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Thanks, Aliucon. I've been around, just...

I'm recovering quickly, considering the whole having surgery thing. :D


Yeah, glad to hear you're recovering quickly, Lida. <3
Be sure to keep resting as much as you need, though.
...But come over here every now and then to say "hi", because I'll miss you around. :sillytrucy:
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Exactly. I'm also glad to hear that you are recovering quickly! ^^

Looking foward to the next installment. Whenever you feel up to it enough, of course.
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Ahh, forget this double post. o_o'''''
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D'aaaawwww, thanks, you guys.

Of course I'll come around here and say, "hi," updating as soon as I feel well enough.

Yeah. I tend to heal quickly, but it's still never fast enough. ^^
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Okay...I think I'm feeling well enough to write more...

Update.
Spoiler: Poems Galore Part 6
Phoenix, Maya, Pearl, and Edgeworth advanced in silence. The line was getting shorter, but it would still be a while before they would make it to the front.
"So...Um...I heard you write really good poems, Edgeworth," Phoenix said. He didn't really want to hear any more poetry since his head was so full of the other ones, but he figured it was a way to pass the time. Edgeworth sighed.
"Wright...I'm really not that great at poetry," Edgeworth said. "And if you're trying to get me to recite one, well..." He glanced around and saw a mass of people. "Maybe someplace more private would be..."
"Oh, come on, Edgeworth," Maya butted in. "How will you be able to recite for a huge audience if you can't even do that in front of us?"
"I'd love to hear a poem, Mr. Eh-ji-worth," Pearl said, blushing a little. Edgeworth sighed. He, like so many others, couldn't resist that cute little face.
"Very well," He answered. "This is yet to be titled.
"The scream still pierces my memory.
The death of my father.
My fear of earthquakes.
Both came of that night.

One man.
Who once was my
Second father.
Who was my teacher.
Who was my role model.
Who was my hero.
Was responsible
For mental anguish
For death and destruction
And for two great tragedies.

One is the death of my father.
I man I feel I haven't really
Gotten the chance to know.
Nevertheless, I can't deny
How great he was.
As a father.
As a lawyer.
As a person.

The second is the fact that
Whenever I see him,
I won't see my
Second father,
My role model,
My teacher,
Or my hero.
I will see
The man who
Singlehandedly
Ruined my life
Forever."
"...How could you not think that's good?" Phoenix asked after hesitating.
"Wright..."
"Wow! With poetry like that, you'll win for sure!" Maya exclaimed.
"...Mr. Eh-ji-worth..." Pearl said. She didn't know what the poem was about, but she knew it was one of the saddest things she had ever heard.
"Erm...Thank you," Edgeworth stated uncomfortably. "I have to go."
"Where are you going, Mr. Eh-ji-worth?" Pearl asked. She looked concerned. Edgeworth's face softened.
"I have to talk to Detective Gumshoe about something. I'll come back soon," he replied.
"Promise?" Pearl inquired. Edgeworth now smiled genuinely and realized it's been a long time since he did that.
"I promise," he responded.

Spoiler: Honesty Is Not Larry's Virtue Part 6
"I've just..." Phoenix began answering, slowly. "I needed some time to sort things out. Iris is back in my life, but...I mean, I blush whenever I see her, but...Things have changed since college." Edgeworth raised an eyebrow. "I mean...I...I don't know how I feel right now. About Maya, I mean...I think I might...You know...Love her." Edgeworth sighed.
"Wright...Are you sure?" he asked.
"I think...I think I am. I love both of them. So, what do I do?" Phoenix answered.
"To be honest, Wright...I figured this might happen. After that trial, I knew you would come to terms with these...Feelings," Edgeworth said.
"W-whaaaat?!" Phoenix inquired, shocked.
"You're not exactly subtle, Wright. You blush every time you see Iris, but you attempted to cross a burning bridge for Maya. Did you really think nobody would notice that?" Edgeworth replied.
"Er..."
"You love two people. Congratulations. Now, Wright, you have to ask yourself: in what way do you love each of them?" Phoenix looked confused. Edgeworth sighed. "You probably aren't in love with both of them, Wright. In all likelihood, you love one like family, and are in love with the other one. Once you figure out which one it is for each of them, you'll figure out how to proceed from there. You're a relatively intelligent man."
I can't believe it! Edgeworth called me smart! Phoenix thought.
"Don't let that go to your head, Wright," Edgeworth warned. "Hm...It seems we have been here a long time." Phoenix looked at his watch. It was 9:30.
"Woah! It's past my bed time!" Phoenix said. Edgeworth smirked.
"Let's go, Wright. I've already paid," Edgeworth explained.
"Er...Thanks, Edgeworth," Phoenix said awkwardly as he got up. "I guess I'd better get to the nearest bus stop."
"That won't be necessary, Wright. I'll drive you back to Wright and Co." He saw Phoenix's shocked face. "Unless you have a problem with that."
"Er...No. Thanks, again, Edgeworth." Edgeworth bowed characteristically.
"You're welcome, Wright. After you." Phoenix started leaving. What's with Edgeworth? he thought. And why is he so nice all of a sudden? He walked out of the restaurant, Edgeworth behind him.


I'm sorry if any characters are OOC. I did my best to avoid that, but it's hard when you're tired and in pain like I am. On the bright side, wrighting helps more than it hurts. :D
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Wow. Edgeworth's poem was really good....


I can't believe it! Edgeworth called me smart! Phoenix thought.

Neither can I! It's a miracle! XD
I thought that part was pretty funny.

"Woah! It's past my bed time!" Phoenix said.
Phoenix has a bed time?! There's something to be said about that. Lol.

I liked them both. Thanks for updating.
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:accordion-head: : No Mister! Please don't hurt me! I'll be a good boy! I promise! OWW! Why'd you have to hurt me like that?
(cookie for reference)


Disturbed's "Down With the Sickness"? ._.


*gives cookie*

Hmm...starting to likethe Virtue story a bit more now. lol.

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@ Chess: Thank you! I worked really hard on that poem for those five minutes.
I loved writing that part. ^^
And, yes, Phoenix's bed time is 9:00. :D

@ justis76: Yay! You like the virtue story more! Probably because I annihilated any notion of a P/E pairing.
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I did not know that.
NOW I KNOW! XD
I really hope that they'll try taking some wacky revenge on Maya and Larry. That would be amazing, and insanely funny.
^^
It must be hard writing those poems. You have good creativity!
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Cool, I managed to reply to these just on time for once! :keiko:
Well....yeah, Edgeworths poem was good.
And the virtue story....well, I think I can see where it heading, a bit, but not how exactly. xD
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@ Chess: Perhaps. *Rubs hands together mischievously* And thank you. I try. :D

@ Marisa: I'm glad you liked it. :D As for the virtue story, you think you know, but then I'll update and you'll be like, "What? That's not what I thought would happen!" XD

I'll wait a little longer before updating.
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@ Marisa: I'm glad you liked it. :D As for the virtue story, you think you know, but then I'll update and you'll be like, "What? That's not what I thought would happen!" XD


Yes. I'm expecting this too. xD
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UPDATE!
Spoiler: Honesty Is Not Larry's Virtue Part 7
"Um...Edgeworth...Er..." Phoenix began, "Um...Nice car?"
"Indeed. It is nice. I have nice things," Edgeworth said. "Since I make boatloads of money. Being a prosecutor and all."
"Erm...Yeah...So, uh..."
"Wright, if you want to begin a conversation, you'll have to do better than that," Edgeworth said. "Any new cases?"
"Um...No, but...If we do your evil...I mean, your plan, then..." Phoenix spluttered.
"...Wright, if you don't want to do it, then..." Edgeworth said.
"No, no! I want to do it. Revenge. Haha," Phoenix interrupted. "But isn't your plan taking it too far? Maybe we should get an explanation first." Edgeworth sighed.
"Wright, Lotta Hart was at the restaurant. The "prank" will be all over the news. Do you really want them to get off Scot-free for it?"
"Um...No," Phoenix answered.
"Then I suggest you either come up with another plan or quit complaining."
The rest of the ride to Wright and Co. was silent as Phoenix and Edgeworth were absorbed in their thoughts.

Spoiler: Poems Galore Part 7
After what seemed like hours, Phoenix made it to the table of the three judges. His eyes opened wide as he recognized them. Wendy Oldbag, Shelley DeKiller, and...the judge?
Whoo. At least there's one person there that I can trust to make the right decision, Phoenix thought.
"What do you want, Whippersnapper?" Oldbag asked angrily.
"I'm here to enter the contest," Phoenix replied.
"In that case, we shall require a sample in order to determine if you are worthy for this competition," Shelley DeKiller said. Nobody seemed to know who the assassin really was, and Phoenix had to resist the urge to scream when he saw DeKiller.
"Mr. Wright, I request to speak with you in private," Shelly added. Phoenix grew pale. "After you say your poem."
"Erm...Okay," Phoenix responded. How could he refuse? "...'Drama in the Courtroom.'
He was so confident
His scarred face
Smiling at me
He knew I wouldn't
Couldn't let Maya...
Die.
"So, is your client guilty or not?"
The judge asked.
It was time for me
To decide the fate
Of two women.
One was my assistant.
My friend.
The other was
Someone I had
Recently met.
But which one
Was the right
Decision?
If I went for guilty
Matt would pay for
His crime, but
Maya would die.
If I went for not guilty
He would get away
And my acquaintance
Would be blamed.
Which was right?
I shall never know
And I never
Want to do
Something like that
Ever again."
He waited nervously as the judges deliberated over his poem.

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Shelly must be touched by Nick's poem
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"Indeed. It is nice. I have nice things," Edgeworth said. "Since I make boatloads of money. Being a prosecutor and all."
^I seem to find this amazingly funny.

*Rubs hands together mischievously*
^ That looks promising

The judges must approve. Or I will kill them. Lol.

"Mr. Wright, I request to speak with you in private," Shelly added. Phoenix grew pale. "After you say your poem."
^ NO PHOENIX! IT'S A TRAP! XD
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Up until now I'd thought they had given up on that plan...Looks like they hadn't.
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@ blinq: So touched, he wants to kill him. I mean, you'll just have to see how touched he is. :D

@ Chess: I loved writing that part. XD I thought it was funny while I wrote it.

Promising. Like you faceIn America!

Yes. A devious, dirty trap, Phoenix. Listen to Chess. Oh, wait, you can't because I won't let you! :D

@ justis76: No, they haven't yet. But the plan did kinda get tossed aside as they talked...I could see why you'd think they'd given up on it.
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@ blinq: So touched, he wants to kill him. I mean, you'll just have to see how touched he is. :D


:D next chapter plz XD
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Yes. A devious, dirty trap, Phoenix. Listen to Chess. Oh, wait, you can't because I won't let you! :D
^NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! Thats evil. Pure evil. But funny. XD
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Yay, updates. Edgeworth's poem was great!
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You're a relatively intelligent man."

Relative to what?
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@ blinq: Okay. Can't say no to that. :D

@ Chess: Yes. You are reading the stories of the most evilly funny person in my whole signature. XD

@ JasmineJustice: Thanks! Gumshoe told ya, well, Phoenix, that Edgeworth was the expert.

Intelligent relative to Gumshoe! Then again, so is almost everyone. :D

Spoiler: Poems Galore Part 8
"We have reached a decision, Mr. Wright," the judge informed. "I hereby name the defendant, 'Not Guilty.'" Everyone in line applauded and threw confetti.
"...Um...Your Honor? We aren't in court..." Phoenix said.
"Oh, sorry, Mr. Wright. Just an old habit. Anyway, yeah, we decided not to let you move on," the judge explained.
"W-what?!" Phoenix asked, shocked.
"There was a slight rhythm, but there weren't any similes, metaphors, personification, or rhyme. There weren't any elements of poetry at all. I'm sorry, Mr. Wright," the judge said.
"B-but it was free-form..." Phoenix argued.
"We made our decision, Mr. Wright. Now, come with me," Shelley said, grabbing Phoenix by the arm and practically dragging him to the bathroom.
"Good riddance to that whippersnapper," Oldbag commented as Phoenix feared for his life.

Spoiler: Honesty Is Not Larry's Virtue Part 8
Phoenix ejected himself from Edgeworth's car.
"Thanks for tonight, Edgeworth," Phoenix said. He turned to leave.
"Wait, Wright," Edgeworth responded, getting out of the car and walking over to Phoenix. "I...Well...I had a good time tonight, Wright, and I was thinking...Well...Perhaps we shouldn't get our revenge."
"W-whaaat?!" Phoenix asked, shocked.
"While I...Don't approve of his deceit and...Really, anything about him, I...Must admit...Wright...When was the last time we actually talked to each other outside the courtroom?"
"Um..."
"Exactly," Edgeworth said. "Larry and Maya trying to get us to go out romantically was wrong, but...We should go out as friends more often, Wright."
"Edgeworth..."
"I digress. Tonight was nice. We should hang out and catch up with what's been going on in each others' lives more often," Edgeworth said. Phoenix gaped.
"E-Edgeworth..."
"If you ever tell anyone I said that, I'll sue you, Wright," Edgeworth threatened. Phoenix smiled.
"Thanks, Edgeworth." Then, Edgeworth's car started, but he was still outside. Phoenix and Edgeworth looked and watched in horror as someone stole Edgeworth's car. Phoenix looked at Edgeworth, trying to gauge his reaction. He was paler than usual and trembling. So angry, he wouldn't speak or scream.
"Come on, Wright. I guess I'm stuck going to your office while we wait for the police," Edgeworth said with difficulty before turning around and walking away.

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Ohhhh he loves Maya and Iris but.. actually he's in love with Edgey :D
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I think I see where this is going...
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@ strawberriTOMATOE: Thanks. #^^

@ blinq: And Edgeworth is actually in love with Gumshoe!!! Plot twists galore. :D

@ justis76: Tell you what. I'll write the next chapters, and if they are exactly as you imagine would happen, then shoot yourself because my mind is such a dangerous place! ...erm...Celebrate?

Spoiler: Honesty Is Not Larry's Virtue Part 9
"Wright! This is all your fault!" Edgeworth shouted in Wright and Co.
"How? I didn't do anything," Phoenix responded.
"Um...Indeed, you didn't, but can't you see I need a scapegoat right now?!" Edgeworth asked angrily.
"Um...Okay? I'm sorry?" Phoenix responded.
"Apology accepted, Wright. Just never do that again," Edgeworth warned.
Never do what? Is Edgeworth going crazy? Edgeworth pulled out his cell phone and started dialing the number for the police department, which he had memorized by then. "Hello. Yes, my car was stolen...Mmm-hmm...Okay. Thank you, Gumshoe." He hung up the phone.
"The police won't be here for a while, Wright. What is there to do is this... Charming little...Place?" Edgeworth asked, trying extremely hard not to insult the place he was now stuck in.
"There's law books," Phoenix replied, saying the first thing he could think of that might interest Edgeworth, who looked at the bookshelf in interest.
"...I already read all of those, Wright," Edgeworth said.
Of course. He would.
"Um...There's...Watching TV," Phoenix suggested. Edgeworth shot him a warning look.
"...What do you have for board games?" Edgeworth inquired after a pause.
"Um...All we have are Steel Samurai Monopoly, Steel Samurai: The Board Game, Steel Samurai Adventures, and Steel Samurai cards which we could duel with," Phoenix answered lamely.
"...Let's duel, Wright," Edgworth said after seriously considering all options.
"Really?!"
"Well, it certainly would be interesting," Edgeworth responded.
"Um...I guess I can't really say 'no...'" Phoenix walked over to the back room and removed an enormous tin box of cards.

Spoiler: Poems Galore Part 9
"Now, Mr. Wright," Shelley said in the empty boys' bathroom. "We have a serious problem here."
"Um...What would that be?" Phoenix asked, playing stupid to stall for time as he stared at the dagger which, he assumed, would be the very one to take his life.
"Mr. Wright, you are the only one here who recognizes me. Ms. Fey and that kid won't get the chance to see me since I'll be gone before they even audition. That only leaves you. And, you see, I don't take chances," Shelly explained calmly, grabbing his dagger and pointing it at Phoenix with a sickening gesture. Phoenix gulped.
"Um...I don't know who you are. I swear!" Phoenix lied.
"Wrong, Mr. Wright. That poem you said...Was triggered because of me. It's too late for you to lie your way out of this one," Shelly said, walking closer to Phoenix, who backed away to give himself more room.
"B-but...I have a different poem!" Phoenix shouted, panicking.
"A different poem, you say? I'd love to hear it," Shelley responded, stepping even closer. Phoenix gulped.
"Um...'Death,'" he said nervously. "I saw death clearly.
The moonlight reflected off his luminescent skin.
His greasy black hair was in the shape
Of the scythe he held in his hand.
His cadaver gray eyes shone with delight.
When I looked at his twisted smile, I saw...
All the faces of the dead.
Some I recognized.
Most I didn't.
They looked terrified,
As if the afterlife wasn't
What they expected at all.
Then, I looked into his eyes.
His cold, gray eyes.
And I saw...
Visions. Of how everyone I knew
Would die.
I ran away, screaming,
But it was futile.
We all die someday.
And the next time I saw him,
I wouldn't escape," Phoenix recited, attempting to back out the bathroom door as he talked. Shelley, flicked his wrist, and the dagger went flying, attaching Phoenix's pant leg to the ground, between two tiles. Phoenix wouldn't escape unless...
"That was a great poem, Mr. Wright. An example of personification," Shelley said, stepping closer. Phoenix started unzipping his pants. "I might be able to convince the other judges to let you move on. Or not. Now, Mr. Wright. Are you aware of the fact that you are showing me all your vital organs and that I could kill you right now?" Phoenix was stunned for a second.
"Then...Why don't you?" Phoenix inquired, scared out of his wits.
"Let's just say I need you alive," Shelley answered. "For now." Phoenix ripped off his pants and ran. All he could think was, I have to get away. He felt something hit the back of his head, and suddenly he could no longer see as he fell, unconscious.

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DeKiller is scary! *shudder*
Haha, Edgeworth's using Phoenix as a scapegoat.
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"There's law books," Phoenix replied, saying the first thing he could think of that might interest Edgeworth, who looked at the bookshelf in interest.
"...I already read all of those, Wright," Edgeworth said.
Of course. He would.
^It's true. XD
It's Edgeworth after all.


Now, Mr. Wright. Are you aware of the fact that you are showing me all your vital organs and that I could kill you right now?
^Blunt and to the point. XD
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Aw, how cool are these stories. DeKiller for the win!
And I love to imagine that Edgeworth is going to duel with Steel Samurai cards...he's probably a great fan on the inside. That's why he said Will that he was a big fan of his work in the Turnabout Samurai case, even though Phoenix thought he was lying. xD
Great job, Lida! Looks like you're better already so you can write now. I'm really glad! Take care! ^^
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EEEEEK! I just realized how long ago it's been since I've commented here! SO SORRY! I've missed 3 whole updates! Sorry! :(
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So... somehow I thought I replyed sooner.... oh well.

Yay, Shelly~ Everythings becomes scary once he's involved I guess. And the poem was dark yet nice, too. xD
And Edgeworth and Phoenix in a Samurai card duel.... haha, wonder who's going to win. ;D
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@ JasmineJustice: Yeah. DeKiller is the scariest man in all the PW universe.
And thanks for your wonderful comments. ##^^

@ Chess: Yes. Edgeworth probably read over ten times as many law books than Phoenix. :D And I always imagined Shelley would be blunt and to the point with most people he's about to kill. Don't know why, but there would really be no point in him lying to them when he's about to do that. good thing DeKiller needs Phoenix alive, huh?

@ Aliucon: Thanks, sweetie~ I was going to update last night, but I fell asleep before I could. D:

@ IlovephoenixwrightXD: It's okay. You were probably busy irl. :D
Thank you, and I'm fine. Just have to put up with a little pain for a couple more days.

@ Marisa: Yes. Everything's suddenly scary with DeKiller around. He's never there just because he feels like it.
Phoenix vs. Edgeworth. Place your bets. :D

Spoiler: Poems Galore Part 10
"Wright..."
Mm...What? Phoenix thought.
"Wright..." the voice was louder now. Not loud enough, though. Phoenix's eyes remained closed.
"Wright!" Even louder. Still not enough. Phoenix squirmed inside, trying futilely to wake up.
"WRIGHT!" This was the loudest yet. Probably the loudest he could scream, so next he'd have to go right up to his ear...Phoenix's body reluctantly yielded to his mind, and his eyes opened.
"Ugh," he groaned.
"Thank goodness," the man he now recognized as Edgeworth said, sighing with relief. Phoenix stood up.
"E-Edgeworth! What are you doing here?" Phoenix asked.
"The police will be here any minute, Wright," Edgeworth replied.
"The...police? Did something happen?"
"...Turn around, Wright," Edgworth responded. Phoenix turned around and saw a mortifying sight. A dead body. One that was naked and covered in blood. He could make out the bruises despite the blood caked onto them. Phoenix screamed and dropped something. It hit the ground with a clank. Phoenix looked down, and saw what it was. A bloody knife!
His face paled, and he looked at Edgeworth. Is that the...Murder weapon?! He stared at Edgeworth, who slightly nodded his head.
"Wright...Why are your pants off?" Edgeworth inquired.
"Uh..." Phoenix tried to reply. But he couldn't remember.
"...You might want to look in the mirror before the police get here," Edgeworth cautioned.
"Uh...Okay..." Phoenix walked over to the mirror, which had been splattered with blood. He looked down on the way over. The floor was also covered in blood, and Phoenix tried very hard to not step in any. He made it to the blood-splattered mirror, not expecting to see anything. Once he got closer, he realized there was enough of the mirror that he could make out his face and shoulder. Phoenix gasped.
His hair...His face...Both speckled with blood. And his shoulders were completely covered in it. His pale face stared back at him.
"I-I don't understand...Edgeworth," Phoenix said. His legs were really wobbly, his vision was starting to fade, but then...
"Okay, pal! You're under arrest!" Gumshoe shouted. Phoenix turned back around, uncomprehendingly.
"Gumshoe..."
"I-I'm sorry, Mr. Wright...But I have my orders. It looks like you did this, pal, and...I have to make an arrest, so..." Gumshoe explained sadly.
"But, you don't really think I did it, do you?" Phoenix asked.
"Of course not, pal! I'll investigate this and see if there's anything wrong with the evidence. We'll find out who really did this," Gumshoe replied reassuringly. Phoenix nodded and Gumshoe walked over to him.
"Do you...Want me to read you your rights, pal?" he inquired.
"N-no, that's okay, Gumshoe. Just...I didn't do it! And...And don't tell Pearls..." Phoenix replied, his thoughts scattered in a million places now. None of them coherent. He felt the handcuffs encasing his wrists and he was marched off to a police car waiting outside.

Spoiler: Honesty Is Not Larry's Virtue Part 10
"Looks like I get to go first, Wright," Edgeworth said, smirking. He beat Phoenix at the preliminary "Rock, Paper, Scissors" match that determined who went first.
"I play Steel Samurai," he announced, putting down the card.
"No! You have that already?! But that's the best card..." Phoenix complained.
"Not yet, Wright. He gets 500 more attack points for every card he defeats," Edgeworth responded. "Better have a good card, or you're pretty much toast."
I can't believe how much he enjoys this... Phoenix thought, staring at his hand. All he had was a bunch of traps, most of which would be useful if he had anyone to protect his own..."Samurai Points." There was another version where you go by "Samurai Levels" and the first to 100 won, but both Phoenix and Edgeworth decided this way was less complex.
"I play...'Magistrate's Evil Hand,'" Phoenix responded. "Not only do I steal 500 of your Samurai Points, but I also weaken the Steel Samurai, bringing his attack points down to a measly 200. Plus, when I play the Evil Magistrate, he would get 1000 more attack points."
"But you don't have him yet, do you?" Edgeworth asked.
"N-no..." Phoenix replied. "In fact, it's your turn again." Edgeworth raised an eyebrow.
"Okay, Wright. Prepare to meet your maker," Edgeworth warned.
"Yeah...Whatever, Edgeworth. I'll beat you like I always do," Phoenix retorted. "In court."
Edgeworth scowled and picked up a card...

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Phoenix vs. Edgeworth. Place your bets.
^Edgeworth. Hands down.


good thing DeKiller needs Phoenix alive, huh?
^Very good thing.

"Wright...Why are your pants off?"
^The correct response to that is,"I thought it looked good." XD

Framed for murder in a poem contest. That's amazing.

GO EDGEWORTH GO!
Why? Cause Edgeworth never wins in court. XD
So he should win at least once, even if its just in a card game.
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Hahaha, cool! I somehow expected an Yu-Gi-Oh-like game out of the Steel Samurai cards.
Hum...it's difficult to think who will win. I guess I'll bet on Phoenix. Though Edgeworth seems to be enjoying the confrontation and all, he must secretly play it with the Judge and Payne at their secret poker club after trials happen. Yeah, who knows, time changed and they exchanged poker for a bit of Samurai Cards.

And I guess it will be interesting how the Poems Galore case will develop. Keep at it, Lida, you're doing great as always. :D
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@ Chess (and Aliucon): We'll see, won't we? Don't worry. I'll make it so the card game lasts a while so people could change who they're betting for.

@ Chess (alone): Phoenix is glad you think so. :D

Really? I thought the correct response would be: "You know you like it," or, "I did it just for you, Edgeworth." XD

I dunno how I got the idea for it, I just figured: what better motive for DeKiller to let Phoenix live than to have someone to frame for the murder? Oh, and it gets EVEN worse. Trust me. He has to be in jail without any pants on! Remember, they don't let you change your clothes, so...

@ Aliucon: Yes, I shall develop the case and make it the most interesting one I've written in the entire series, which it will be no matter what I do.

Spoiler: Honesty Is Not Larry's Virtue Part 11
"I play the Brave Sword card. This allows me to give my Steel Samurai 800 attack points," Edgeworth said.
"E-eight hundred?" Phoenix asked.
"Yes, Wright. Read the card if you don't believe me. Now, I attack your Samurai Points directly. Now you're down to 4000. In addition, my Steel Samurai gets an additional 500 points for the successful attack. Your move, Wright," Edgeworth replied.
"Then, I play these two cards face down and summon the Evil Magistrate!" Phoenix exclaimed. "He now has 2000 attack points, more than enough to take down your Steel Samurai!" Edgeworth didn't look worried.
"Attack, then," he said calmly. Phoenix was sure he was just putting on the poker face in order to scare him.
"I shall!" Phoenix shouted, immediately regretting it.
"I play, 'Yangu Samurai's Shield,'" Edgeworth said. "This protects the Steel Samurai from being destroyed, as well as my life points. In addition, it brings the Yangu Samurai back from the graveyard and onto the field."
"Objection!" Phoenix shouted forcefully. "First of all, you can't play trap cards from your hand-"
"Come on, Wright. We're not in a courtroom. Put that accusing finger down. And this one is a rare exception. It can be played directly from my hand whenever it's needed, provided, of course, that I-"
"Secondly, you never played the Yangu Samurai card," Phoenix pushed. Edgeworth didn't even flinch or lose his composure.
"I was getting to that, Wright. Provided I sacrifice the Yangu Samurai as soon as I play it, I can play this card at will. If you don't believe me, read the card," Edgeworth argued. Phoenix growled.
Did I just...growl? Over a card game?
"Wright...I can't believe you just did that," Edgeworth said, smirking. "It's merely a child's card game."
"Yeah. I know," Phoenix responded pitifully. "Anyway, it's your turn."

SP: E: 4500
P: 4000

Spoiler: Poems Galore Part 11
"Wright...I have to talk to you," Edgeworth said behind the glass wall of the Detention Center.
"What is it, Edgeworth?" Phoenix asked. He had changed so much since Edgeworth had last seen him. His eyes were no longer shocked and confused. They were instead full of despair. Edgeworth sighed.
"Wright, I'm not really sure how to do this, but..." he replied uncomfortably. "I'd like to request to be your attorney." Phoenix stared at him.
"E-Edgeworth..."
"I do small favors for you all the time, Wright, trying to pay you back for all of your help, but I never did make up for it in the slightest," Edgeworth interrupted.
"...You did, Edgeworth. You helped me so much with..." Phoenix started.
"But nowhere near as much as you helped me," Edgeworth cut in. Both then locked eyes, and an understanding passed between them.
"But Edgeworth, I could be my own attorney. You don't have to do anything to help me. I'll be fine," Phoenix said, but Edgeworth could hear the doubt in his voice. Phoenix never did have a good poker face.
"Wright, no offense, but...I doubt it. You can't investigate, and even if Maya somehow managed to do it for you, it wouldn't be enough. I mean, Detective Gumshoe would let things slip, but nobody else will. And you're not even wearing pants," Edgeworth responded. "Besides, Wright...I'd feel guilty if...If..." If you failed. Phoenix nodded, seeming to get the point.
"...I see...I'll have someone bring you my attorney's badge and...Pearl would have the Magatama," Phoenix explained. Edgeworth nodded slightly.
"Before we do anything else, Wright, tell me what happened," Edgeworth ordered. "Every last detail. And I won't need the Magatama to see if you're lying. You're bad enough at it that I could tell immediately." Phoenix said nothing for a while, trying to decide whether or not to let that last comment slide.
"Okay, Edgeworth. Here's what happened."

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"Yeah...Whatever, Edgeworth. I'll beat you like I always do," Phoenix retorted. "In court."
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Ooh Low Blow Phoenix :edgeworth: :phoenix:
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Lol. I can't say much about Poems. I feel it was kinda filler to prepare for next part.

COME ON EDGEWORTH! BEAT HIM!
XD


Yes, I shall develop the case and make it the most interesting one I've written in the entire series, which it will be no matter what I do.

*dances* HOORAY!
Cases are FUN!
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I've been following this from the beginning, and it is very muchly funnily. I give you:

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It is not merely a children's card game, everyone knows that children's card games are more important than life itself. COme on Phoenix, just believe in the heart of the cards and you can't lose. But beware of Edgey, he has money and can therefore screw the rules. /YGO:TAS references

Anyway, great stories Lida, every one of them has kept me hooked throughout and I can't wait for the court case in the poetry competition.
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Lida_Rose wrote:
Phoenix never did have a good poker face.


:holdit:

...I don't think he just suddenly happened to have a good poker face in AJ though :yogi:
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