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For future reference: Taffy's above post before he edited it was : "I love Franziska/Maya! C. Gholy, any chance we'd be seeing some fics or pics?" He posted the same message on the "Favorite PW Pairings: Part Two" thrad, and posted it here specifically to piss P/M supporters off.
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Phoenix (or Maya... I could see her do it
) decides to setup a feign death to let Maya declare her undying love for him. Pearls heard Phoenix talk 'bout this with Edgeworth and decides to tell Maya. Maya is in heaven at the thought of Nick loving her, but decides to learn Phoenix a lesson for not just telling her 'I love you'. She's going to the hospital to visit Nick. Phoenix, whose pretending to be asleep, heard a familiar voice coming his way. Maya... looks really sad when she enters his room. (Phoenix, not knowing she's pretending to be sad, feels really sorry for her) Maya says she needs to tell something to him, even if he can't hear her. Phoenix is just waiting for three words to be said before kissing her senseless. Wait... what?!?! MAYA'S ENGAGED WITH EDGEWORTH?!?! The monitor showing his heartbeat suddenly stops beeping. ---
It probably will end up OOC, but it might be fun for someone to write something in those lines.
Anyway, really enjoyed your fanfic Justis... I felt pretty bad for Phoenix, must be a nightmare wearing a maid costume all day... the ending was sweet though.
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I will pass on it, since I don't have any experience with fanfictions. I will keep myself on the artside, which takes a lot of my spare time... so if you want to do this idea, it's all yours.
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BTW, what's next Saturday's ffic going to be about?
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) decides to setup a feign death to let Maya declare her undying love for him. Pearls heard Phoenix talk 'bout this with Edgeworth and decides to tell Maya. Maya is in heaven at the thought of Nick loving her, but decides to learn Phoenix a lesson for not just telling her 'I love you'. She's going to the hospital to visit Nick. Phoenix, whose pretending to be asleep, heard a familiar voice coming his way. Maya... looks really sad when she enters his room. (Phoenix, not knowing she's pretending to be sad, feels really sorry for her) Maya says she needs to tell something to him, even if he can't hear her. Phoenix is just waiting for three words to be said before kissing her senseless. Wait... what?!?! MAYA'S ENGAGED WITH EDGEWORTH?!?! The monitor showing his heartbeat suddenly stops beeping. ---
It probably will end up OOC, but it might be fun for someone to write something in those lines.
What, a fake suicide? Or a fake injury?
I know! Maybe Pearl sets up the fake death or suicide and confuses them! Really Phoenix or Maya is just away without the other knowing, but this triggers angst and a love confession from the other.... like Pearl convinces Maya or Phoenix that they've gone on a suicide holiday when they just went on an innocent trip?
Think of the OOC overblown angst...
I like this idea more than I should... Come up with as many plot ideas as you like. We can always use fic plots...
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Awesome prompt! Pity we can't make a Jean/Iris fanclub
Shipping evidence: Jean loves flowers! (Phoenix hates them...)
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Do we have proof that Nick doesn't like them? That'd be awesome.
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I know! Maybe Pearl sets up the fake death or suicide and confuses them! Really Phoenix or Maya is just away without the other knowing, but this triggers angst and a love confession from the other.... like Pearl convinces Maya or Phoenix that they've gone on a suicide holiday when they just went on an innocent trip?
Think of the OOC overblown angst...
I like this idea more than I should... Sounds good! We all gotta' love angst.
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Hmm, you never know what Pearls is able to pull off. Although the first one seems more likely to happen, it still is a very interesting plot to write. I love the idea of your second option, that ffic should be full of fluff. It could be on a snowy day and it's even frickin' cold inside. Fluff guaranteed fo'sho.
What 'bout a train crash, heheh. XD
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I think Pearly once mentioned something about watching TV, and that could have only been in Kurain.
Of course I could just be imagining things....
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I think Pearly once mentioned something about watching TV, and that could have only been in Kurain.
Of course I could just be imagining things....
Haha, sorry for the OT'niss, but I just have to... your avatar is full of epicz win. I love it, hehe.
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Yeah, Pearl watches Kids' Masterpiece Theatre, and is trying to decide whether to watch Jammin Ninja or Nickel Samurai instead.
Yeah, it's in 3-3. (If only that script was online, would make life so much easier) It's when they first enter Tres Bien. I made a note of what they said, but I didn't think to transcribe it word for word
Phoenix: I hate flowers! Their overpowering smell and aroma in here is making me feel sick!
...Wait, aren't girls supposed to be into that stuff though?
Maya; To be honest, I'm not all that into it.
Phoenix: ...
Maya: ...
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Oh well, more incentive for Nick to stick with Maya & Pearl if he doesn't like lightning.
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:It's OK Nick. So what if you don't make a load of money? You're still an awesome lawyer, and tons of great friends. *Akwardly pats him on the back* :Y-yeah...I guess you're right Maya. Thanks. *Pulls her into hug* : Yeah, now what do you say we go celebrate your happiness by getting some burgers. You're buying, of course. : D8
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Stop poking fun at Gumshoe's unfortunate situation!
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Seriously, I do hope Gumshoe gets a raise, he's not that incompetent...But back to P/M. Hmm...Trying to think of a way to start my fic.......
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And for the great news:
MY VID IS READY!
Well, I'll upload it tomorrow(My mom: Go and tidy your room, before I'll punish you. Me: WAIT JUST A MINUTE! *saving the vid and turning off the comp, and then sighing.)
When I finished the vid on the first time, my comp got stuck and I needed to turn him off, and then I got so mad so I deleted all the effects and needed to re-do the vid.
I'm lucky I have my brother, it's not that I have somthin better to do from 10 P.M till 3 A.M when he returns from his poker eve. So I finished today, and tomorrow I'll upload it.
About the fic:
I think that Pearl should plan it all, but then Maya screws up and get hurt for real, and Nick is saving her.
Aww, too cute xD
I can imagine it like this lol.
About Gumshoe- I really love him. He's one of my fav. After Maya and Phoenix and Ema, comes Gumeshoe <3
I do hope he will get a raise.
Justis- about your fic...
I thought about the Luna Park to start the fic(I'm going to write a fanfic at another forum, and there's a whole case about it.)
But the luna Park sounds good to your fic too. Maya and Nick, on a scary roller coaster, aww, I can see it already.
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Oh well, more incentive for Nick to stick with Maya & Pearl if he doesn't like lightning.
Yeah, and pro-P/M. Partners in flower hatred! Maya won't care about his flower disability when he only gives her sunflowers and tulips! I told you they were made for each other...
Maybe am extreme thunderstorm is predicted to hit Kurain(Phoenix doesn't know this), and Pearl invites Phoenix over and leaves them alone together in the hope it will spark a scene where Phoenix comforts Maya. Except Maya notices that Phoenix is really scared of thunderstorms and comforts him instead. (You can't blame him after the 3-1 thing..)
Can't wait for the vid.
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Well, since not many fics have been updated recently, I guess I'll post this. I guess if you look past some of the grammatical errors, it's fine, but I found a lot of them, and it seems kinda unchecked, like it was just written quickly and posted, plus I find the writing style a bit off, for example, Maya says "Pearls", when the correct nickname is "Pearly", and instead of italicizing the the thoughts, brackets show the character thinking. Minor things though. The story does have shifting PoV's from Maya to Nick, and it's an OK attempt for a first fic, but spell checking would've made it much better. Just my thoughts.
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Finally, I've done the vid and uploaded it.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=g6KKuOHwufE
Some of the effects screwed up, so sorry if you will not like it.
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Finally, I've done the vid and uploaded it.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=g6KKuOHwufE
Yay the video!
Dedicated to the Phoenix/Maya fanclub. Aww, isn't that nice.
Well, since not many fics have been updated recently
Yeah, there haven't been many P/M fanfics recently
that one is pretty enjoyable. I just hope it will have a happy ending.
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