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Hey everyone. so I have been trying to make some sprites and made some. They may not be great, but hey. I might redo them later on. Criticism is welcome, and highly wanted.

Miles Edgeworth: Ace Attorney Sprites
Alex Cetera-
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Senior detective of Miles Edgeworth: Ace Attorney, a fangame you should ALL play. Thinking of adding more poses.


Anais -
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Witness to Case 2. Not working on sheet until I finish Angelo.


Angelo -
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Defendant of Case 2. I got about 2 poses done for him.


Stephen Infero: Ace Attorney
Stephen Infero
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Fails
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A sheet for the Queen of Hearts from Alice in Wonderland. Not very good. Made from a random idea that might have came from too much time watching Disney(with my cousin. It's wasn't fun. For every 1 good movie there was 2 HSM's or Hannah Montana's)

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A combination of Apollo, Nick, and Edgey. Inspiration from Powerdrone311's(from AAO) avatar.

Leon Raage-ImageImage
A detective that will appear in one of my fan cases on AAO/PWLib(maybe). Never going to happen.


That's it for now.
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nice. ill give you critique if you do the same for mine. deal? :) theyre quite nice. i like the queen of hearts best, personally.
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Sure go ahead.
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Okay, so...

Queen of Hearts: Quite nice. Although the neck seems a bit fat... and off, and the hair in some of the tilted ones seems a bit weird, perspective-wise. But nice splicing. Maybe fit a card or heart or spade or something card-related in?

Defense Combo: Bwahahahahahahaah! That's all I can say. Oh, and looks surprisingly natural...

Leon Rage: Shade the jacket a bit more (to match the face shading), and add some more details to it, liek a pocket or a badge or something. Also, maybe change up the hair a bit so it's not UBER-obvious.

All in all, well done for first sprites. Just some shading work to do, and some details.
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kasuchans wrote:
Okay, so...

Queen of Hearts: Quite nice. Although the neck seems a bit fat... and off, and the hair in some of the tilted ones seems a bit weird, perspective-wise. But nice splicing. Maybe fit a card or heart or spade or something card-related in?

Yeah, I'll add something in. It was done quite quick. The hair is Maya's by the way.

kasuchans wrote:
Defense Combo: Bwahahahahahahaah! That's all I can say. Oh, and looks surprisingly natural...

I was going for the lolz, so that's good.

kasuchans wrote:
Leon Rage: Shade the jacket a bit more (to match the face shading), and add some more details to it, liek a pocket or a badge or something. Also, maybe change up the hair a bit so it's not UBER-obvious.
Sure shading and adding is good. Thanks for the advice. And it would be the first case of a series so it should be somewhat obvious. But why not change some things. Also you spelled his name wrong.

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All in all, well done for first sprites. Just some shading work to do, and some details.
Thanks. about do add another. It's only a witness sprite for Klaiver. (Aka, the "OMG what's going on" courtroom view.)
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I am Kasu, hear me roar

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oh sorry i wasnt sure if the double "a" was intentional. so, opinions on mine?
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ok...so i guess i should start out by saying besides the coated tigre there not very good (sorry...just are) now to tell you why...

1.queen of hearts
for one putting her head on the judges body was a bad idea...not only is his sprite abit smaller to begin with but he is also a pw sprite which doesnt work well with AJ sprites unless carefully edited...also by doing so youve cut some of her outlign out and finally blocking a glob of red in one area...crown also has no shading from what i can see.

2.DC
again on the reminder of differences between pw and aj and many ligns from what i see arent there...

3.leon (tigre)
actually its not bad maybe afew pixles here and there but its not a bad splice and recolor

now I know your only a beginner so mistakes happen and hope you continue to try and get better :D
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...Hopefully someday... xD

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The defence one I like pretty much.
He has pretty cool profile aaand...Well...Cool pose.
So forcefull that it's working.

And yea...Some small beginner flaws here and there,
but none of us started from scratches.
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Update- rearranged my sprites into categories and added some new ones. Wow, my older ones failed.
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These are pretty good sprites, especially Stephen Infero!
Keep up the good work! :godot:
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