A Portable Peril
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The Story: There is a rip in the portable gaming universe and Larry and Kirby are trying to find help to solve this puzzling mystery and find Franziska Von Karma.
Rules:
#1. Character rules.
Basically, you are allowed to play as anyone from a portable gaming console game. Such as, but not limited to,
AA (duh),
Professor Layton,
EBA,
Pokemon,
Kirby,
Game and Watch,
etc. etc.
Now special character rules are,
Religious figures
Anyone from any home console Kirby game,
Gabe and Tyco of Penny Arcade,
CR account name,
anyone only from the Mario and Luigi series,
and, now this is a biggie, an anime character of your choosing but only one per anime. That means no Naruto and Sauske.
#2. Post who you want to roleplay as before you start playing as them. I'll judge if they follow the rules or if they can progress the story.
#3. If you ruin the basic setup of the story, so help me Croik, I'll flame you.
#4. Have fun. Self-explanatory.
#5. Omnipotence does not extend to things forbidden by the RP's rules.
#6. NO BS. This means you have to tell me what you want to do before doing somthing compleatly wierd.
#7. No doing anything that I might find questionable.
#8. No Killing unless you plan to stop going to this RP then you can kill yourself so nothing confusing happens. If you want to stop for a while incomasitation is ok.
#9. No using loopholes to sneak around any of the other rules.
#10. We have to find Franziska before page 10 (if we have a page 10).
Now my turn to follow rule #2.
I will play the part of Larry and temporarily Kirby.
Edit: I edited out some things that I had and added a few things
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Re: A Portable Peril
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Larry woke up and said "g'd mornin' sugar" in a tired manner, but he got no reply. After this he woke up and saw that he was alone in his bed. This is somewhat strange for him because he had a woman at his house last night but then again this was not, for women often did this to him but he feels that this is different somehow. Then he noticed that there was something on the couch. He went to investigate it. It was a whip. "She'd never leave without this" he said to himself. Then he remembered something. He went to the CD player and checked what was in it and saw that it was The Smashing Pumpkins "Siamese Dream" and, in black sharpie writing, it said "Franziska VonKarma". He said, again to himself, "OK she wouldn't leave without that either, which means that (gasp) she's been kidnapped" and he let out a scream.
Meanwhile, that scream woke Kirby up. He found himself in a little hammock in the corner and he looked around and he was in a strange place he'd never seen before. He remembers being in Wispy Woods with his friends and now he was here. He looked and saw what he thought to be a decent looking dude and said "Hiya".
Larry saw the little creature in it's little hammock in the corner and he went over there. He concluded that the thing wasn't Franziska's kidnapper and he asked in a sad tone "have you seen her" holding up a picture of Franziska and Kirby shook his head. Larry thought about it and asked "do you want to help me look for her" and Kirby nodded. "Great" he said "let's start after we get something to eat" and Kirby liked the sound of that.
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Re: A Portable Peril
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Re: A Portable Peril
Audere est facere.
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I've been away for far too long.
So long, in fact, that all of my signatures now exist behind a paywall.
Bummer.
So long, in fact, that all of my signatures now exist behind a paywall.
Bummer.
Re: A Portable Peril
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angel_of_nature wrote:
((Well, three problems: One is your grammar, and the second is your unclarity of the whole story plot. The third, well, it's a good idea to post a format for joining and an "Applications" place. Just fix your previous posts and you may attract more users. Oh, also don't ask for the username or experience anymore because the first is a given, and the second isn't necessary.))
((umm, I'm not good with grammer and can't see the problems))
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Re: A Portable Peril
Do you see the black one...or the white?
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On April 3, 2016, Court Records Forums experienced a miracle upon that day.
I feel the same
CatMuto wrote:
Pierre wrote:
Man...that looks dull...this actually makes me worried for KH3 (since that team worked on the battle system)
I feel the same
Re: A Portable Peril
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dullahan1 wrote:
Kenny, please just stop. The spelling and grammar of this whole thing is just terrible. I believe if you want to have a good role play, good grammar is a must. You don't have it and you yourself have admitted this. And please learn to spell correctly, it makes reading your posts an eyesore.
((umm, I did spelling corectly but it's the grammer I missed.))
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Re: A Portable Peril
Oh, Mr. Moffat, you card you.
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Kenny 57s list of first-post spelling errors: wrote:
puzzleing [unnecessary 'e']
Charactor [needs an 'e', not an 'o'](made three times)
Basicly [missing an 'al']
limeted [needs an 'i', not an 'e']
Profesor [missing a second 's']
explanitory [needs an 'a', not an 'i']
temparalrily [needs an 'o', not an 'a']
Charactor [needs an 'e', not an 'o'](made three times)
Basicly [missing an 'al']
limeted [needs an 'i', not an 'e']
Profesor [missing a second 's']
explanitory [needs an 'a', not an 'i']
temparalrily [needs an 'o', not an 'a']
((...and you just spelled "correctly" as "corectly".
Putting aside the bluntness of his post, Dullahan has a point. Misspelled words or poor grammar alone (both of which should be fixable, not just repeatedly mentioned yet nothing done about it) wouldn't that big of a deal, but the problem is that both ARE occurring together, and along with (and this is my own personal peeve) a lack of descriptive structure.
To say it briefly:
-Spelling errors (get Firefox web-browser, to help you fix them with auto-spellcheck)
-Grammatical mistakes (just work on that on your own. You CAN get better.)
-Huge lack of clarity (to name a few: your Rule #1 is nearly indecipherable, I'm not even sure what it is mentioning or why there is an "and special character rules are"; the premise to the story seems to have no basis for other players TO come in and RP with you on; the occasional missing punctuation mark makes a reread of what you had previously written mandatory, so as to try and understand the sentence, had the right mark-- comma, closing quote-mark --been there originally.)
Just to be clear, I'm not being mean in my criticism. Even still, I am not going to coddle you with a flimsy resolve or false approval. If you want a Role Play to actually work, you will need to rethink your RP approach before setting one out...
Kenny 57 wrote:
I'm not sure where to go from there so I'll just post the stuff about the roleplay.
...or to have an idea of what you are trying to make in the first place.
))((Now honestly, if there are any further arguments or discussions that need to take place in private, use common sense and don't make them public. A RP thread is for RPing, not criticizing. *coughHYPOCRITEcough*
Posting what should be PMs is what locks threads.))
Re: A Portable Peril
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Misato knocked on the door of Larry's house and waited at the front steps. She then barfed a little, and then threw up again on the grass. She had drank two beers the previous night, and had drank five shots in the morning. She wiped her face and put her makeup on. Then she kicked the door open. "LARRY! WHERE THE HELL ARE YOU?!" she screamed.
Re: A Portable Peril
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"HAHA YOU HAVE COME TO MY LAYER!!!! HOWEVER, YOU HAVE THE WRONG HOUSE!!! THIS IS NOT LARRY'S"
The red haired swordsman threw his head back and laughed madly.
"How dare you kick my door! What has it done to you crazy lady!?"
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Kenny 57 wrote:
I've decided to hop on the bandwagon and start a roleplay. I'm not sure where to go from there so I'll just post the stuff about the roleplay.
The Story: There is a rip in the portable gaming universe and Larry and Kirby are tryingto find help to solve this puzzling mystery and find Franziska Von Karma.
Rules:
#1. Character rules.
Basically you are allowed to play as anyone from a portable gaming console game; these include, but not limited to,
AA (duh),
Professor Layton,
EBA,
Pokemon,
Kirby,
Game and Watch,
etc.
Now special character rules are:
Anyone from any home console Kirby game,
Gabe and Tyco of Penny Arcade,
CR account name,
anyone only from the Mario and Luigi series,
and, now this is a biggie, an anime character of your choice but only one per anime. That means, for example, you cannot use both Naruto and Sasuke.
#2. Post who you want to roleplay as.
#3. If you ruin the basic setup of the story, so help meCroik[Arbitrary name], I'll flame you.
#4. Have fun. Self explanatory.
Now my turn to follow rule #2.
I will play the part of Larry and temporarily Kirby.
Edit: I edited out some things that I had and added a few things
The Story: There is a rip in the portable gaming universe and Larry and Kirby are trying
Rules:
#1. Character rules.
Basically you are allowed to play as anyone from a portable gaming console game; these include, but not limited to,
AA (duh),
Professor Layton,
EBA,
Pokemon,
Kirby,
Game and Watch,
etc.
Now special character rules are:
Anyone from any home console Kirby game,
Gabe and Tyco of Penny Arcade,
CR account name,
anyone only from the Mario and Luigi series,
and, now this is a biggie, an anime character of your choice but only one per anime. That means, for example, you cannot use both Naruto and Sasuke.
#2. Post who you want to roleplay as.
#3. If you ruin the basic setup of the story, so help me
#4. Have fun. Self explanatory.
Now my turn to follow rule #2.
I will play the part of Larry and temporarily Kirby.
Edit: I edited out some things that I had and added a few things
Spoiler: Saving Space
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Re: A Portable Peril
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Just then Jesus entered. He was dressed in a white robe, sandals and Sunglasses.
"Hey" said Jesus. "What are you all doing here"? Jesus was the son of God, and he was willing to sacrifice his life in order to protect the world his dad created.
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*Gives Jesus a taco, because he is freaking Jesus Christ! *
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As Gunnar was about to give Jesus a taco, God materialized from nowhere. Also he was wearing a white robe, sandals and sunglasses, but also a cowboy hat.
"MY SON SHALL NOT HAVE MEXICAN FOOD!", the voice of God bellowed. Then he turned to Jesus and said: "AND STAY AWAY FROM MY DRAWER O' SHADES!"
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Flay turned to him and threw the taco at the wall.
"Why are you all in the defender of justices house?!"
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"Rum", God continued, "is the one thing that is holier than us. You realize, of course, that we can not control something holier than ourselves and we can therefore not produce more. However, albeit almighty, rum is but a liquid and someone did, as my son said, drink it all. Do you understand what this means? We have no rum! Rum is the true ambrosia!"
God's voice became lower and he said: "But rumour has it that you, Gunnar Flay, knows something about rum. You might know who drank it all, or how to get more or even the darkest secrets of it, unknown to even rum itself..."
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He catches the beer and chugs it down, throwing the bottle to the wall as it shattered.
" Only several people come to mind who could have stolen the mighty rum! People from,
AA people
Profesor Layton,
EBA,
Pokemon,
Kirby,
Game and Watch,
Anyone from any home console Kirby game,
Gabe and Tyco of Penny Arcade,
CR account name,
anyone only from the Mario and Luigi series,
OR AN ANIME CHARACTER!!!!!!"
He smacks a pitcure of a kitty cat
"ONE OF THOSE BASTARDS!!!!"
*suddenly a hole in his ceiling drops cigs and cookies all over the floor*
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Larry went upstairs to find somthing for breakfast when he stumbled on to a bar full of people. "Umm...Hello?" he said. He picked up some rum and asked "Do you think that pink things like rum?"
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"Who let you in my house?! YOU!!! YOU ARE THE RUM THIEF!!! PREPARE TO FACE THE SWORD OF JUSTICE!!!!"
Flay pulls out a sword out of no where, like typical rpg characters, resting the massive sword on his shoulders
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God sat down at a table, snapped his fingers and created a picture of:
AA people
Profesor Layton,
EBA,
Pokemon,
Kirby,
Game and Watch,
Anyone from any home console Kirby game,
Gabe and Tyco of Penny Arcade,
CR account name,
anyone only from the Mario and Luigi series,
AND ALL ANIME CHARACTERS!
He then lit up one of the cigs which had earlier fallen into the room and said: "It's time to plan our plan".
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"The Pink blob must have drank the rum" said JC. "Should we cut him open and get the rum himself or do we get him to turn into more rum for us"?
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Meanwhile Kirby noticed a piece of tape on him. He took it off and it said "Kriby" on it and he gave it to Larry.
Larry looked at the tape and said "is that your name" and Kirby nodded.
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God scratched his neck and continued: "I propose we do as my son says. That's worked in the past."
God then pulled up machete from nowhere and turned to Kirby.
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Kirby then realised that they where fighting about all of that stuff he had eaten. He decided to un-eat it and he began to hack it up. What came out was 35 billion bottles of rum 20 tons of pot and 500 thousand kilograms of cocaine.
Larry looked at the pile and said "WOW, that's alot of stuff".
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"I got a car outside. Let's hit the road before the cops come, GTA style!"
Misato tossed the keys to God and dashed out the front door.
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Misato looked up towards the sky. "At least I didn't get knocked up as a teenager and forced to thus carry the fate of the whole world in my uterus."
She took another swig of beer and lit up a cigarette.
(You've unlocked: The Virgin Mary!)
Re: A Portable Peril
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"Oh ho!!! The rum maker!!!"
Flay gets in the back seat with the window down, holding his sword out the window hitting mail boxes and old ladies because they had a part in the rum stealing 50 years ago.
"Hahahahaha no one can defeat the defenders Of Justice!!!! AND RUM!!!
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"Hey Jesus!" Satan said. "I can't find the rum maker either! Want to team up?"
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