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Re: Kristoph Gavin: Ace Attorney (UPDATE 12/07)Topic%20Title
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You forgot ALL the name tags and one mark of punctuation, and you didn't even check the link immediately after posting it...

If you're not going to be paying attention to what you're doing then maybe it's better to not update and wait until you can. Put a little more effort.

EDIT: It appears you've fixed the name tags. But you still overlooked the missing question mark in panel 2. Um, really... No, really... :payne:
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Greeny wrote:
EDIT: It appears you've fixed the name tags. But you still overlooked the missing question mark in panel 2. Um, really... No, really... :payne:

MUST YOU BE SUCH A GIANT NITPICK?! :chinami:
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Greeny wrote:
You forgot ALL the name tags and one mark of punctuation, and you didn't even check the link immediately after posting it...

If you're not going to be paying attention to what you're doing then maybe it's better to not update and wait until you can. Put a little more effort.

EDIT: It appears you've fixed the name tags. But you still overlooked the missing question mark in panel 2. Um, really... No, really... :payne:



Because you never have any spelling errors :P
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BBdoubleB wrote:
Greeny wrote:
You forgot ALL the name tags and one mark of punctuation, and you didn't even check the link immediately after posting it...

If you're not going to be paying attention to what you're doing then maybe it's better to not update and wait until you can. Put a little more effort.

EDIT: It appears you've fixed the name tags. But you still overlooked the missing question mark in panel 2. Um, really... No, really... :payne:



Because you never have any spelling errors :P

Thank you BB. :youngpayne:
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Lind_L_Tailor wrote:
Greeny wrote:
EDIT: It appears you've fixed the name tags. But you still overlooked the missing question mark in panel 2. Um, really... No, really... :payne:

MUST YOU BE SUCH A GIANT NITPICK?! :chinami:

Well, gee, so much for constructive criticism.

And I think forgetting all of the name tags, a question mark that can't be missed and even getting the goddamn link right goes a bit beyond just nitpicky.

Yes, I make mistakes. Good for you. This is related, how? Don't change the subject.
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Greeny wrote:
Lind_L_Tailor wrote:
Greeny wrote:
EDIT: It appears you've fixed the name tags. But you still overlooked the missing question mark in panel 2. Um, really... No, really... :payne:

MUST YOU BE SUCH A GIANT NITPICK?! :chinami:

Well, gee, so much for constructive criticism.

And I think forgetting all of the name tags, a question mark that can't be missed and even getting the goddamn link right goes a bit beyond just nitpicky.

Yes, I make mistakes. Good for you. This is related, how? Don't change the subject.

Excuse me, but I deliberately left those out of the quote, if you'll look. A single question mark though? Really? Is it honestly worth making that much fuss about one peice of punctuation?
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"fuss"

"that much fuss"

"the end of the world"
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Lind_L_Tailor wrote:
BBdoubleB wrote:
Greeny wrote:
You forgot ALL the name tags and one mark of punctuation, and you didn't even check the link immediately after posting it...

If you're not going to be paying attention to what you're doing then maybe it's better to not update and wait until you can. Put a little more effort.

EDIT: It appears you've fixed the name tags. But you still overlooked the missing question mark in panel 2. Um, really... No, really... :payne:



Because you never have any spelling errors :P

Thank you BB. :youngpayne:


You're welcome.

Now fix comic 4 of case 1 like I asked you to last page, in return for sticking up for you.
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Greeny wrote:
"fuss"

"that much fuss"

"the end of the world"

:yuusaku:

Honest to god, I don't even know why I bother making this comic anymore. I'm only ever gonna get bullshit like this for it.

BBdoubleB wrote:
Lind_L_Tailor wrote:
BBdoubleB wrote:
Because you never have any spelling errors :P

Thank you BB. :youngpayne:


You're welcome.

Now fix comic 1 of case 4 like I asked you to last page, in return for sticking up for you.

Did you? Sorry, either I missed that comment or just forgot. I'll go sort it out now.

EDIT: Fix'd it.
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Oh uh, I don't mean to pile another one on you right away, but case 2-25: Elven Prosecutor is dead, too.

I only just now noticed it, honest.
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BBdoubleB wrote:
Oh uh, I don't mean to pile another one on you right away, but case 2-25: Elven Prosecutor is dead, too.

I only just now noticed it, honest.

Don't worry about it. If anyone sees any dead comics then it's much better you let me know.
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BBdoubleB wrote:
Oh uh, I don't mean to pile another one on you right away, but case 2-25: Elven Prosecutor is dead, too.

I only just now noticed it, honest.



I wasn't paying attention and that looked like you were saying that Kohal was going to die in a future comic. D:
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Who's to say he won't? :godot:
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Bad Player wrote:
Who's to say he won't? :godot:

Oyashiro-Tan.
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Why does it not surprise me that Apollo failed Law School? :apollo-shock:

That said here's a theory.
Spoiler: Here It Is!
Apollo, in a fit of college student rage, put the Kick Me sign on Letra's back, which sunsequently snagged on the door. This provided the true killer with the "glove" necessary to sneak into the room and lie in wait for Letra. I think that Brushel is the killer, BTW. No proof comes to mind, but I have that feeling that can only be the gut instincts of a trained AA fan. :keiko:

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Lind_L_Tailor wrote:
Bad Player wrote:
Who's to say he won't? :godot:

Oyashiro-Tan.

...Touche.
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Re: Kristoph Gavin: Ace Attorney (UPDATE 12/07)Topic%20Title
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Bad Player wrote:
Lind_L_Tailor wrote:
Bad Player wrote:
Who's to say he won't? :godot:

Oyashiro-Tan.

...Touche.

...and totally true.-pops out of lurker land-
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Beryl Letra: Bitch of the Year is also broken.
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BBdoubleB wrote:
Beryl Letra: Bitch of the Year is also broken.

Fix'd.
Re: Kristoph Gavin: Ace Attorney (UPDATE 12/07)Topic%20Title
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Lind_L_Tailor wrote:

Honest to god, I don't even know why I bother making this comic anymore. I'm only ever gonna get bullshit like this for it.


Quality > Quantity. Perhaps take constructive criticism without being a douche, and then apply it to your comic, then people would cease pointing out flaws :/
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Percei wrote:
Lind_L_Tailor wrote:

Honest to god, I don't even know why I bother making this comic anymore. I'm only ever gonna get bullshit like this for it.


Quality > Quantity.

When did I ever argue otherwise?

Anyway, i've taken consturcuctive criticism. The same constructive criticism. Over and over. And being lectured about it is a giant pain in the ass.

Frankly, the way of thjs case is already set. I wish I could change it and save it from being the abyssmal failure that it is, BUT I CAN'T, OK?! I've taken all the damn complaints into consideration for the next case, and plan to do the same for case 4 when i'm done scripting it.

Now, can I pease stop hearing the same crap i've already heard about why case 2 sucks and why I will never be as great as Greeny now? Please? :chinami:
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I wasn't saying you don't listen.

1) You don't take it well. You complain about it every time someone mentions it.

2) You don't apply what's told to you, and as a result, people keep bringing up the same things, because you never fix them.

It's a vicious cycle that could easily be rectified.
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Percei wrote:
I wasn't saying you don't listen.

1) You don't take it well. You complain about it every time someone mentions it.

2) You don't apply what's told to you, and as a result, people keep bringing up the same things, because you never fix them.

It's a vicious cycle that could easily be rectified.

1) Every time? EVERY TIME? Let's go back a few pages, shall we? I've taken it well most times. But honestly, i've read the same lecture several times now and i'm really getting pissed off with it. A simple "You missed the nametags" would do. And frankly, a typo every few comics isn't exactly crippling.

2)I do, but it so very often slips my mind.
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I think the biggest complaint is the spelling and grammar (mostly regarding punctuation). That and mistakes like no nametags. I've seen very few plot complaints, other than the investigation lasting too long. And you've already said that this investigation is almost over. So just take it a bit slower and check for nametag, spelling and punctuation errors, and everything should be fine.

A random thought/question: Is Ian going to have any significance after this case? Is he going to be a recurring character?
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BlackJack wrote:
A random thought/question: Is Ian going to have any significance after this case? Is he going to be a recurring character?

Yes.
Re: Kristoph Gavin: Ace Attorney (UPDATE 12/07)Topic%20Title
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Well, to be honest, about every sprite comic I've seen has some sort of spelling or grammatical error sometimes...Maybe I just notice them since I edit stories a lot, but still...

Don't quit, Lind. This case is not a failure. You just sometimes forget to put names in name tags or make the occasional spelling/grammatical error. Quite honestly, at the rate you make these, I admire how few of these mistakes there are. :D

Yay! We got to see Ian after this case. xD
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Considering the popularity of this, I hardly think a case is a failure.

Also, unless there are constantly extreme spelling and grammar mistakes (which there definitely aren't), I don't think grammar and spelling can really cause a case to be a "failure"... it mostly depends on the plot, characterization, logic, etc.
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I should probably clarify that I don't call this case a failure because of the odd grammar slip-up or missed tags, I call it a failure because I generally consider it a bad case. And no, i'm not going to quit, i'm just going to finish the rest of the case with something of a chip-in-the-shoulder about it. All with the hope of getting to case 3, which, with any luck, will be quite good.
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Well, it wasn't clear when you were like "stop talking about grammar, I know this case is a failure" >_>
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Bad Player wrote:
Well, it wasn't clear when you were like "stop talking about grammar, I know this case is a failure" >_>

True, that's why I felt I had to clarify. But really, the logic that Greeny and Percei seem to be running on, that the odd visual problem seriously hinders the case, really doesn't hold up very well. That's like saying Minor Threat are a shitty band just because their music is underproduced.
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Keep going, Lind! WHO THE HELL DO YOU THINK WE ARE!?Image
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Keep going, Lind! WHO THE HELL DO YOU THINK WE ARE?!Image

Fix'd.

Also, why does my emote look weird on a CR background? :eh?:
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Looks fine to me. :godot:
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Keep going, Lind! WHO THE HELL DO YOU THINK WE ARE!?Image


I think this sprite topic just got manly.
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SaraVera wrote:
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Keep going, Lind! WHO THE HELL DO YOU THINK WE ARE!?Image


I think this sprite topic just got manly.

Reference to my sprite topic? :yuusaku:
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Lind_L_Tailor wrote:
SaraVera wrote:
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Keep going, Lind! WHO THE HELL DO YOU THINK WE ARE!?Image


I think this sprite topic just got manly.

Reference to my sprite topic? :yuusaku:

It works regardless. :hobolaugh:
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lolwhut? :sillytrucy:
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... I drew Kurtis?
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Glace Leau wrote:
... I drew Kurtis?

lol You should have said that. I thought it was random Kristoph fanart. :sillytrucy:
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