, it's just right temperature here...and Ahhh, I think I want to stay with you tonight"
Oh god! No! what is she doing? Oh no! oh no! Oh.... ahh... she's laying on me.... she must be so sleepy....mmm, well maybe she can stay with me tonight, just this once. She's just so cute.. and warm... I should take her home, but this hay stack feels better than ever for some reason, I'll just stay the night with her....


Spoiler: Chapter II Part 4
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"Ouch! Hey, watch it!"
"Shh! Maya quiet! We're going to get caught"
"It's not my fault you keep--"
"Shh!"
I swear, that Maya is going to be the death of me, it's hard enough to keep her fed, yet to keep her quiet? Hoh! That's like telling the devil to be nice, or Larry to settle down speaking of which--
"I'm here! I'm Here!"
"Shh!"
"Shh!"
"Did she give the signal?"
"No! Shh!"
"Wait... Isn't THAT the signal?"
"No! No! Not yet Larry!"
"Man these stables stink! What does Dick DO here all day?"
"More like how can he stand it!
"Guys, seriously, shush"
"Look! Look they're sitting down!"
"Is THAT the signal?!"
"Larry! No!"
"Weren't you listening in the hall?"
"Of COURSE!"
Yeah right, I know that means No I wasn't, anyways at least they're quiet now... Why is Dick eating so slowly usually he eats like he is starved..... Finally!... Wait, okay I can't tell what they're saying... Shes on his lap, her eyes are closed.... Man, I feel for him, he looks so confused and lost... Poor bloke, oh his eyes are closed...it'll just be a couple minutes now, there is the signal
"Let's Go"


Spoiler: Chapter II Part 5
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There he goes again, that rotten bastard, leaving me alone in a hall of pigs. HE hasn't talked to me in weeks. I don't know why he prefers those slutty little bitches, uncommitted whores.
"Father?"
"Yes, Franciska darling?"
"You promised me that Miles would be mine, why do you allow him to be so insensitive towards me"
"Darling, To ask a man to marry your daughter is one thing, but to ask a man to love her is another...besides that, you two aren't married yet, neither of you has made any move to marry and I think you should make him want you yourself"
Hmph! Insolent man, Men in general...all of them insolent.


Spoiler: Chapter II Part 6
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"Don't worry about a thing, I'll make everything okay for you"
"I... I know"
She really IS a virgin, so sweet and innocent. I haven't had a virgin in a very long time, this should be so much fun.
"You're beautiful... I'll treat you right, and if you're good tonight I might just let you be here with me for a while, that way no greedy disgusting men with have you, just me"
"O-oh"
Her lips are so soft and her skin is like sweet cream... Mmm... I've almost got this darn halter top off.... wait...what? whats going on....


Spoiler: Chapter II Part 7
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The look on his face is absolutely priceless, not that I get a kick out of doing these type of things, It's just pure and utter shock, now that he sees my flat chest and feels my dagger presses skilfully against the tender flesh of his belly, he is regretting taking me over the other girls. Either way, he would have been robbed tonight.
"Don't do anything stupid Knight, just move accordingly and you'll come away from this unharmed"
I made it pretty clear that I would keep my word I think, and he did exactly as I had planned it, he turned his body to lay on the bed and I made my move making away I took all of his jewelry, all the gold in the room went into my bag and I backed out of the room, then made a dash for it climbing out windows and rolling down roof tops until I reached one floor from the ground level. I would have jumped down, but I could clearly see three people sneaking about below me into the stables


Spoiler: Chapter III Part 1
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Nick silently lead the way into the stables, and untied a few horses. While Larry silently lead them passed Dick and Pearl outside, I am on guard now, I have a bad feeling about this night. Something bad was going to happen, I know it
"Nick lets hurry this up, I'm getting a bad feeling"
Nick knows that when I have a bad feeling, that means something bad is coming and we have to act right away, so he gave me a look an d hurried up and lead the last horse out, I follow but nervously


Spoiler: Chapter III Part 2
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Dick was acting so strange just now before he fell asleep... I don't know why. Why does he seem so warm to me, like I'm all chilly and he's a warm blanket? I don't get it, there goes the first set of hooves, Larry I think, just judging by the hop skip stepping along side the soft steps of the horse... I can hear his heart beat, like the beating of wings. What is Maya saying? Something bad.... Hmm I do feel that abit too.... There they go, I should leave soon... wait another set of footsteps?


Spoiler: Chapter III Part 3
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The perfect escape, As the fleet ahead of me untie horses to leave, I also untie myself a horse, of which I'll get away with... simpletons. Hmm, theres three individuals, Two male and one female, plus two in the corner asleep, male and female, easy as pie, If I follow them closely into the night I can disguise myself as them and trail off into the brush... Good they are heading in the same direction I'm going.. They won't know what hit them when the Royal Guard is after them. Theres my opening to the brush, I flee into the woods with my new horse companion


Spoiler: Not a chapter!
Hey Guys! Sorry to diappear for a while! :sadshoe: But I have summer school! So I'll be updating more often now! enjoy coming Chapters!
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EdgeWrightEquation:
(EdgeWright=(Miles=Seme)+(Phoenix=Uke))

WrightWorthEquation:
(WrightWorth=(Miles=Uke)+(Phoenix=Seme))

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Fans of other couples so far:0


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Re: To-Knight just-us (Chapter I Part 2 Up)Topic%20Title
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The personalties of Nick and Edgy changed quite a bit, but apart from that, This is a really interesting slant! I cant wait to read more! :keiko:
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Re: To-Knight just-us (Chapter I Part 2 Up)Topic%20Title
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This is pretty interesting so far. And I'm a sucker for a medieval-ish AU. ^_^ (Especially where Phoenix and Edgeworth are involved.)

BTW, I vote for EdgeWright. :butzthumbs:
Thanks to .•°٭blinq٭°•. for the lovely sig. ♥
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Re: To-Knight just-us (Chapter I Part 2 Up)Topic%20Title
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xNoLemonHereX wrote:
The personalties of Nick and Edgy changed quite a bit, but apart from that, This is a really interesting slant! I cant wait to read more! :keiko:


Thanks! They have to change a little bit just because it is in a time of knights and monarchy <3
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Re: To-Knight just-us (Chapter I Part 2 Up)Topic%20Title
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crouton wrote:
This is pretty interesting so far. And I'm a sucker for a medieval-ish AU. ^_^ (Especially where Phoenix and Edgeworth are involved.)

BTW, I vote for EdgeWright. :butzthumbs:


:pearl: Glad you enjoy so far


:godot: I'll add +1 EdgeWright to my Sig. <3
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Re: To-Knight just-us (Chapter I Part 3 Up)*Topic%20Title
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Part 3 of Chapter I is up now....
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EdgeWrightEquation:
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WrightWorthEquation:
(WrightWorth=(Miles=Uke)+(Phoenix=Seme))

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Re: To-Knight just-us (Chapter I Part 2 Up)Topic%20Title
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BenDover wrote:
:godot: I'll add +1 EdgeWright to my Sig. <3


Hehe, sweet. :edgy:

I mean, I like WrightWorth as well, but I tend to write Miles as the seme in my fics most of the time. ^_^
Thanks to .•°٭blinq٭°•. for the lovely sig. ♥
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Pretty sweet story, it's nice so far. Only complaint: The colored text is making my eyes hurt after a while. :sadshoe:
Please change that, it will make the story a whole lot easier to read.
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Re: To-Knight just-us (Chapter I Part 3 Up)*Topic%20Title
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Perrydotto wrote:
Pretty sweet story, it's nice so far. Only complaint: The colored text is making my eyes hurt after a while. :sadshoe:
Please change that, it will make the story a whole lot easier to read.



That would require me to change a ton of elements in the story
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EdgeWrightEquation:
(EdgeWright=(Miles=Seme)+(Phoenix=Uke))

WrightWorthEquation:
(WrightWorth=(Miles=Uke)+(Phoenix=Seme))

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Re: To-Knight just-us (Chapter I Part 4 Up)*Topic%20Title
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New Part up (4)
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(EdgeWright=(Miles=Seme)+(Phoenix=Uke))

WrightWorthEquation:
(WrightWorth=(Miles=Uke)+(Phoenix=Seme))

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I like it so for especially how it has multiple views :maya:
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Re: To-Knight just-us (Chapter I Part 4 Up)*Topic%20Title
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Vera Fey wrote:
I like it so for especially how it has multiple views :maya:

Thanks... :karma:
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EdgeWrightEquation:
(EdgeWright=(Miles=Seme)+(Phoenix=Uke))

WrightWorthEquation:
(WrightWorth=(Miles=Uke)+(Phoenix=Seme))

EdgeWright fans so far:2
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BenDover wrote:
Vera Fey wrote:
I like it so for especially how it has multiple views :maya:

Thanks... :karma:

no problem, oh no van karma go my jake marshal solider :jake:
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Yeah. You're pretty good with the multiple povs. :D

I like the colored text, but it really does irritate the eye after a while.
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Re: To-Knight just-us (Chapter I Part 4 Up)*Topic%20Title
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Lida_Rose wrote:
Yeah. You're pretty good with the multiple povs. :D

I like the colored text, but it really does irritate the eye after a while.


:payne: Sorry
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EdgeWrightEquation:
(EdgeWright=(Miles=Seme)+(Phoenix=Uke))

WrightWorthEquation:
(WrightWorth=(Miles=Uke)+(Phoenix=Seme))

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Vera Fey wrote:
BenDover wrote:
Vera Fey wrote:
I like it so for especially how it has multiple views :maya:

Thanks... :karma:

no problem, oh no van karma go my jake marshal solider :jake:


Lol wut?
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lol ahh i dunno
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Re: To-Knight just-us (Chapter II Part 1 Up)**Topic%20Title
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edit:

=3 Part 1 Chapter II
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EdgeWrightEquation:
(EdgeWright=(Miles=Seme)+(Phoenix=Uke))

WrightWorthEquation:
(WrightWorth=(Miles=Uke)+(Phoenix=Seme))

EdgeWright fans so far:2
WrightWorth fans so far:0
Fans of other couples so far:0


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Re: To-Knight just-us (Chapter II Part 1 Up)**Topic%20Title
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Don't you mean Chapter II part 1? It was a good read. I loved the last line. For some reason, it made me think of Edgeworth...
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Re: To-Knight just-us (Chapter II Part 1 Up)**Topic%20Title
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Lida_Rose wrote:
Don't you mean Chapter II part 1? It was a good read. I loved the last line. For some reason, it made me think of Edgeworth...


Woooaaahhhhh yeah, i dont know how i messed that up xD

Im glad you like and i hope youll continue reading as i post more =3
Proud supporter of EdgeWright, not WrightWorth

EdgeWrightEquation:
(EdgeWright=(Miles=Seme)+(Phoenix=Uke))

WrightWorthEquation:
(WrightWorth=(Miles=Uke)+(Phoenix=Seme))

EdgeWright fans so far:2
WrightWorth fans so far:0
Fans of other couples so far:0
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Re: To-Knight just-us (Chapter II Part 1 Up)**Topic%20Title
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Course I'll continue reading. I do that for most fan fictions I read. :D
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Re: To-Knight just-us (Chapter II Part 1 Up)**Topic%20Title
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Lida_Rose wrote:
Course I'll continue reading. I do that for most fan fictions I read. :D


I'm glad ^^
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EdgeWrightEquation:
(EdgeWright=(Miles=Seme)+(Phoenix=Uke))

WrightWorthEquation:
(WrightWorth=(Miles=Uke)+(Phoenix=Seme))

EdgeWright fans so far:2
WrightWorth fans so far:0
Fans of other couples so far:0
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Re: To-Knight just-us (Chapter I Part 2 Up)Topic%20Title
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crouton wrote:
BenDover wrote:
:godot: I'll add +1 EdgeWright to my Sig. <3


Hehe, sweet. :edgy:

I mean, I like WrightWorth as well, but I tend to write Miles as the seme in my fics most of the time. ^_^


I'm the same way. I dont mind WrightWorth, buuuut I make Miles the man more often
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EdgeWrightEquation:
(EdgeWright=(Miles=Seme)+(Phoenix=Uke))

WrightWorthEquation:
(WrightWorth=(Miles=Uke)+(Phoenix=Seme))

EdgeWright fans so far:2
WrightWorth fans so far:0
Fans of other couples so far:0
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Re: To-Knight just-us (Chapter II Part 3+4 Up)**Topic%20Title
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Woah! More updates. *Reads*

Uh-oh. Wonder what the Wright gang is planning. Poor Gummy.
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Re: To-Knight just-us (Chapter II Part 3+4 Up)**Topic%20Title
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Lida_Rose wrote:
Woah! More updates. *Reads*

Uh-oh. Wonder what the Wright gang is planning. Poor Gummy.


Yeah, I update alot
Proud supporter of EdgeWright, not WrightWorth

EdgeWrightEquation:
(EdgeWright=(Miles=Seme)+(Phoenix=Uke))

WrightWorthEquation:
(WrightWorth=(Miles=Uke)+(Phoenix=Seme))

EdgeWright fans so far:2
WrightWorth fans so far:0
Fans of other couples so far:0
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Re: To-Knight just-us (Chapter II Part 3+4 Up)**Topic%20Title
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Well, hey, updating often is a good thing! :D
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Re: To-Knight just-us (Chapter II Part 3+4 Up)**Topic%20Title
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Lida_Rose wrote:
Well, hey, updating often is a good thing! :D

Yuppers!
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EdgeWrightEquation:
(EdgeWright=(Miles=Seme)+(Phoenix=Uke))

WrightWorthEquation:
(WrightWorth=(Miles=Uke)+(Phoenix=Seme))

EdgeWright fans so far:2
WrightWorth fans so far:0
Fans of other couples so far:0
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Re: To-Knight just-us Chapter II Parts 5,6&7 upTopic%20Title
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New Parts 5,6 and 7 Yaaaay!
Proud supporter of EdgeWright, not WrightWorth

EdgeWrightEquation:
(EdgeWright=(Miles=Seme)+(Phoenix=Uke))

WrightWorthEquation:
(WrightWorth=(Miles=Uke)+(Phoenix=Seme))

EdgeWright fans so far:2
WrightWorth fans so far:0
Fans of other couples so far:0
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Re: To-Knight just-us Chapter II Parts 5,6&7 upTopic%20Title
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D'oh! I'm sorry I didn't reply sooner. Got my own stories to write, plus I gotta reply to several RPs...

Anyway, I can't wait to see how this turns out. :D

And...If you want an editor, I'd be happy to edit your stories. I love doing that.
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Re: To-Knight just-us Chapter II Parts 5,6&7 upTopic%20Title
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No problemo
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EdgeWrightEquation:
(EdgeWright=(Miles=Seme)+(Phoenix=Uke))

WrightWorthEquation:
(WrightWorth=(Miles=Uke)+(Phoenix=Seme))

EdgeWright fans so far:2
WrightWorth fans so far:0
Fans of other couples so far:0
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Re: To-Knight just-us Chapter III Parts 1,2 and 3 UpTopic%20Title
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Chapter III, Parts 1, 2 and 3 up :jake:
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EdgeWrightEquation:
(EdgeWright=(Miles=Seme)+(Phoenix=Uke))

WrightWorthEquation:
(WrightWorth=(Miles=Uke)+(Phoenix=Seme))

EdgeWright fans so far:2
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Re: To-Knight just-us Chapter III Parts 1,2 and 3 UpTopic%20Title
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Pearl and Dick lol never thought of that couple before
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Re: To-Knight just-us Chapter III Parts 1,2 and 3 UpTopic%20Title
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Vera Fey wrote:
Pearl and Dick lol never thought of that couple before

:sadshoe: Oh... Lol :pearl:
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EdgeWrightEquation:
(EdgeWright=(Miles=Seme)+(Phoenix=Uke))

WrightWorthEquation:
(WrightWorth=(Miles=Uke)+(Phoenix=Seme))

EdgeWright fans so far:2
WrightWorth fans so far:0
Fans of other couples so far:0
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Re: To-Knight just-us Chapter III Parts 1,2 and 3 UpTopic%20Title
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BenDover wrote:
Vera Fey wrote:
Pearl and Dick lol never thought of that couple before

:sadshoe: Oh... Lol :pearl:


yeah probably because of the age difference in the game
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Re: To-Knight just-us Chapter III Parts 1,2 and 3 UpTopic%20Title
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Probably. XD

Just got around to reading the next few parts, which hurt my eyes...Again. Anyway, I can't wait to see where this goes.
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Re: To-Knight just-us Chapter III Parts 1,2 and 3 UpTopic%20Title
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@ Vera Fey

Yes, I made Pearl quite abit older for my own purposes

@Lida Rose

Sorry :payne: If you want you can always just highlight all the text so your eyes hurt less <3
Proud supporter of EdgeWright, not WrightWorth

EdgeWrightEquation:
(EdgeWright=(Miles=Seme)+(Phoenix=Uke))

WrightWorthEquation:
(WrightWorth=(Miles=Uke)+(Phoenix=Seme))

EdgeWright fans so far:2
WrightWorth fans so far:0
Fans of other couples so far:0


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