Well another spriter here. My sprites aren't the best but some people say that they like them and I work very hard on them so please, if you give me any constructive critisism, be honest and please be nice on doing so. I don't like people saying "They're terrible!" Just "There's a lot of room for improvement" is enough for me to work harder and enjoy it. And requests are open so anyone can request anything and I'll work on it asap. Warning: Few works are GK related and I spoiled myself in just about everything about it so be warned.

Welcome to Nat's sprite thread!




Requests are: ON

My first (crappy) sprites:
Tyson Vincent version 1.0. He's improved later on.


Aang Wind version 1.0. He's in the progress of getting re-done.


Amy Edgeworth, based off Amy. Version 2.0 is also in my : To sprite list.


Now for the real sprites:

Couples sprites.
Phoenix/Franziska






Miles/Maya



Miscellaneous


Phoenix without his hobo-hat.


Front Phoenix. A must do to all the spriters.


The result, of Maya wanting Nick to get a haircut. Completed soon. Maybe.


A sad version of Forward Phoenix.


Jacket-less Edgey.


The Phoenix Fire alchemist. (FMA crossover of epic-ness.)


Hobo-Phoenix without his stubble.


A hand-drawn GK-Nick with the shading in it's proper place.


An office for Tyson. Will get better at locations.

An Edit: Ron deLite without gloves.


Another Edit:
What happens when Edgey lets Tyson give him a makeover:


Another (hilarious) edit:


Recoloured Phoenix:

It's younger Colias Palaeno~!


Anime characters
Alucard


Integra (Both TV and OVA)


Jan Valentine

And, last but certainly not Least:
SERAS VICTORIA!


Smilies

Tyson 3.0. - Smiley mode.


^Maya Fey: Animated smiley. The Court Records one isn't animated.


Edgey smilies.
Creepy... Edgey smiling...


The Aang wind 2.0 preview. Yeah it's gonna be a sprite.


Tyson Vincent: Ace Attorney


Tyson Vincent/Ryu Kimura



Blake Darkus


Younger Tyson, Phoenix and Aang. I have to replace Tyson since I already have another version.


Tina Matsuda and Blue Whiite.


Bakuso Shirio.


Lucas Ario.


A singer for Tyson's band, Lucas Ario. Luke Ario. Get it?
Which one is best? 1.0 or 2.0? And which one is better? The blonde haired one or the black haired one? YOU tell me![/spoiler]
Now, for another OC:
Kelenn Wind! Remake of Aang Wind- Do not see if you haven't won at least AAI case 1.

Here's Gray 2.0 completely from scratch. Not very good but he's only a base for the real thing. Just made him to practice my scratch spriting.

Another OC, yet again: MASSIVE CASE 5 SPOILERS! Open at your own risk.


Rei Shiruu, Lang/Rou's brother.

Miles and Maya's daughter, Misty Edgeworth

---

Last edited by Nat on Wed May 12, 2010 7:37 pm, edited 1 time in total.

That's awesome Nat! I really liked the Phoenix xx Franzy one

---

Totally agree!!! =^^=

---

Thanks guys. I have more running around somewhere... I just have to find them.
Update: More sprites

And that's it. Tune again next time for: Nat's increasing collection of sprites.

---

Although I don't exactly support P/F, your sprites are really good! Keep it up!

---

Thanks. I didn't expect people to like them at all. This really means a lot to me.

---

The oldbag one was funny! XD
Also, these are great sprites! You just keep improving!

---

Thanks! I can't believe you all like them... especially since I just started just a few months ago...

---

Sorry for the double post but I have a HUGE update here.

---

Sorry to nitpick, but in that Godot/Mia one it kinda looks like she's eating his lower jaw. Otherwise, they're okay. ^^

---

I like the jacketless Edgey sprite, but your OCs resemble the sprites they're based on a little too closely, for example, Amy's basically just Maggey with a new top- why not try changing her hair or something? Otherwise, good work XD

---

I was thinking the same thing. Haha

Mia must have been hungry.

Who wouldn't be hungry for that man meat? Rawr. Anyway, it's only a minor problem. :L

---

Well, first of all, try to use less bright colors. I find the blue and red you use are specially eye-hurting. Maybe I'm wrong, but it seems some of the colors you're using are default colors in MS Paint. Don't do that.

Oh, and for outlines, don't use colors that clash with the filling color (example: blue outlines on black hair).

You also seem very lacking in the shading departament. Aang Wind, Luke Ario's face and Amy's dress have next to no shading. Since I'm on the subject of Amy, I suggest you don't call your sprites "OCs" when they're obviously an official character with minor edits.

Also, try to make bases as less obvious as possible. Specially when you use Apollo as a base.

In that Fran+NickWithTheirArmsTogether sprite, I suggest you to revise Nick's right arm, and the outline of his left arm.

In those NickAsGodot/Diego sprites, it would be better if you used their courtroom poses. I think this way they look a bit unnatural.

Regarding your animations, I suggest you to keep every frame the same size.

Rework that Diego+Mia kiss. It doesn't even look like they're kissing.

The Phoenix scratch sprite is a nice start, but the proportions are wrong, as is some sahding and positioning.

The "Rorscharch" sprite has some serious problems. The head is not shaded and looks a bit small for the body. The hat doesn't look like it belongs to that sprite in that pose, and its shading is a bit wrong (and it kinda contradicts the rest of the sprite's). The way in which he holds the glass is completely unnatural. And I don't know if this matters, but it doesn't look much like the actual Rorscharch.

Thanks for the critisism. Well the first three sprites are my worst ever sprites I made that I picked off the palette in MS paint. I though myself to sprite. And with the Diego/Mia kiss... it was a request by someone and I didn't really know how to place it because the sprites really couldn't fit together as well as the P/F one did. As for other sprites, they were done a very long time and I didn't really have as much good sprites as I do now. There's an obvious base because I don't really plan of Frankensteining my sprites much yet. Still have to think for some improvements with that.

---

Aw, your Franziska x Feenie ones were really sweet!
But, I think this has already been stated but what ever, With characters with Black hair I would advise using black as the outline colour and using an off black (grey, w/e) for the main hair colour. (Also refrain from using blue as a outline colour)

And one more thing, try getting some shading in there it will look 10x better once you do!

Huge update! I just modified the first page with all the sprites I have so far. Comment, please. I only want to improve.

---

I see you've improved a lot. Well done ^^ (I love the feenie x franny sprites!)

---